Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

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Posted: 8 years ago

#751

Mere to pasine chut gaye tera update padhke...it was hot...agla part jaldi chahiye...

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#752

That was damn hot !!!

Amazing update :)

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#753

Fantastic and Sizzling chapter

Finally Sonakshi and Dev become one in mind body and soul

I really like how Dev has mastered the art of dealing with Devki that was simply great another highlight was Ishwari asking Asha and Daadi to come home and that indeed was such a great kind gesture I just loved that about Ishwari

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: sririt
Such a hot update
It was nice that Bose Family is here
IshWari-Sona, moments are nice

Devki is a terror
Everyone is scared to handle her in the absence of Devakshi
Glad Devakshi had their much needed time

@ Bold:

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well am glad you like it

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Edited by mayu1982 - 8 years ago

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: sneharay
Hot update..

well am glad you like it

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: vssdp
Awesome and hot one
Fantastic update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

well am glad you like it

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: _RS_
Omg.. that was just so HOT ☺️
The time when Ish n Sona hugged it actually brought tears to my eyes..
So good 😳

@ BOLD: yeah mother in law and daughter in law relation are difficult to understand yet both are attached by one common man.

Sorry for tears dear..😊

well am glad you like it

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: srilotus
It all happened after 5 years...yeh toh hona hi tha
V hot part

And for the comment

Edited by mayu1982 - 8 years ago

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: Soumya23
Erotic...
I was blushing reading it...
Next update jaldi Karne koi koshish karo Mayu😊

Dear I have two kids plus household chores plus ... endless list of stupid work

More importantly i dont have any keechu bhaiya in my life.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#760

Hi dear...

I don't know Ur name or gender...

But ur story from the first part till 14 is speechless for me...

The way u have depicted the emotions n situations is brilliant...

The meeting, the Separation, the guilt, the reunion everything...

I can not exactly point out any of such that would b disappointing or low execution...

The sequence of emotions n situations along with the characters were 👏

I have cried reading each n every part of it...

U r surely the person real from heart...

I have faced such loss at the age of 8... n I can still remember only some bits of it... I have no words to express ur perfection in emotions for his story...

M really very thankful to u to give such piece...

U should surely b a very strong person i must say... n I feel so...

I can understand u situation for delay coz I too have the same chorus of workload...

But thanks to u to manage...

Can u plz send me pm of Ur stories...

Oh hw can I forget the hot part... it was really too hot to handle...

Can imagine the feeling of home after 5 and a half yrs..

Thank you for Ur dedication dear...

Edited by Chandniyati - 8 years ago