DevAkshi FS~3 Days~ Day 3 on pg 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Awesome os... day 1 was simply great ⭐️
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola ppl.So here is the next update.
*Day 2*
A sudden warm feeling spread through her; she opened her eyes only to see Dev breathing close to her face.She squeaked back in surprise, he also stepped back.
"What were you doing??"
Her screeching voice made him come back to the reality.He smirked at her reaction
"Waking you up"
"How did you came in"
She clearly remembered closing the doors last night.He chuckled and said
"You still hide your door key under the doormat."
His smirk turning into a mischievous smile. Her face flushed with embarrassment
"Fine but Don't come near me"
She apathetically said although her insides were turning upside down with their closeness.
"Why"
He suddenly came close to her, his face few centimetres away from her.
"Do you feel something"
"No"
She pushed him back; feeling a bit relieved at the same time missing his warmth.
"As you say"
He replied in a sing a song voice, his voice never leaving the amused tone.
"Now get ready,we're leaving"
He almost ordered her but covered it up with a please.
"What?? why?? No"
she resisted him
"3 Days"
He just whispered in her ear and went from there leaving her and her thoughts alone.
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" Will you tell me ??"
"No"
They were bantering for almost 15 mins.Sona tried everything to get Dev tell her where he was taking her but Dev didn't open his mouth.
"Pretty please"
She tried acting sweetly with him
"no"
was his flat out reply.She huffed and looked out of the window; a similar past incident embossed in her memories.
Car came to a halt as they arrived their destined place.A fun fair that to at Beach.Sona was overjoyed to see water around her.He had already grasped that concept that Sona just loved sea and water.A fresh and light feeling spread through her; relieving her old excitement to feel water.
"Come on"
Whole day, They played all the games there,rides everything.He was smiling more than usual, those wrinkles on his forehead vanished.She was noticing all these things.He was same yet changed.
They were walking on the shore hand in hand for the sake of old times ,he signalled her to come forward and join the ride but she was just lost in her thoughts; building up a whole new image of Dev, her dev.She jolted up from her day dream only one thing replaying in her mind,HER DEV.She sat on the sea shore, waves crashing at her feet.
Her thoughts swallowing up her in an whirling whirlpool of their memories.
"Dev, what changed in these years"
she asked; a wave of nostalgia hitting her.She didn't need to mention what she exactly meant, he knew it all. But he wasn't expecting her to throw that question suddenly
"I don't know"
He was caught off guard.
"May be me,our equation,our love and you"
The words just rolled out of his tongue.
"But everything still feels the same as if we are again carefree and reckless.You are still that fierce ,strong headed girl with whom i fell in love and i am still that brooding arrogant egoistic but not with you now"
His earnest voice answered all her unspoken questions.But her mind still fighting with her heart.
" Dev please go away from here"
She pleaded to him,not even a trace of arrogance in her voice.He understood her emotions and left from there without a word.She too didn't tried to stop him.
Her thoughts consuming her.Dev , still running in her mind.


Hope you all liked it!!
Feel free to criticize me
For PMS buddy me
Love
Anshika


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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Day 2 was awesome. .
waiting for day 3...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_devnarshi

Awesome os... day 1 was simply great ⭐️
Update soon


Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
fabb part👏
waiting for d nxt one😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Amazing part👏
Waiting for next day ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Day 2 was wonderful :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
nice update dear
day2 is awesome
waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Day 2 was awesome!!
Waiting for day3!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
NICE UPDATE.
CONTINUE SOON.
THANKS FOR THE PM

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