Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 36

Originally posted by: Sp8699

Nice so this is the secret, Ishwari will come with the proposal of Devakshi marriage

Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt

again a superb update mayu di 👍🏼
loved how u have shown dev's helplessness and guilt, he doesn't want to loose sona but cant do anytging abt it. 😭

so having a loving heart he sets her free but at the same time doesn't want that. i had tears in my eyes while reading that office conversation part.

u said right the day dev losses sona, ishwari looses dev and the real dev also lost somwhere.

loved tina more in this part.she is a sweetheart and understans dev more than his own family.

update soon
thankz for the pm.

Originally posted by: swan_krpk

You are such a wonderful writer... I was thinking ther had a big big fight, but this looks so realistic...Keep up the work..Thanks for the PM..And I am already waiting for the next part :)

Originally posted by: pooji145

awesome...very emotional..update missing devki cute talk...w8ing for
sona and dev intence and emotional conversation...& romance

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

Great going Mayu !

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Loved it

Please update the next part soon

Originally posted by: parsh-lover

Anazing and awsome part.
All the emotions are beautifully described. Loved it.
Thank You For pm.
Update soon.

Originally posted by: andy1245

vry emotional n interesting update was waitng fr ur update plz cont asap

Originally posted by: salmansultan

Yaar Mayu..what a writer u are! I was crying while reading the story..totally loved it..jaldi se next part update karo..ab raha nei jara..