DevAkshi OS- Orange (Note on pg 8) - Page 4

Do I need to say anything? It is beautiful! I see you've expressed your view of love being a choice in this OS very well! I agree with that view as well. And their love standing strong inspite of the adversities was beautifully written. And, this time, there are no spelling mistakes! 😆

P.S. Even I too seem to be finding orange everywhere these days. 😆

P.P.S. You are 20? Sorry, I couldn't help but read your comments! :P
For 20, you are a fabulous writer. I am 16, will be 17 soon.

Originally posted by: randommusings

Great OS dear. You have perfectly described Dev - Sona's future and how they will balance their family responsibilites with their love story. How you have described that they would walk together on parallel paths ..always with each other but never actually coming together. This reminds me of the initial promos of the show.

Loved it.

- Abi

Originally posted by: sammy8182

Iml so glad and with all humility feel nice tht my comment got appreciated by you ...BUT i luv kick in my thoughtss & something like ur os came across couldnt resist but to appreciate the beauty of ur writing...

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

Do I need to say anything? It is beautiful! I see you've expressed your view of love being a choice in this OS very well! I agree with that view as well. And their love standing strong inspite of the adversities was beautifully written. And, this time, there are no spelling mistakes! 😆

P.S. Even I too seem to be finding orange everywhere these days. 😆

P.P.S. You are 20? Sorry, I couldn't help but read your comments! :P
For 20, you are a fabulous writer. I am 16, will be 17 soon.

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..loved it

sorry for being late...😆
wow...amazing...thats so superb yar..really enjoyed it...👏❤️

Hello Pari !!!

Originally posted by: rukiaa

sorry for being late...😆
wow...amazing...thats so superb yar..really enjoyed it...👏❤️

This is going to be a little random, but I have been following a Rukia and Byakuya fanfic for over three years now 😆
And no babes, you aren't late at all! I am glad you commented and I am glad you liked this OS even more ❤️

Originally posted by: ammu3

Hello Pari !!!

Wonderful OS .. I must say you have a beautiful way with words, really. I could really put myself into each and every word out there...

Orange is indeed a beautiful colour ; and a unique colour that KRPKAB has chosen to portray love ...

And you have completely justified that use in here ...and extra credit for the thought put into this topic as to write upon - very creative ...

Once agin hats off

Hello Akashara! I think I spelt your name incorrectly, don't kill me. Can I call you Aks? I am very lazy when it comes to typing 😆
I am glad you think so, if I wasn't so into medicine and treating people I would have pursued to be a writer for sure. But right Now I am very content with just writing on tv characters!
Orange is a very neglected colour in my opinion but this show has brought out its allure ❤️

@Bold: THANK YOU SOO SOO MUCH! I was just kind of writing it down and it struck a chord so I just went with the flow of it all. I am glad you like this ❤️

Illiterate baboon! Oh god! I never said that. Did I give you that impression? 😆 I didn't mean to. And you are anything but a baboon. Afterall, baboons cannot write such wonderful pieces. :)

Yeah! I've read all your views on love. Stalker me! I know. But, I loved your views. They are very, umm, matured? Yeah, that seems like the most apt word! And I like matured thoughts.

P.S. Haha! I can imagine the expression on your friend's face. 😆 When I fangirl over things, my friends give me pretty much same expressions.