Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 77

Hey Mayu thanks for posting and i just loved reading the update .Do i need to tell you the reasons why i liked it 😉.

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Hi dear...

I don't know Ur name or gender...

But ur story from the first part till 14 is speechless for me...

The way u have depicted the emotions n situations is brilliant...

The meeting, the Separation, the guilt, the reunion everything...

I can not exactly point out any of such that would b disappointing or low execution...

The sequence of emotions n situations along with the characters were👏

I have cried reading each n every part of it...

U r surely the person real from heart...

I have faced such loss at the age of 8... n I can still remember only some bits of it... I have no words to express ur perfection in emotions for his story...

M really very thankful to u to give such piece...

U should surely b a very strong person i must say... n I feel so...

I can understand u situation for delay coz I too have the same chorus of workload...

But thanks to u to manage...

Can u plz send me pm of Ur stories...

Oh hw can I forget the hot part... it was really too hot to handle...

Can imagine the feeling of home after 5 and a half yrs..

Thank you for Ur dedication dear...

Hello dear

Well am Mayu - female 😆

Well am absolutely touched by your so so so Lovely message..

Honestly I don't know whether I deserve huge huge compliments or not .

But am highly touched by your gestures and for that am saying thank you to you Dil Se ..

Well this is my first and so far only one story - I have ever written - that too because my Frnds in forum forced me to write it .. So because of their pressure I had started writing . In short if I write more story will let you know now( even if you don't want it ) .

Glad to know you enjoyed it and sorry for tears

Originally posted by: yyy

Hey Mayu thanks for posting and i just loved reading the update .Do i need to tell you the reasons why i liked it😉.

The episode was super hot and consummation between Devakshi was due from long time .Good they got some time for themselves . Hope to see desperate Sona ...we have always seen Dev initiating time for Sona to take control 😆..we would never get to see in the show ,at least in your update i hope to see bold Sona .😳

Another thing i loved is the conversation between Devki and Dev ...omg it was super cute .He has learnt how to handle his naughty daughter .Whenever i read "Terror Devki" i cant stop smiling .She is indeed a terror for her grand parents .She is cutie pie .

Hi Neetu

Hope I didn't cross limit of adult content . Good to know you like it ..

Do you want bold Sona ??omg nice advice .. So far even I didn't realised that Sona being so much straight forward and frank but when it comes to IT she is passive and doesn't take initiative .

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Mere to pasine chut gaye tera update padhke...it was hot...agla part jaldi chahiye...

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

That was damn hot !!!

Amazing update :)

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Fantastic and Sizzling chapter

Finally Sonakshi and Dev become one in mind body and soul

I really like how Dev has mastered the art of dealing with Devki that was simply great another highlight was Ishwari asking Asha and Daadi to come home and that indeed was such a great kind gesture I just loved that about Ishwari

Originally posted by: mygaby

☺️

Originally posted by: glassballs

Awesome dear ...
Hawewttt

Nice update
Loved it
Liked the way Dev spoke to devki
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm