Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 73

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhk26


Dun be sorry dear! We sail in the same boat😭
Destiny played cruel with us...
But I always remember my mom's words when she use to console ppl saying " Jo chale Gaye unke piche hum to ja sakte nahi.. jab tuk zindagi hai jini to padegi... Apne liye na sahi.. apno ke liye hi sahi"
Hope her words would help a few in their hard times..
🤗hugs for it always feel better!!!
Update soon for i always keep waiting!!
Dhara



Hi dhara
Your mom said absolutely correct things .

Indeed we are sailing in the same boat

Hopefully we will learn to remember him without tears in eyes

Love you dear
Huggies
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: srilotus

Kya bolun...
heart wrenching chap.
beautifully written



Thank you for appreciating it .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Emotional and beautiful



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next chapter kab aaega???? 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum stry. .
read all prts in 1 go..
totlly luvd it...
Especially choti Devki and her naughtiness and cuteness...
I laughed very much while readind cow part..It was very funny...
Each and every chapters were awsum..
plzz updt nxt prt soon..
And if possible plz pm me :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mayu sorry for not replying sooner...it took so long so I decided to write here instead of editing my ReS post.
It was a such a emotional part and I can relate to each and every emotion Sonakshi felt when she got the news ...at the same time it was so heart touching to see Dev and Devki's part...aww love the father daughter moment .


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely os i love devki after all she is the sign of our dear devakshi love Even i suggest a nick name for her Pari i love this name
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mayu...your first OS...and it is so beautiful...
Emotions,Love,Responsibility,passion...you have put in all the feelings in this OS...
I have started with the chp1 but it was so gripping that I completed all 13 chptrs at one go...
Devki the naughtiest and cutest...the way you have described the girl was amazing...

Losing a dad is not easy...ur last chapter made me cry...remembering my days with my dad...how much I miss him and how I missed to tell him RIP...

It is a heart touching OS Mayu...cannot write any more...this truly shows the shades of Love...just like our show...Hats off!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Though silent reader joined this forum to appreciate few of my favourite writers in this forum...your are one among them...love this ff and your writing...keep do writing...

P.s. Whenever I get bored I read your FF (esp.. For devaki..) again and again...

Edited by Jo2345 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey ...
Read it whole in a go...
Loved it...
Add me...
Continue soon

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