devakshi FF--Humdard--[chapter 4 updated,page 4][23-6-16]

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Hi, guys again i am back with another ff. But it is totally different from the serial's story.

Hope you will like it.

plz comment and do suggest whether i should continue it or not.

SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES

HUMDARD

Introduction

Dev Dixit - son a very famous business tycoon and he is the MD of the company. He is very charming, fun loving man. He is also serious towards his business that is little workaholic. He loves his family very much.

Shiv Dixit-dev's father

Ishwari Dixit-dev's mother

Niya Dixit-dev's sweet little sister. She is studying

Aryan Dixit-dev's brother. Dev and Aryan are twins but due to difference of few minutes between their birth, Aryan used to call dev as 'bhai'. He is the head of accounts department in their business and without his approval not a single penny can be transferred or can be used in any way.

Sonakashi Bose- a very simple girl who belongs to a very conservative family. She is an interior designer. Happiness, it is something which is not there in her life. Love, she has no place for love in her heart. She has created a wall around her heart.

Dayi maa- she is an old aged woman nearly to the age of sona's mom, who used to live with sonakshi and took care of her like a mother

Asha Bose-sonakshi's mother

Bijoy Bose-sonakshi's father

Trisha Bose-sonakshi's elder sister

Kaira Kapoor-"sonakshi's best friend. A friend very close to sona's heart who knows each and everything about sona which other may not know.

NOTE-in this story dev is a MD of a company and sona is a interior designer. Actually i dont have too much knowledge about this field so fust to connect both dev and sona i chose such professions but i also dont know that if an architect and an interior designer can work togerther or not.

Hope u all will adjust with this.


CHAPTER 1

In one corner of Delhi

BOSE APARTMENT

5 am

A very beautiful and well organized room in which a very beautiful girl is sleeping peacefully on her bed. And suddenly a old aged woman entered into the room and went upto the window and opened the curtains of the room and slowly few rays of rising sun entered into the room which disturbed the sleep of the girl

Girl-"ummm (turned to other side), dayi maa soone do naa"

Dayi maa-"nahi beta uth jaa, aaj tere naye office ka pehla din hai, chal uth jaa"

And the girl checked her phone and saw time was just 5:15 am

Girl-"dayi maa, abhi toh 5:15 hua hai"

Dayi maa-"sona beta uth jaa, aur 5:15 kab 7 baje mein badal jayega pata hi nahi chalega" and in the mean time she cleared her room and went outside the room. And after some time sona woke up from her bed and went near the balcony and felt the pleasant breeze on her pale and dull face which has no smile.

Dayi maa (from outside)-"sona beta kab tak bahar dekhti rahegi, jao nahan dho lo" dayi maa knew this as it was the first thing which sona used to do daily after waking up

Sona-"ji" and went inside the washroom and after some time came outside wearing a white shirt with black jeans and started dry her hairs and came outside the room and saw her dayi maa worshipping and gave a little smile and joined her hands to god and went inside kitchen and started making light breakfast for dayi maa and for herself

In another corner of Delhi

DIXIT MANSION

A very big terrace with a very beautiful hanging garden. On terrace there was also a very big inbuilt gym where two handsome boys were doing their morning workout. Soon both the boys finished their workout and sat outside the gym on a wooden bench to enjoy pleasant morning

One of the boys-"aap itna workout kyu karten Ho, ladkiyan toh aap par aise hi marti hai"

Another boy-"Aryan main ye sab ladkiyan mujhpe maren isliye nahi karta, fit rahene ke liye karta hun"

Aryan-"dev bhai, indirectly fit rahna equals to drooling of girls on you" and Aryan winked

Dev-"tu bilkul pagal hai, zara kaam mein dhyan diya kar" and dev patted Aryan on his shoulder

Aryan-"kya bhai" but before he could complete his sentence he was interrupted by a voice

Girl-" kisse samjha rahe Ho bhai, ye kuch nahi samjhne wale" and gave both the bros glass of juice each

Aryan (kept his glass a side)-"niya Ki bachi (both started running all over the terrace), tu bada samajhti hai"

Niya-"main samajhti hun"

Aryan-"tu apne padhai Mein dhyan de" and dev was just smiling seeing his two little siblings who were fighting like 5 year old kids

