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first of all really sorry for late update

hope you like it

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CHAPTER 2

DIXIT CONSTRUCTIONS

Sona parked her scooty in the parking area and then went inside the building.sona was walking and in the mean time she was busy with some of her stuffs and suddenly she bumped with someone and all the stuffs fell down from her hand

Sona-"can't you see??" and turned to that man

Man-"i am sorry, i didn't notice you" and sona noticed him doing something on phone

Sona-"kyuki aap phone pe busy thein" and started picking her belongings and the man's phone ringed and he started to leave forgetting about sona

Sona(murmured)-"manner less" but it was quite audible to the man and the man stopped and turned to sona

Man-"excuse me"

Sona-"nothing" and stood up with her stuffs and went. And the man realised why sona said him manner less because he didn't help her in picking up her stuffs.

Man-"crap!!" And went

Sona reached to the reception

Receptionist-"how may I help you ma'am"

Sona-"I want to meet" but she was interrupted by a voice from behind

Shiv-"hello, Miss Bose" and sona turned and shiv smiled

Sona-"good morning sir" and smiled

Shiv-"good morning"

Receptionist-"good morning sir"

Shiv-"good morning and she (pointed towards sona) is the new head of designing department of our company"

Receptionist-"good morning ma'am"

Sona-"good morning"

Shiv-"chalo main tumhe tumhare colleagues' se introduce kara denta hun"

Sona-"ok sir" and both of them proceeded towards working area and as soon as the employees saw shiv all of them greeted him

Shiv-"good morning to all of you and meet her (pointed towards sona) Miss Sonakshi Bose, she is the new head of designing department of the company" and all the employees also greeted her and she also greeted them.

Shiv-"chalo main tumhe usse milwata hun jiske saath tumhe mainly kaam karna hai" and they proceeded towards a cabin. The name on the name plate was 'Dev Dixit' and shiv knocked the door

Dev (from inside)-"come in" and shiv entered and sona stood there only and dev looked up as he was reading some files

Dev-"dad, aapko knock karne ki kya zaroorat thi aap aise hi aa jaaten" and stood up from his seat

Shiv-"manners" and smiled and sona entered and dev looked at her and sona also looked at him

Dev and sona(together)-"AAP" and shiv looked at them confusingly. So the man with whom sona bumped in the morning was none other than Dev

Shiv-"tum dono ek dusre se mil chuke Ho"

Sona(herself)-"aaj toh main gyi, abhi ye Bata denge ki subhah kya hua" and sona was constantly looking down

Dev-"kuch khaas nahi, bas aaj subha accidently takra Gaye thein" and sona immediately looked at dev because the response from dev was unexpected by her.

Shiv-" ok let me introduce her, she is the new head of designing department" and dev came towards her

Shiv (to sona)-"he is the MD of the company and your boss and also my son"

Sona(in her mind)-"son, pehle din hi panga Ho gya"

Dev-"hi Dev Dixit" and forwarded his hand for hand shake and broke her train of thoughts

Sona (hesitantly)-"Sonakshi Bose" and joined her hand with his. And then shiv called someone and a beautiful girl entered

Shiv-"Tina, jao Sonakshi ko uska cabin dikha do"

Tina-"ok sir, (turned to sona) come ma'am"

Sona-"nice to meet both of you sir"

Dev and shiv-"same here" and sona and Tina went outside the cabin and after sometime

Sona-"tum??" and Tina understood what she wants to ask

Tina-"ma'am main dev sir ki secretary hun"

Sona-"may I ask you for something"

Tina-"of course ma'am, aapko puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai"

Sona-"don't call me as ma'am, main tumse itni badi bhi nahi hun"

Tina-"ma'am, chahe aap age mein mere jaisi hi ho par aap position mein mujhse badi hai"

Sona-"ok" and then they entered a very beautiful cabin

Tina-"ma'am, here is your cabin"

Sona-"thankyou"

Tina-"my pleasure ma'am" and went from there and sona started exploring her cabin. The cabin was having very big window and the view outside the window was very beautiful and sona stood in front of the window and smiled a little to the beautiful view. Then she started going through some old files having different designs.

Dev's Cabin

Dev called someone

Dev-"Tina, come in my cabin" and after sometime

Tina-"may I come in sir"

Dev-"come in" and Tina went towards him

Tina-"yes sir"

Dev-"sit" and Tina settled down

Dev-"Tina, kitni baar kaha hai maine ki mujhe sir kehkar mat bulaya karo, sun kar aisa lagta hai ki main dad ke age ka hun"

Tina-"sir"

Dev-"dev"

Tina-"ok dev, humne decide kiya tha naa ki inside office dev sir and outside office dev"

Dev-"ok madam"

Note-dev and Tina are best friends. Dev and Tina were studying in same college but due some reasons she was not able complete her studies due to which she was not getting any better job. So she joined dixit construction as dev's secretary as she has knowledge about business.

