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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its beautiful

I think she say yes.

I love u hv add Tina as a important role.

Waiting for next episode
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Whose is that phone person..

Interesting
Thanks for the pm.

dear if u r asking about kaira then she is sona's best frnd
thank you for reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome waiting fr d nxt episode egarly
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its really awesome and interesting dear .👏 continue soon 😛 thanks for the pm
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Nice updates dear
Loved it
Different story
Curious to know abt sona past
Update soon plz
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first all a great thank you and a big hug to all who have read this and who will be reading this
now a big sorry for late update
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recape-Dev-"sonakshi hum itni der tak toh yahan nahi baith sakte so what about having coffee"

CHAPTER 4

Sona-"coffee par yahan kahan??"

Dev-"arre tum haan toh karo"

Sona-"ok"

Dev-"chalo"

Sona-"kahan" and without replying to sona dev stepped out of the car and opened the door of the car for sona and sona stepped out and started following dev and suddenly dev stopped a man passing by him

Dev-"suniye"

Man-"ji"

Dev-"hum zara iss cafe(sona looked towards the cafe) mein jaa rahen hai toh traffic khatam hone lage toh plz aap humme bata denge"

Man-"thik hai" and both sona and dev went inside the cafe and went to a window side table and sat there and a waiter came to them

Waiter-"welcome sir, welcome mam(both smiled to him), sir your order"

Dev(to sona)-"kya logi"

Sona-"anything"

Dev-"toh main order kar dun"

Sona-"haan"

Dev-"then cappuccino"

Sona-"ok"

Dev(to waiter)-"two cappuccino"

Waiter-"anything else sir"

Dev-"no,thankyou" and waiter went from there and then for few minutes dev and sona were sitting silently and looking here and there and then dev decided to break the silence

Dev-"aaj ka mausam kitna achha hai na"

Sona-"haan,jami hui dhul bhi saaf ho jaati hai" and dev just looked at her but he understood the depth of the words

Dev(himself)-"shayad maine uski purani yaadein taza kar di" and then he tried to change the topic

Dev-"so tumhe interior designing chodkar aur kya pasand hai"

Sona-"song sunna"

Dev-"mujhe bhi, which type"

Sona-"soft songs"

Dev-"mujhe bhi"

Sona-"hmmm" and again silent occurred between them and the waiter brought the cappuccino and kept in front of them and both starting having their cappuccino

Sona-"dev"

Dev-"hmmm"

Sona-"vo mujhe kuch puchna tha"

Dev-"haan pucho"

Sona-"vo aapko mera no. Kahan se mila" and dev smiled

Dev-"vo magic" and gave him a what look

Dev-"just joking, Tina se mila"

Sona-"oh" and soon they finished their cappuccino

Dev-"shayad thodi traffic bhi khatam ho jaye"

Sona-"hmmm"

Dev-"ok, tum chalo main pay karke aata hun"

Sona-"no, I will pay for myself"

Dev-"dekho ye treat meri taraf se thi toh main pay karunga"

Sona-"par"

Dev-"tum next time kar lena"

Sona-"ok" and she went outside the cafe and dev went to pay and while paying he noticed something and also bought that and came outside and saw sona standing in the corner and dev went to her

Dev-"tum yahan kyu khadi ho" and sona realised that dev was standing beside her

Sona-"traffic khatam Ni hua"

Dev-"hmmm" and suddenly again rain started

Dev-"Sonakshi chalo car mein baathtein hai iss se pehle ki ye baarish heavy rain mein convert ho jaaye"

Sona-"ok" and both went to their car and soon the traffic was cleared and then he took u-turn and soon the heavy rain started. And after sometime dev's phone ringed. Dev stopped the car and received the call

Dev-"haan Tina"

Tina-"dev mr. Khurrana ke PA ka phone aaya tha, meeting ki next date ke liye"

Dev-"hmmm, toh konsi date di hai"

Tina-"coming Sunday"

Dev-"ek min wait karo"

Tina-"hmmm"

Dev(to sona)-"Sonakshi mr. Khurrana ne next date Sunday ki di hai, are u ok wid it"

Sona-"Sunday"

Dev-"ya, any problem"

Sona-"haan vo mujhe Sunday ko kahin jana hai, so it will be possible for me on Sunday, I am sorry main cancel nahi kar sakti hun"

Dev-"its ok"

Dev(to Tina)-"Rina Sunday ko possible nahi hoga, koi aur date maang lo"

Tina-"ok"

Dev-"aur waise bhi Sunday ko holiday hota hai, toh Sunday ke alawa koi aur date mang lo"

Tina-"ok, waise meeting toh cancel ho gyi thi toh tum dono abhi tak office nahi aaye"

Dev-"traffic mein fas gye thein, aur phir coffee bhi pi"

Tina-"coffee shoffee pi jaa rahi hai"

Dev-"khuch bhi, chal ab rakhta hun"

Tina-"ok bye aur Sonakshi ko mera hi bolna"

Dev-"ok" and cut the call

Dev-"Tina ne tumhe hi bola hai" and in response sona just smiled and dev started driving and there was silence between them. Dev was not getting what to say and sona was not willing to say anything and was just looking outside the window and dev noticed a sadness on her face but the reason was unknown to him. And suddenly sona's phone ringed

Sona-"hi kaira"

Kaira-"kb tak pahuch rahi ho" and suddenly sona remembered about coffee with kaira

Sona-"haan, bas pahunch rahi hun thodi time mein"

Kaira-"ok"

Sona-"tum pahuch gayi kya"