Dev-"time up" both looked at dev confusingly

Dev-"ladne ka time khatam (both came and stood before him) and on serious note tum dono abhi Jo bhi kar rahen ho, you both are giving your excellent"

Aryan and Niya (together)-"we love you bhai" and all three were about to hug but suddenly niya moved away

Niya-" bhai u both are sweaty" and both bros laughed

Niya-"baaton baaton mein toh bhul hi gyi, maa ne aap dono ko jaldi se fresh hokar aarti ke liye bulaya hai" and then all three went from there. And after sometime dev and Aryan came together joined the family for aarti, and after sometime the aarti came to end. Their mom, ishwari Dixit gave them aarti and prashad. And after that they proceeded towards dining table for having their breakfast.

BOSE APARTMENT

Both dayi maa and sona were having there breakfast and after finishing her breakfast

Sona-"dayi maa, main apna bag sahi kar lenti hun phir office ke liye nikaltin hun"

Dayi maa-"thik hai puttar" and sona went into her bedroom and went towards coach where her hand bag was lying and started checking it and suddenly her phone ringed and name flashed was maa' but on sona's face there was no expression and she sliently received the call

Sona-"hello"

Asha-"hello sona, office er jonno ready hochish ni ki(hello sona, are u getting ready for office)"

Sona-"hmmm"

Asha-"mon diya kaaz korbi, thik aache(do your work with all ur heart, ok )

Sona-"hmmm"

Asha-"aar shun(and listen) but sona cut her in middle

Sona-"aapni shob din shudu ektai kotha bolo akhan aamake toh aei shob memorize hoye geche(u used to tell same thing daily and now these things has got memorized to me)

Asha-"zodi tumake aei shob memorize hoye geche(if these thing are memorized to you ) then its better you never forget it" and asha cut the call and a lone tear escaped from sona's eyes and she sat on couch and in mean time dayi maa entered the room with dahi sakkar and seeing dayi maa sona immediately whipped up the tears and it didn't get unnoticed by dayi maa and dayi maa came and sat near sona and kept the bowl of dahi sakkar on the table and then cupped her face

Dayi maa-"ab tu itni badi Ho gayi hai ki ab apni dayi maa se apne aasun chupane lagi hai" and listening to this sona hugged her dayi maa and started crying silently

Dayi maa-" teri maa ka phone tha na" and in response to this sona just nodded positively

Dayi maa-"arre tu toh meri sherni hai tu kaise ro sakti hai, ab chal rona band kar( and both broke the hug)aur khushi maan se apne naye office mein kaam karna aur ye le dahi sakkar kha" and sona ate it and smiled a little

Sona-" aap chaliye main aati hun" and dayi maa went outside and sona entered in the washroom and washed her face and then went to the drawing room with her hand bag and touched dayi maa's feet

Dayi maa-"jaa puttar, maan laga kar kaam karna"

Sona-"hmmm, aur aap dawai time pe le lijiyega aur khana rakha hai vo garam karke kha lijiyega"

Dayi maa-"tum meri chinta mat karo, tum bas apne kaam par dhyan do"

Sona-"ji, ab main chalti hun" and dayi maa kept her palm on sona's head and smiled and sona went for office and dayi maa closed the door and joined her hand to god

Dayi maa-"rab ji, iss pyaari si bachhi ke zindagi ko khushiyon se bhar dijye"


if u like it plx tell more and more people about this ff

CHAPTER 2 - page 2



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Posted: 9 years ago
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its fantastic start and very unique story dear.👏 continue soon😛
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Sounds very very interesting...
Unique start, totally different...
Nd, interesting part is dev has twin brother, I think it will make chaos on sona's life
Egerly waiting... Update soon
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Originally posted by: krystle123

its fantastic start and very unique story dear.👏 continue soon😛


really thnx dear
i will try to update it soon
Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start...wtng for ur next update :)
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Wow good start dear

Waiting for DevaKshi face off
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Nice start👏
loved the story line waiting for the story to unfold and Devakshi's first meet also do cont soon
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Nice work yaar! Continue soon!! 👍🏼
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The idea is unique...
lovely start

Plz count me in...

Luv
Sri
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Sounds very very interesting...
Unique start, totally different...
Nd, interesting part is dev has twin brother, I think it will make chaos on sona's life
Egerly waiting... Update soon


really thnx dear fr the appreciation
i will try to update soon

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