Tina-"mujhe ye bolne ke liye bulaya tha kya"

Dev-"oh, main toh bhul hi gaya tha main toh vo uska naam kya hai designing head"

Tina-"Sonakshi Bose"

Dev-"kaisi hai purani waali ke tarah toh nahi hai naa"

Tina-"nahi bilkul nahi, jyaada baat nahi Hui par vo bahut achhi, simple hai"

Dev-"ok" and suddenly dev noticed that Tina smiling in her thoughts

Dev-"kiske khayalon mein khoi Hui ho, koi mil Gaya kya"

Tina-"nahin aisa kuch nahi hai, bas kuch yaad aa gaya tha"

Dev-"kya"

Tina-"miss Bose ki aur tumhari thinking ek jaisi hai"

Dev-"matlab" asked confusingly

Tina-"Miss Bose keh rahin thi ki main unhe Sonakshi keh kar bulaya karun"

Dev-"oh I see" and smiled

Tina-"main jaati hu"

Dev-"ok" and Tina leaved the cabin and dev leaned back a little on his chair

Dev (himself)-"toh miss Bose aapki aur meri sooch milti hai, saath kaam karne mein maza aayega" and smiled to himself and his phone ringed

Dev-"hello"

Mr.Khurrana-"hello Mr. Dev"

Dev-"good morning sir"

Mr. Khurrana-"good morning, actually Maine aapse ye confirm karne ke liye call kiya tha Ki when you will be able to show me the designs, so according to it I will fix the meeting"

Dev-"sir may I plz tell you after sometime actually I have to discuss about this with my designing head, hope u don't mind it"

Mr. Khurrana-"no, it is absolutely fine"

Dev-"thank you sir, get to you soon"

Mr. Khurrana-"ok, have a nice day"

Dev-"you too" and disconnected the call and called Tina

Dev-"Tina"

Tina-"yes sir"

Dev-"Tina miss Bose ko Mr.Khurrana Ki file de do aur kehna if possible half an hour Mein read kar len aur phir mere cabin Mein aaye"

Tina-"ok sir" and dev disconnected the call and get engrossed in some files.

Tina took the file to sona and knocked the door of the cabin

Sona-"come in" and Tina entered inside

Tina-ma'am, yeh dev sir ne file bheji hai"

Sona-"ok" and took file from Tina

Tina-"ma'am, sir ne kaha hai Ki if possible aap ye file within half an hour Mein read kar len aur fir dev sir se mille"

Sona-"ok I will" and Tina left from there and sona took a pencil and a writing pad and sona started reading the file and writing something on pad. And sona stood up to go to dev's cabin

Sona(herself)-"abhi sorry bhi bol dungi unhe(pause)par meri toh koi galti nahi thi(pause), phir bhi vo mere boss hai i should. Ok sona tu unhe sorry bolegi, aur sorry bolne se koi chota ni ho jata hai" and proceeded towards dev's cabin

Outside dev's cabin,sona stood there for sometime and then took a deep breath and knocked the door

Dev-"come in" and sona slowly opened the door and dev looked at her

Dev-"aayiye miss Bose" and sona silently went towards dev and stood there

Dev-"have a seat"

Sona-"sir,mujhe aapse kuch kahna tha"

Dev-"ok, baeth kar baaten karte hai" and sona sat on the chair

Dev-"yaa say"

Sona-" sir vo main"

Dev-"ji aap"

Sona-"I..am sorry sir"

Dev(confusingly)-"for what??"

Sona-"vo jo aaj subhah hua uske liye" and dev smiled

Dev-"toh aap subhah jo hua uske liye sorry bol rahin hai"

Sona-"ji"

Dev-"par aapki galti kya thi"

Sona-"vo" as she knew it was not her fault

Dev-"aaj jo bhi hua usme aapki koi galti nahi thi, it just happened accidently"

Sona-"par maine aapko vo"

Dev-"waise mujhe aapse sorry bolna chahiye, aapka samaan gir gaya tha aur main aise hi chala jaa raha tha, actually i was in little hurry at that time"

Sona-"its alright sir,aap mere boss hain aapko sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat ni hai"

Dev-"miss bose, sorry bolne se koi chota ni ho jata hai" and sona at him immediately

