Cold Encounters [DevAkshi OS] - Page 2

So beautiful start

Continued plz

Love to read more

Well well well

A heartiest warm Welcome to the forum dear

Hope u enjoyed here

Originally posted by: blue_shore

I loved it...

Short sweet simple and very very very adorable...

Thank You and do write more!!

Originally posted by: Pilu05

So beautiful start

Continued plz

Love to read more

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Well well well

A heartiest warm Welcome to the forum dear

Hope u enjoyed here

Hey Tannu! I'm Hinal :)

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Tannu! I'm Hinal :)

I'm also a new member on this forum.

This was a short read, but very cute! I could very well imagine the characterization fall perfectly into place with these dialogues, so it was very nicely penned out!

Would love to read more from you! Keep writing :)

PS. I, too, have just posted an OS. It'd be great if you could read it and let me know what you think :) It's called A Poignant Scene

Take care!

Originally posted by: RTme0w

What a coincidence dear! I did give my feedback on your OS just as you did on mine 😊

I guess it got posted at the same moment too 😛

We have amazing telepathy, must say 😆

Thank You for your thoughtful feedback. I'm glad a talented soul like you too enjoyed it 😳

Like yourself, even I have a penchant for writing so was just trying my hand and gaging whether it makes sense in their context 👍🏼

Hope to continue writing on this forum and to see your wonderful works too. God Bless. Tc. 🤗

Originally posted by: basket_101

😆 Yes, I realized after posting the comment

You're welcome! And that is really kind of you 😳

Definitely keep writing because you are very talented! The flow of the story is so smooth in this piece that it really is a treat for the mind to read.

Hope to see more of you around as well 🤗

This was one of those candid feel good OS'S I read.. I can imagine Dev and Sonakshi walking down a street on a cold night and just being themselves.. Love the setting of your OS and also the dialogues..