Cold Encounters [DevAkshi OS]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi. My name is Tannu. I am new to this forum. Have been watching Kuch Rang Pyaar Ke Aise Bhi from the beginning but have been a silent member on this forum. Just decided to recreate one of my stories for DevAkshi too. Could be something that can happen in the future. Written on my phone so disregard editing errors. Please like, comment and criticize my work, I am open to creative discussion on my piece.
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They are both walking on a comparatively deserted street on a typical Spring evening.

"Will you just admit you're cold?" Dev raises an eyebrow as he walks beside her, his hands tucked into the pockets of his coat.

Dr. Sonakshi's shivering and hopping from one foot to the other, and this isn't exactly how he imagined this encounter going.

"I'm not cold!"

"Dr. Bose, you just blew on your hands." He shakes his head, smiling at her. "If you want my coat-"

"I don't need your coat. I'm fine."

He sighs. "I told you it was gonna get cold tonight."

"I told you it was gonna get cold tonight," she mimics, in a voice far too high-pitched to be his own.

Biting his lip to keep from smiling, he pulls his hands from his pockets and starts undoing his coat.

Her face clears and she takes a step back. "I'm serious! If you take your coat off, I'm not going to put it on. You can't make me! I said I dont feel cold. End of story."

"Will you quit acting like a five-year-old?" Shrugging his coat off, he swings it around her and onto her shoulders. When merely gives a blank look at him, he takes each of her arms and threads them through the sleeves and then buttons the front. It's very obviously too long for her much shorter frame, but at least she's mostly covered. "There. Better?"

She purses her lips. "What if my hands are cold?"

"Well, see, that's what gloves are for." He takes one of his own gloves off his right hand and slides it over her left. "There."

She raises her right hand and wiggles her fingers at him. "What am I supposed to do with this one? Sacrifice it to frostbite?"

Dev laughs under his breath and then reaches up to take her hand, threading his fingers through hers. He cups their palms and blows in between to warm her skin before he lets their joined hands fall to swing between them. "Good?"

She looks down at their hands and then back up to him before she shrugs. "Not bad," she tells him.

She is shaking her head. But she's smiling, and she's not shivering anymore, and Dev calls that a win.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short but sweet. Beautifully written!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssimmy

Short but sweet. Beautifully written!


Thanks a tonn!!
Means a lot to be complimented by a talented author herself 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short n sweet ..!! Nice os...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short and sweet, Very well written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shree1005

Short n sweet ..!! Nice os...


Thanks a tonn!!
Hope to keep writing more and entertaining you guys in here 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShwePoo

Short and sweet, Very well written


Thanks a lot for commenting and making me feel welcome.
Glad you like my work.
Hope to keep writing 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayayayaya u posted it here too
One of ur best works 👏
I can totally imagine Dev-Sona tooo 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

Yayayayaya u posted it here too

One of ur best works 👏
I can totally imagine Dev-Sona tooo 😳


Haanji! Thanks for always loving my work dear ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it...
Short sweet simple and very very very adorable...
Thank You and do write more!!

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