Sona(in her mind)-"itne bure nahin hai"

Dev-"aap kahan kho gyi miss bose"

Sona-"kahin nahi"

Dev-"agar sorry session khatm ho gya ho toh kaam kar len"

Sona-"ok sir"

And both started their discussion and had a long hour discussion

Sona-"sir, main sooch rahin thi ki pehle main mr. Khurrana ke family members se mil leti hun uske baad final designs ready karun, if you are ok with it"

Dev-"ya absolutely, main aaj hi mr. Khurrana se baat karke meeting fix kar deta hun"

Sona-"ok sir(sona stood up), now i take your leave sir"

Dev-"ya sure" and sona left from there

And after some time sona went to the cafeteria and sat on a corner table and suddenly her phone ringed and a small smile appeared on her lips

Sona-"hello, dayi maa"

Dayi maa-"beta kuch khaya"

Sona-"nahi, abhi free hunyi hun"

Dayi maa-"kya abhi tak tu bhukhi hai, chal ab jaldi se kuch kha le"

Sona-"thik hai" and sona stood up and went to waiter

Sona (to waiter)-"2 sandwich and a coffee"

Waiter-"ok ma'am"

Dayi maa-"tera office kaisa hai"

Sona-"achha hai" and waiter forwarded the sandwiches and coffee to her and sona get confused how to get both the things in her one hand as she was holding phone with one of her hand and suddenly she heard a voice

Man-"may i help you"

Sona-"no its alright"

Sona(to dayi maa)-"abhi main phone rakhti hun"

Man-"no, you carry on, main help kar deta hun" and before sona could say anything he took the eatables

Dayi maa-"achha beta main rakhtin hun"

Sona-"ji"

Man-"which table"

Sona-"aap mujhe de dijye"

Man-"let me" and sona finding no option went towards her table with him and he put the eatables on the table

Sona-"thank you"

Man-"my pleasure, waise i am aryan" and forwarded his hand towards her

Sona-"sonakshi" and shaked hand with his

Aryan-"toh, aap hai vo new head of designing dept." And in response sona just smiled

Aryan-"can i join you if you dont mind"

Sona-"ya sure" and settled down and aryan ordered for a coffee

Sona-"aur aap yahan"

Aryan-"main company ke accounts department ka head hun"

Sona-"hmmm" and in the mean time aryan's phone ringed

Aryan-"excuse me "

Sona-"ya sure"

Aryan(on his phone)-"ok main aata hun" and disconnected the call

Sona-" all ok"

Aryan-"haan, bas kuch kaam hai mujhe jaana ho"

Sona-"ok"

Aryan-"waise hamne itni baate ki, maine aapki help ki, so friends"and extended his hand

Sona-"ok" and smiled and shaked hand with his

Aryan-"ab main chalta hu aur koi help chahiye ho toh batana"

Sona-"ok" and both smiled to each other and aryan left and sona started having her sandwich and coffee and after sometime left from there. Sona was about to enter in her cabin

Dev(from little distance)-"miss Bose" and sona turned and dev came to her

Sona-"yes sir"

Dev-"mr. Khurrana ke sath meeting kal sham 5 baje ki fix hui hai"

Sona-"ok sir"

Dev-"ek request thi aap se"

Sona-"request??"

Dev-"haan, aap mujhe sir kehkar mat bulaya kijiye"

Sona-"matlab"

Dev-"matlab ye ki aap mujhe dev kehkar bulayiye"

Sona-"par aap mere boss hai"

Dev-"main apka boss nahi hun, hum saath kaam karten hai"

Sona-"par"

Dev-"par var kuch ni Sonakshi"

Sona-"ok" and dev smiled

Dev-"ok, you carry on with your work"

Sona-"ok" and dev left from there


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CHAPTER 3- page 3

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Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
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wow... its fabulous👏. continue soon 😛
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Nice Update.. 👍🏼
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That was a very nice update
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first of all really sorry for late update
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also suggest if u feel anything is not up to the mark
SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES
CHAPTER 3

EVENING

All the employees were leaving for their home. In parking area, sona was trying to take out her scooty

Dev(from behind)-"may I help you" and sona turned

Sona-"thank you sir,par main kar lungi" and with this she took out her scooty

Sona-"ok sir gud night" and sona was about to leave

Dev-"Sonakshi" sona turned

Sona-"yes sir"

Dev-"Sonakshi maine tumhe kaha tha ki mujhe dev kehkar bulana"

Sona-"actually sir aap mere boss hai and I am also not comfortable"