Kaira-"nahi, bas office se nikal rahin hun"

Sona-"ok tum pahucho, main bhi paunchti hun"

Kaira-"ok, bye"

Sona-"bye" and disconnected the call

Dev-"kya hua sonakshi, any problem"

Sona-"nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai, bas mujhe meri ek friend se milne jana hai"

Dev-"so batao kahan chodu"

Sona-"coffee cottage"

Dev-"phir se coffee"

Sona-"promise kiya tha i can't break it"

Dev-"ok" and soon they reached the cafe

Dev-"lo tumhara cafe aa gya"

Sona-"thank you" and was ready to stepped out

Dev-"sonakshi" and sona turned

Sona-"hmmm"

Dev-"ye lo" and forwarded a packed

Sona(while taking it)-"ye kya hai" and oped it

Dev-"meri maa kehti hai ki meetha khane se dil khush rehta hai" and sona smiled

Sona-"thank you and bye"

Dev-"bye" and sona stepped out of the car and went inside the cafe and dev went to his home

And as soon as sona entered the cafe she found kaira standing at the entrance and both gave each other a tight hug

Kaira-"vo kon tha"

Sona-"vo"

Kaira-"ruk baith kar batein kartein hai" and then both proceeded to a table and settled themselves

Kaira-"chal ab bata kon tha"

Sona-"vo he is my boss"

Kaira-"tumhara boss tumhe drop karne aaya tha"

Sona-"actually hum ek meeting ke liye gaye thein toh wahin se directly yahan aa gyi thats why"

Kaira-"ok" and suddenly kaira noticed the packet

Kaira-"yeh kya hai" and before sona could answer any thing to her. Kaira opened the packet

it was a cup cake with a smiley on it

Kaira-"ye tumne karida"

Sona-"vo dev ne diya"

Kaira-"dev??"

Sona-"mere boss"

Kaira-"Dev aage"

Sona-"Dev Dixit"

Kaire-"the Dev Dixit"

Sona-"ya"

Kaira-"usne tumhe diya"

Sona-"haan vo keh rahen thein ki unki maa kehti hai ki meetha khane se dil khush rahta hai"

Kaira-"oh so sweet of him" and sona smiled.

DIXIT MANSION

dev entered inside her house and his mom noticed him

Ishwari-"aaj toh tu jaldi aane wala tha, late kaise ho gaye" dev went to his mom and sat beside her

Dev-"traffic mein phas gaya tha"

Ishwari-"tumne kuch khaya"

Dev-"bahut bhook lagi hai"

Ishwari-"chal tu haath munh dho le main khana lagwati hun"

Dev-"ji" and went to his room and freshened up and sat on the couch and his bro aryan entered in his room

Aryan-"aa gye bhai aap"

Dev-"kyu koi kaam tha"

Aryan-"nahi mujhe laga ki date pe gye thein toh time lagega"

Dev-"date??"

Aryan-"coffee date" and before dev can say anything niya entered into his room

Niya-"coffee date?, kon gaya tha"

Aryan-"dev bhai" and niya stood up on the bed and folded her palm and brought near her mouth in such a way that her palm act as a mic to her

Niya-"aaj ke business world ki khass khabar, mr. Workaholic, mr. Dev dixit gaye thein ek coffee date par"

Dev-"nautanki band kar" and ignoring dev palm turned mic to dev

Niya-"hum janna chahte hai, kon hai vo ladki" but before dev could say anything

Aryan-"miss sonakshi bose(and niya forwarded her palm tuned mic to aryan), new head designing department" dev glared at them

Dev-"tum dono apni nautanki band karo" and pulled niya from bed

Dev-"aur aryan tujhe kaise pata iss bare mein"

Aryan-"all thanks to tina" and in the mean time ishwari entered into the room

Ishwari-"tina ke baare mein kya baat kar rahen ho" and dev was about to reply

Aryan-"arre maa apko tina ko thank you bolna chahiye "

Ishwari-"kyu" dev was not given a chance to reply

Niya-"nahi toh hame pata hi nahi chalta ki bhai coffee date pe gye hai"

Ishwari(joined her hands)-"hey bhagwan, tera lakh lakh shukriya, aaj pehli baar mera dev kaam chodkar apne baare mein soch raha hai, vaise kon hai vo ladki"

niya-"sonakshi bose naam hai"

ishwari-"bengali hai, koi baat nahi chalegi"

aryan-"bahut khoobsurat hai"

ishwar-"tu kahan mila usse"

aryan-"arre maa vo hamare office ki nai designing head hai" and at this dev had enough of their khayali pulao

dev-"arre aisa kuch nahi hai, hum dono mr. Khurrana ke sath meeting ke liye gaye thein par meeting cancel ho gyi thi aur hum traffic mein phase huye thein aur traffic khatam hone mein time lagne wala tha" and before he could complete

niya-"kyu"

dev-"baarish ke wajah se road pe ek paid gir gaya tha issiliye, toh phir hamne socha ki itni time tak car mein kaise rahenge toh hum dono coffee peene chalegye,hufff"

ishwari-"kya, mujhe laga ki mera dev badal gaya par ye toh wahi dev reh gaya, thik hai chalo khana lag gya hai" and then ishwari, aryan, niya left the room

dev-"ye tina bhi naa, kya kya karti hai" and he also left for dinner


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Edited by angel_writer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome...continue soon . 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb Update.. 👍🏼
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
It was too beautiful and amazing

Plz continued
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
hey...i really loved all the four parts..amazing writing...and love the concept

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