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aaliah3108

@aaliah3108

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Quite a one shot you wrote dear! Loved the free conversation between the young couple. It was V engaging.

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Pilu05

@Pilu05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey Gurleen love to see u here

This OS was so so so Hot and sizzling

Love it

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KambakthIshq

@KambakthIshq

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Jeez Gurleen.. This is breathtaking...uff!!

You are an amazing writer girl👏

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Once again an Amazing OS

I'm loving Dev in your write ups. He is a bliss to read. A complete passionate lover.

He want her so badly but yet he cares about her comfort. It was wonderful experience to read.

Sona is soo cute and innocent. 😳

I love reading conversations in Hindi, cause it is more effective than in English but i sometimes dont get the exact meaning. 🤔

But i loved this. 👏

PS : I love reading long os when it concerns to DevAkshi. ☺️

Keechu.

Edited by Keechu_SwaRon - 9 years ago

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Viji-
That was one Amazing Hot OS😳
Everything was so beautiful, the scene, their talks and their Luveee
Awesome Work Girl👏🤗

Haha, thank you so much Viji! 🤗

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Rianshi
hey.. its amazing.. loved it totally..!!

Thank you! 🤗

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: priyanvs
nice os dear
loved it

Thank you! 😳

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: saumya07
Thank you so much for writing such long OS!! Its amazing.. The way Dev needs Sona's approval ..So much understanding.. Please do write more..

Aww, you are most welcome! 🤗

It wasn't intended to be this long but it just took on a life of its own while I was writing. 😆

I have a few more ideas in mind. Will get to them soon. 😳

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: masooma98
Simply AMAZING!
Loved this sizzling angle of Devakshi!!!

Aww, thank you so much! 🤗

I sometimes get afraid that I'm not deviating too far from their core characters. I mean, Dev is a polite shareef zada. But there has to be a naughty and passionate side to him right? Same with Sona. Baaki sab mamlo mein she's a firecracker but jab intimacy ki baat aati hai toh.. she has to be a bit shy na?

I don't know. It's just all the way I see them in my head as of right now. Whether it's true or not, the PH will decide through its canon. 😆

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: uthraa.m
no words to explain ur os
Every word u wrote are really too great and more passionate...
Plz continue ur work it's too good

Thank you so much! 🤗

Will try to post a new story soon. :)

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