Dev-"par(dev saw Tina coming and got an idea) ok toh main apka boss hun par sirf working hours mein so after working hours I am only dev, got it no formalities"

Sona-"hmmm" and sona left from there and dev smiled looking at sona and Aryan came to him

Aryan-"bhai kisse dekh kar smile rahe ho"

Dev(turned to Aryan)-"kissi ko nahi, ab chal"

Aryan-"ok, chaliye" and both of them left from there

And on the way to home, sona noticed Tina waiting for cab so sona stopped her scooty in front of her

Sona-"come main tumhe drop kar deti hun"

Tina-"no ma'am it's alright main cab le lungi"

Sona-"koi baat nahi main drop kar deti, aur waise bhi late ho gya hai"

Tina-"par"

Sona-"koi par nahi,come"

Tina-"ok" and tina sat on the scooty and after some time

Tina-"ma'am yahan se right" and turned right

Sona-"tum yahan kabse job karti ho"

Tina-"pichle paanch saal se"

Sona-"so long"

Tina-"ya,ma'am yahan se left" and sona turned left and after some time

Tina-"ma'am yahin rok dijiye" and sona stopped the scooty

Tina-"thank you ma'am"

Sona-"you are welcome"

Tina-"ok gud night" and was ready to leave

Sona-"tina"

Tina-"yes ma'am"

Sona-"plz mujhe ma'am mat bulaya karo"

Tina-"par aap mujhse badi hai post mein" and sona dev's words to her

Sona-"ok, par sirf working hours mein tum mujhe ma'am bulaogi and after working hours just sonakshi, no formalities"

Tina-"ok ma'am oopps sonakshi"

Sona-"right, ok bye" and sona was ready to leave

Tina-"sonakshi"

Sona(turned to tina)-"Yaa" and tina forwarded her hand for handshake

Tina-"friends"

Sona-"ok friends" and shaked hands with her

Tina-"ok bye"

Sona-"bye, see you tomorrow" and sona drove to her home

Sona knocked the door of her home and dayi maa opened the door and both passed each other a smile then sona entered inside and sat on the sofa and dayi maa brought water for her and sat beside her

Dayi maa-"kaisa raha pehla din, kaise log hai, kaisa kaam hai, achha tunne kuch khaya"

Sona-"arre saans le lijye, chaliye ek lambi si saans ligiye" and dayi maa took a long breath

Sona-"main ek ek karke saare jawab deti hun, pehla mera din bahut accha gaya, dusra bahut achhe log hai, tisra kaam bahut achha hai, aur chautha mujhe bahut zoro ki bhukh lagi hai"

Dayi maa-"tu apna khayal kyu Ni rakhti"

Sona-"sorry(and holded her ear),aage se rakhungi"

Dayi maa-"pakka"

Sona-"pakka"

Dayi maa-"chal tu jaake fresh ho ja main khana lagati hun",and went for freshen up and after sometime she came out of washroom wearing a white colour chicken salwar suit and went into the balcony and stood there and suddenly her phone ringed and sona came inside her room and picked up the phone and seeing the name flashed on the screen, a big smile appeared on her lips, the smile which reached her eyes not that which she used to wear all the time

Sona-"hello"

Person-"kya hello kar rahi hai apna vada toh tod diya"

Sona-"konsa vada"

Person-"tune kaha tha ki jab nayi job milegi tab tu mujhe coffee pe leke jayigi"

Sona-"sorry aami shotti mera matlab ki main sach mein bhul gyi thi"

Person-"aur ye teri bengali hamesha hum dono ke bich mein aa jati hai" and sona smiled

Sona-"sach mein main bhul gyi thi"

Person-"ok maaf kiya"

Sona-"aapki maafi paakar hum dhany ho gaye kaira ji"

kaira-"ek shart par"

Sona-"shart"

Kaira-"ji haan"

Sona-"ok toh batayiye ki kya shart hai aapki"

Kaira-"ji toh suniye, kal after office coffee pakka"

Sona-"done" and both laughed and outside sona dayi maa smiled listening to the laughter of sona

Dayi maa-" ek ye kaira hi hai jiske saath sona hasti hai khush rahti hai, rab ji plz sona ki vo purani hasi lauta dijiye"

And in sona's room, sona and kaira were talking when suddenly sona got a notification that someone is calling(unknown number)

Sona-"kaira main tujhse baad mein baat karti hun kissi ka call aa raha hai"

Kaira-"ok thik hai, gud night sweet dreams"

Sona-"you too" and disconnected the call and then recieved the call by unknown number

Sona-"hello"

