DevAkshi OS- Orange (Note on pg 8) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

Illiterate baboon! Oh god! I never said that. Did I give you that impression? 😆 I didn't mean to. And you are anything but a baboon. Afterall, baboons cannot write such wonderful pieces. :)

Yeah! I've read all your views on love. Stalker me! I know. But, I loved your views. They are very, umm, matured? Yeah, that seems like the most apt word! And I like matured thoughts.

P.S. Haha! I can imagine the expression on your friend's face. 😆 When I fangirl over things, my friends give me pretty much same expressions.

Originally posted by: basket_101

So I'm removing the previous comments but it's still a reply :P

I won't lie, for me, I was a fan of Sukriti as Riddhima. Though the reason for that is because I started watching it around the time of the concert (if you still remember). That was when her acting had improved too, so that's how it started 😆 I began writing due to DMG, so regardless of how I feel about the show now, I still credit it for evoking the writer within me :P

I stopped watching the show after Shilpa left, I tried I really did but Sukriti just wasn't basket for me! Armaan on the other hand was and will always be my first love😳

I think I started writing on SanDhir! Loved the initial concept of the show!

Yes that is so truee! I am quick to find mistakes in others' works, but then comes time to edit my own work, and I always think, "Oh this is good, there's no mistake"

But only to be proven wrong of course :P

AT least you bother to proof read, I am such a lazy person who doesn't even read what I type. I was almost scared I had typed "Orange" incorrectly in this OS😆

Awwwh, haha. I promise I'm not being extra with my comment 😆 And you are right 😳

I too am a writer ^_^ Or try to at least 😃

In fact I read your comment on Espresso Love :D I shall reply as soon as I have the next part ready (yes, that is how the schedule goes, hehee)

I have also written 2 OS on this forum (the links of which I'll PM to you with the edit (: )

READ AND EDITED! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!

Hahaaa 🤗

I hope to see you around more often ^_^

I am pretty extra. I don't leave people I talk to😆

And please do take care and not injure yourself 😆

I try but I am just prone to injuries😆

Love, Hinal 😳

More Love, Pari🤗

Originally posted by: c85rie

Beautiful.. Your description of orange was so apt. And the way you made it relate to Dev, Sonakshi and their love story 👏

But please write more on this... Picture abhi baaki hain..

Originally posted by: Jhalak29

Hi this is the first time I am reading your work must say it was great...
not many people can create the Depth the way you have created.
Also I love the core thought that to commit one self to someone you dont
need a relationship with name... when ever I think of dev n Sona & their
intial promos I start humming the lines from a old song
pyaar ko pyaar rehne do
rishton ka Ilzam na do


So true to it its one of the best os' s I have come across

Originally posted by: Jhalak29

Hi this is the first time I am reading your work must say it was great...
not many people can create the Depth the way you have created.
Also I love the core thought that to commit one self to someone you dont
need a relationship with name... when ever I think of dev n Sona & their
intial promos I start humming the lines from a old song
pyaar ko pyaar rehne do
rishton ka Ilzam na do


So true to it its one of the best os' s I have come across

Originally posted by: fionadsouza

Lovely... n I'm just opposite to u... I can deal with dialogues... but philosophy is hard for me 😆