Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rukiaa

How beautifully you potrayed each and every person emotion...the separation scene...so beautiful and sad...i got tears in my eyes in that scene...😭

You are so amazing ...LOVED IT...<3
Cant wait for next part now..😆



@ bold : Breakup are not always right or wrong.

Although never fall in real love.. 😆 so I, personally , really don't know how one must have felt at the time of doing breakup... 😃 Am sure it must be very disturbing and challenging.




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Part 1

Fantastic Start

Dev and Sona have broken off and she returns after five years but it also seems that she has a daughter Devki



OK so you are on part 1-

Links are already given for on page 1 - part 1 to part 7.

Used that it will be very easy for you to read


Glad you like it and thanks for the comment😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome update

Your representation of story is really beautiful and perfect
Continue soon and thanks for the pm dear



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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2

Just Fabulous Update

Sona meets Ishawri and Mamaji at the doctors rooms and both got surprised on seeing Devki as she is replica of Dev but Ishawari seems to be some denial while Mamaji makes her understand
and I do think its difficult for Sona too how will she explain about her child
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3

The story is just getting more interesting
Dev comes to the hospital and unknowingly enters Sona's cabin seeing Devki he too is surprised as she looks exactly like him he strikes up a conversation with her and Sona seems rude with him something must have had happened that she still has anger for Dev
Dev seems to be very intrigued with Devki while Sona does not want Devki speaking to him as he might find the truth
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4

Dev's anger is justified its also true been a lover and been a father is two different aspects here both Dev and Devki lost out on time but again Sona is not completely at fault as she and Dev broke up already and circumstances made her to keep quiet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Each nd every part of ur OS is so so beautiful...
Plz PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5

The blouse and petticoat scenes were actually hilarious and it did show Sona's innocence as well as Dev's
both making love to each not because of circumstances but because they love each other it was not a weak moment but a moment of love
Edited by Jade0001 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6

This update held a mixture of emotions but I liked the fact that Dev took the step to spend time with his daughter they moments together was blissful I totally loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 7

Such a sad and emotional part , I felt sad for both Dev and Sona now they have to sacrifice their love its always something where a obedient child that loves his mother or parents first makes them happy and like this after Dev had heard his mothers words of praise how can he shatter her then her heart attack its impossible now to tell her that he loves Sona true Sona told him that she understands and their love is not weak that it will harm their parents and hurt them but yes she is indeed broken too

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