Devakshi SS Pyar Ke Rang PART5+ IMP NOTE PG18 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hi (since I don't know your name), that's an interesting story you're writing 😊 Enjoyed Dev's arrogant behaviour & Sona's no nonsense attitude... Best part was them knowing each other from before. Do pm me when you update the next part..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Great!!

But why are the behaving like professionals??
Friends to seedha hug karte hain...
Aur yeh hain ki... Mr Dixit... Dr.Bose karte jaa rahe hain???
Anyways cont soon


Well they were friends. But they have their own reasons to behave like this
Anyways thanks for reading
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Pilu05

It was just beautiful

I am starting to love ur storyline... Just awesome


Really love to read Sona ignorance towards Dev

And Dev uncomfortableness about it


Thanks a lot 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Amazingly penned

Thanks for the pm


Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow...it's amazing.. Update next part soon.. Waiting


Thank-you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice updates
Loved it
Both were friends. Liked their meeting which started smoothly but finished with fighting. Now he need her to be his mom nutritionist. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SewwandiVB

Hi (since I don't know your name), that's an interesting story you're writing 😊 Enjoyed Dev's arrogant behaviour & Sona's no nonsense attitude... Best part was them knowing each other from before. Do pm me when you update the next part..


Hey
Thanks a lot for such a warm response
Im glad you liked it
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update :)
Too good :)
Superb :)
Update soon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3


Dr.Sonakshi Bose was very punctual.
She reached Dev's place exactly at 9.
Sh had taken a cab so as not to be late.
She could not afford to have a fight o argument over her coming late.
When she entered, she found Dev siting on the couch. He wasn't ready for office, he was working on his laptop.
He wore a grey colour v neck t-shirt and track pants.
Sona kept drooling over him for a few minutes and Dev as usual was in his work didn't even realise Sona had already arrived.
Sona:( to her self) stop it Sona , u already drooling over him, it's gona be difficult to work with him around all the tym.
Sona: Good morning Mr Dixit!
Dev looking up : oh ur here , good morning miss Bose..
Sona: so where is my patient.
Dev: maa apne room mei hai.
Calling Niki, Nikii ja maa ko bulla ke la.
Nikii: jee bhaiya.
Sona: let her rest , mei unse jake mil Leti hu.
Dev: acha Nikii maa se kaho doctor aa gayi hai.
Nikii :ok
Sona: can I see aunty's reports.
Dev: ya sure, they are in my room I will get them, come along with me , mei apko maa ke Kamre mei le Jaata hu.
Sonakshi simply nods and follows him.
They walk up the stairs to reach Dev s room.
They walk in, while Dev is looking for the file, Sona explores his room, it was quite decent, there were very few pictures of him .
There was a wall full of trophies, Sona was impressed, then her eyes fell on a trophy it was the one he had received in College for winning the football competition.
Sona was lost in her thoughts when Dev called her.
Dev: here I found the file ...(he said walking to her)
Sona: Dev this is the trophy u won in college remember, ( she spoke all exited)
Dev simply said a hm
Sona knew she was getting close to him and he wasn't liking it.
Sona: sorry, let's go.
They left and went to his Mom's room.


Dev: maa ye hai DrBose
Maa: beta yeh toh bilkul doctor nai Lagti aur kitni chori hai Umar mei, aise Dr Bose kyun keh rahe Ho.
Sona: it's okay aunty ji , Mr Dixit ko formal hi Rehna pasand hai, unki chodo ,Mera nam Sonakshi hai... app Mujhe Sona bulao.
Maa: bilkul beta, kitna pyaar nam hai, Sona
Sona: thank you aunty ji.
Dev: Dr Bose , maa ke reports app Dekh lo n accordingly Mujhe Batiye mei aj ghar se office Handel Karunga.
Sona : sir its okay , I can manage, app ja skate hai office.
Dev : it's ok , mei ghar par rukunga.
Sona: okay, ur wish...
Aunty's I Mujhe apse imp baat karni hai.
Dev: kya imp baat.
Sona: mr Dixit... Mei apne patient se baat kr rahi hu, ..
Dev: Ha par kis Barien mei.
Maa: beta usei baat to Karen de.
Sona: aunty, Apki health Kaif weak hai, apko diet follow krna hoga, aunty I promise bas kuch Mahino ki baat hai, phir se app normal diet thoda controlled follow kar sake hai, n aunty diet she app ki health improvement hogi mei gaurantee dete hu.
Maa: ha beta tum itni keh rahi Ho toh. Karunga mei diet follow.
Sona d thanks aunty ji
Dev was quite impressed the way Sona handled his mom.



Soon Dev got back to working from home itself and Sona studies iswari s reports so as to make a chart for her diet.
She did everything and also instructed kichu the house hold help about the same.

Soon they had their lunch.
Ishwari had no option than to eat the food served .
After lunch Ishwari went to her room to rest, so did Neha, Riya and Nikii were not home.
Sona instructed kichu about the evening snacks.

It was almost evening when she went to meet Dev, she had to inform him about a few more tests to be conducted.
As she barged into his room , Dev had jus had a shower and walked out of the bathroom with different clothes but his hair was still dripping wet
Sona went straight and bumped into Dev
She simply dint have the time to think or process what happened, she was anticipating a hard fall , but instead she felt an arm around her waist and she instead fell on Dev, Dev could not handle the sudden movements and he slipped and fell on the bed.
Sona's hand was now resting on devs chest so as to Balance herself.
By jus the touch Dev knew it's Sona m he knew her , he held her protectively making sure of not letting her fall.
Sona felt his hand on her waist, his warm skin , his touch, she just couldn't help loving him .
Still a sense of awakening.
Sona : I'm sorry, I'm sorry ,I'm sorry.
She was hell scared about his reaction.
Dev one the other hand was calm.
Dev: it's ok, you should be careful next time o u might hurt ur self.
Sona: ya I won't let it repeat.
Dev: hmm
On get no response from her.
Dev: Dr Bose...
Sona: hmm..
Dev: Dr Bose Would u mind getting up...
Sona is embarrassed now.
Sona: I'm so sorry
She said trying to get up, but couldn't make it,
Dev held her shoulders n helped her get up.
Sona : I'm really very sorry.
Dev: it's ok, bow why did you come here,
Sona: actually I had to...
She spoke about the report n tests.
The evening snacks and dinner preparation was done.
Sona was leaving now.


Ishwari : beta tum itni der hui hai Akeki kaise Jaogi
Sona ; aj cab se Ayi thi , address Dhundhne mei Asani Ho issliye.
Ishwari: tum ruk o Akeki mat Jao, mei driver se Kheti hu.
Sona : aree anutyji is ki kya zarurat hai, I will manage.
Jus then Dev comes.
Ishwari: beta yeh ghar kaise jayegi
Dev: chalo mei driver de Kheta hu.
Sona: it's ok Mr Dixit il. Manage.
Dev: chalo
They went out, and the driver went off to drop Sona home.
Dev called the driver and made sure she had reached home.

...

So that was the third part, hope u liked it , do read and comment.



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