Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated

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fatima rukia

@rukiaa

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#731

LAst chapter is so emotional.😭 It so hard to control my tears.💔
P.S Your OS is always beautiful. It has everything from sadness to romance to cuteness, naughtiness. Perfect.👏
Thanks for PM. Sorry for being late.

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#732

Lovely update

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#733

Very emotional update
Thanks for pm

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: gdfss
Next chapter kab aaega???? 😲
Missing Mayu lens

IF se fight chal rahi hai meri aajkal..😆

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: binuuu
awsum stry. .
read all prts in 1 go..
totlly luvd it...
Especially choti Devki and her naughtiness and cuteness...
I laughed very much while readind cow part..It was very funny...
Each and every chapters were awsum..
plzz updt nxt prt soon..
And if possible plz pm me :)

Thanks dear for comment and

am super glad you like it.. 😳

and sorry for late comment.. IF is giving me hard time these days ..Hope you understand..

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: sneharay
Emotional update..

Thanks for the comment😊

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: yyy
Hey Mayu sorry for not replying sooner...it took so long so I decided to write here instead of editing my ReS post.
It was a such a emotional part and I can relate to each and every emotion Sonakshi felt when she got the news ...at the same time it was so heart touching to see Dev and Devki's part...aww love the father daughter moment .

Hi Nisha ..

Thank dear for the comment

am super glad you like it.. 😳

and sorry for late comment.. IF is giving me hard time these days ..Hope you understand..

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: sona43
Lovely os i love devki after all she is the sign of our dear devakshi love Even i suggest a nick name for her Pari i love this name

Thank dear for the comment..

Love Pari name .. But I can't change it at this moment...Wished you have read it before😭 and suggested this name

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: Soumya23
Mayu...your first OS...and it is so beautiful...
Emotions,Love,Responsibility,passion...you have put in all the feelings in this OS...
I have started with the chp1 but it was so gripping that I completed all 13 chptrs at one go...
Devki the naughtiest and cutest...the way you have described the girl was amazing...

Losing a dad is not easy...ur last chapter made me cry...remembering my days with my dad...how much I miss him and how I missed to tell him RIP...

It is a heart touching OS Mayu...cannot write any more...this truly shows the shades of Love...just like our show...Hats off!!!!!

Thanks dear for comment and

am super glad you like it.. 😳

Loosing dad or someone close is very difficult to deal with. I understand your feelings and pain .. Sorry in any case I have hurt you in any way..

and sorry for late comment.. IF is giving me hard time these days ..Hope you understand..

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

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Posted: 8 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: Jo2345
Though silent reader joined this forum to appreciate few of my favourite writers in this forum...your are one among them...love this ff and your writing...keep do writing...

P.s. Whenever I get bored I read your FF (esp.. For devaki..) again and again...

Thank you dear for appreciating it .. It really means alot to me..😳

and sorry for late comment.. IF is giving me hard time these days ..Hope you understand..