Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 39

Awesome dear..I am liking the way story is progressing. ..OMG Devki is such a brat ...that medicine drama was so hilarious ...she is so adorable...feeling little bad for Bijoy...it would be interesting to see how Sona would react after marriage ..I am excited like always for the next part...

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mayu di a big hug 🤗 luv u
i have become a fan of ur writing

totally superb update and emotional too 👏
dev' concern for devki and sona was nice and after that loved their emotional scene in cabin. 😭
no matter how much they try to be away but they are the only solace for each other.

totally loved ishwari - dev scene. you kept the scene very real where dev didn't actually blamed ishwari but just opened up about his feelings to his mother like a kid.

loved mamaji there.
felt bad for bijoy 😭 and loved dev and bose family scene.dev' guilt and sona's hesitation was totaly justified.

i hope dev sooths all the pain sona had to bear in last 7 years by his love.

for ishwari i would say " der aye durust aye"

for devki awww she is my fav ❤️ she is soo naughty and so smart full on taking situation ka advantage. 😉

keep writing di
thanx for pm
sorry for late, was busy with something.

Okay, my fav character of your story = Devki 😉

Wow... Just wow...
Yeh keya Kia apne di 😲 😲 😲 ...
U won't believe ... I am crying 😭 😭 ...it was so so heart tauching
Dev & sona convo in sona's cabin ... Nd then Dev & Ishawri convo ... I just can't control my tears
Hats off u di 👏 👏 ... Thanks a lot Mujhe rulane ki liye...
Aiche OS liye to main khushi khushi ru sakti hu

Nd lastly...our devki( Drama queen) ne Mujhe to hasne pe mujbor Kia...she is so cute...
Finally... DevAkshi ki shadi 🥳 🥳 ... Yeahhh

Egerly waiting for that
Late maat karna... 😉 😉

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... Just wow...
Yeh keya Kia apne di 😲 😲 😲 ...
U won't believe ... I am crying 😭 😭 ...it was so so heart tauching
Dev & sona convo in sona's cabin ... Nd then Dev & Ishawri convo ... I just can't control my tears
Hats off u di 👏 👏 ... Thanks a lot Mujhe rulane ki liye...
Aiche OS liye to main khushi khushi ru sakti hu

Nd lastly...our devki( Drama queen) ne Mujhe to hasne pe mujbor Kia...she is so cute...
Finally... DevAkshi ki shadi 🥳 🥳 ... Yeahhh

Egerly waiting for that
Late maat karna... 😉 😉

Aww so cute Devki.

Awesome update 👏
Eager for the next part
pl continue soon
can't wait

Nice update. Devki is fully dramatic.

wow...wow..Mindblowing Mindblasting..
awww cute devki so naugthy...
love sona and dev emotional talk..
precap..yeee more interesting..sona dev marrige..
missing... sona dev cute noke joke i hope after marrige.. wo tum zarur likhugi..
ur brilling writer..