DevAkshi OS- Orange (Note on pg 8) - Page 3

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice os dear

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

It's Ferdous...
Ur name????

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Pari!

This was quite the read, I must say! I really like your style of writing!

But what I absolutely loved was the contrasting bits! Together yet apart, one of my favourites!

I realize you haven't had time to edit so I won't mention the few errors that need fixing up, but one thing you may want to fix as soon as you get the time is the title. You've written "DevAshki" instead of DevAkshi

It's hardly imp, but just thought you may like to know

:P

I do tend to get a little caught up with those things, so hope you don't mind

Anyway, all in all, this was an amazing story!

It was very poetic, yet not over-the-top. Simple and elegant, and you've really done a great job with your words!

Do keep writing!! Would love to read more stories from you ^_^

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

Basket_101? DMG? Sorry it's the first thing I thought off😆

Yes, you are right! I joined IF back when I was in love with DMG. My life basically revolved around it 😆 good old days

FIXED! I clearly still don't know how to spell Sonakshi😆

@Bold: Oh! Please do tell me! I realise my writing can be a little confusing at times! You can leave me a scrap where I have stuffed on! I will love you endlessly❤️. No need to say sorry, I am glad you wrote this up!!

I can try and PM you if you'd like! I'm not clinically OCD, but still have some OCD tendencies, so I tend to be very observant with that (it sounds like a good thing, but it really sucks 😆)

You are too too kind! Thank You so much for taking your time out to read this and pointing some errors out to me! Much much appreciated!😳

Awwh the pleasure was all mine girl! I enjoy the fact that there was more to the story than events. It was about the raw emotions, and that's definitely something I love reading about! So trust me when I say Thank YOU for writing this out!

@Bold and Italicised: Are you sure?😆

You're adorable :P Yes, I am 100% sure!! In fact, it'd be great if you could perhaps PM me whenever you do decide to write something!

Take caree :)

Originally posted by: basket_101

Yes, you are right! I joined IF back when I was in love with DMG. My life basically revolved around it 😆 good old days

The days where Shilpa Anand was an amazing Ridz? Well for me YAAS!.. SO many memories attached with that show ❤️

I can try and PM you if you'd like! I'm not clinically OCD, but still have some OCD tendencies, so I tend to be very observant with that (it sounds like a good thing, but it really sucks 😆)

PM is fine by me! Whenever you have time actually, it's nothing urgent, it helps when a person reads something you have written with fresh eyes. New perspective and all! I think we all have OCD tendencies, for me if I pick up a tectbook or a cue card it needs to go back in the same place only 😆

Awwh the pleasure was all mine girl! I enjoy the fact that there was more to the story than events. It was about the raw emotions, and that's definitely something I love reading about! So trust me when I say Thank YOU for writing this out!

Are you planning to kill me with kindness? Because please I am very very close after this 😆. I don't know what to say really, thank you for thanking me? thank you for reading this? I don't know, my brain stopped functioning a long time ago. By the way you have commented, connected the dots that I was leaving in this OS not to forget my errors, you have to be a writer. I can just tell!

You're adorable :P Yes, I am 100% sure!! In fact, it'd be great if you could perhaps PM me whenever you do decide to write something!

Oh why thank you! And you are too gorgeous my love ❤️. DIES! DIEEES! ARG WHY BASKET WHY?

Take caree :)

I will be very prone to injuries after this

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Pariii...

If u call this bad then bad is so ooo goood...

It was such a beautiful os...

Keep bursting your stress regularly

Luv

Sri

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I have no words. I don't actually. I have my last exams in a few day's time and I told myself I'd be off IF till night and reply to everyone then. But I can't, not when I see this comment. But I teared up. I did. I write because writing is such a different feel for me, if I was actually committed and had a decent enough idea I would write a novel but I don't. So I write on TV characters, it sates the need to write!

When I see comments like these, it puts everything into perspective. That there are people out there who read what I write and appreciate it. I really don't know what to say, I just like writing about human emotion because it is so complex and everything we feel is pretty much a conflicting statement at best times. The complexity is very alluring to me!

I don't know what to say. I cannot form proper sentences right now. I took a screenshot of this and sent it to my dad (he used to write a lot when he was my age), he called me up in an instance and we all had a good little cry on the phone😆😆

Also, you didn't sound rude. I thought there was something that put you off my writing and I just really wanted to know what you thought. I was refreshing this thread for a long time trying to see your comment. I see this and I jumped up and down like a idiot that I am

I always treasure feedback and I will treasure this for a lifetime! A simple "Thank You" will never suffice my gratitude for you and your comment ❤️❤️