Person-"main Sonakshi Bose se baat kar sakta hun"

Sona-"yaa speaking"

Person-"main dev"

Sona-"oh yes sir"

Dev-"we are not in the office"

Sona-"sorry sir, I mean dev"

Dev-"right"

Sona-"any problem"

Dev-"haan maine ye batane ke liye phone kiya tha ki, kal office subhah hi aa jana I mean ki pehle jo rough designs hai vo discuss kar lenge phir meeting ke liye chalenge then it will be easy"

Sona-"ok"

Dev-"you are ok with this na Sonakshi"

Sona-"haan koi problem nahi hai dev"

Dev-"ok gud night"

Sona-"gud night" and disconnected the call and went to have her dinner.

NEXT DAY

DIXIT CONSTRUCTIONS

Sona was doing some work sitting in her cabin and suddenly the phone of her cabin ringed

Sona-"hello"

Tina-"good morning ma'am"

Sona-"good morning"

Tina-"ma'am dev sir ne aapko apne cabin mein designs ke saath bulaya hai"

Sona-"ok",and disconnected the call and then she went to dev's cabin and knocked the door

Dev-"come in"

Sona-"good morning sir"

Dev-"good morning, have a seat"

And then he called Tina

Dev-"Tina do coffee bhejwana" and end the call

Sona-"sir ye rahe designs" and soon they get engrossed in their discussion

At 3 pm

Sona was sitting in her cabin and dev knocked the door

Sona-"sir aap yahan"

Dev-"Sonakshi saari files ready kar lo, hame thodi time mein nikalna hai aur jahan meeting vo yahan se kaafi dur hai"

Sona-"ok sir"

Dev-"ok see you in the parking area after 15 mins."

Sona-"ok" and dev left from there

After almost 15 mins. They met in the parking area

Sona-"ok sir aap mujhe address de dijye fir main chalti hun" and dev gave her a confused look

Dev-"hum saath chal rahen hai"

Sona-"nahi sir main aa jaungi"

Dev-"meeting outskirts pe hai, aur baarish ka mausam bhi lag raha hai tum bhig jaogi" and sona understood that what he was saying is right

Sona-"ok" and they drove to there meeting. The journey was having silence between them or talk related to meeting, traffic jam on the road. After sometime the road was clear and rain started and sona looked outside the window and a smiled appeared on her lips which reached her eyes, sona was enjoying the rain. And suddenly dev saw her smiling and unknown to him a smile also appeared on his lips and again he concentrated on driving but he was stealing glances of her smiling face but the smile on her face vanished and tears formed in her eyes remembering something and it was also get noticed by dev

Dev-"kya hua Sonakshi"

Sona-"kuch nahi" and again she looked outside the window but now there was no smile on her face

Dev(himself)-"mujhe usse force nahin karna chahiye" and concentrate towards driving and after sometime they got stuck into traffic and were just sitting and waiting for the traffic to be cleared and suddenly a man came to dev's side and knocked on the window panes and dev lowered the window panes

Dev-"kya hua hai"

Man-"arre bhaiya ek ped gir gaya hai"

Dev-"kya, kitna time lagega"

Man-"kam se kam ek ghanta"

Dev-"thik hai"

After sometime dev's phone ringed

Dev-"hello Mr. Khurrana"

Mr. Khurrana-"I am really sorry ek family emergency aa gyi hai toh aaj meeting nahi Ho payegi"

Dev-"ok no problem you take care" and disconnected the call

Sona-"kya Hua" and dev told her about Mr. Khurrana

Sona-"toh ab"

Dev-"toh ab ghar chalte hai"

Sona-"hmmm" and dev looked back to take u turn but it seems like impossible at that point of time as they were stuck in the middle

Dev-"sonakshi yahan nikalna mushkil hai"

Sona-"kyu"

Dev-"hum bich Mein phasse huye hai"

Sona-"oh" and dev started looking here and there and spotted a cafe nearby

Dev-"sonakshi hum itni der tak toh yahan nahi baith sakte so what about having coffee"

precape- sona will say yes or no. and if yes then it will their first coffee date😉

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CHAPTER 4-page 4

Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice...wtng for next update dear ... :)
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Whose is that phone person..
Interesting
Thanks for the pm.
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Nice OS😊👏
Waiting for the next update😊
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It is awesome.. the bonding between dayi maa and sona is so touching.. dev and his family..and the new part that Dev didn't behaved like mr.obhodro with sona since the start..I am eagerly waiting for 4th part..Keep writing..U hav grt imagination ant storyline!!
Edited by saumya07 - 9 years ago

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