Devakshi SS Pyar Ke Rang PART5+ IMP NOTE PG18 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh wow yar

Amazing

1st I feel it seem same as the real story but in last line was googleiii ...DevaKshi already knowing each other


Love to read the next part plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

DEV'S OFFICE

(Dev and sona have been college friends , afcourse that was 4-5 years ago. When in their junoir college , not the profesional college afcourse.)

Sona:omg Dev

Dev: dont tell me tum yaha nutritionist appoint hui ho,

Sona: yup

Dev:wat , tum aur nutritionist , seriously...

Sona: so wat tum bhi toh 'The Dev Dixit' ban gaye ho...wait a min, should i be calling you Mr Dixit, or how would Dev sir sound...(she burst out laughing).

Dev: Its not funny , Dr Bose..

Sona: oh hello , call me sona, o evn soankshi wud do, if u wana sound profesional , then call me Dr.Sonakshi, Ye Dr. Bose kisi old khadus doctor ka naam lagta hai

Dev: fine watever.

Sona: watever nai sonakshi,...tum ab tak aise hi khadus ho na, ill call u Mr Dixit now onwards...

waise ..tum delhi mei??

Dev: that was long back..par tum yaha?

Sona: mei tumhare jaise boring nai hu, i love to travel, n explore.

Dev: acha ab discussion ho gaya ho, toh can i get back to work.

Sona: nahi sudhroge, /kahdus ke khadus hi rahoge, wiase mujhe bulaya kyun tha.

Dev: ya please next time mere diet mei changes mat krna, tumhe mere staf ke liye rakha hai , mer liye nai.

sona: oh really... mujhe iss office ke liye as a nutirtionis appoint kiya hai , which includes you .

Dev:so tum sunne nai wali.

Sona: jab tak hu nai sunungi, n chahe tum mere boss ho ya na ho tumahri baat bilkul nai sunungi.

Dev: fine you may leave now.

sona left , dev is alone.

Dev :i know u very well, kisi se jhagda karo na karo...mujhse karne mei bada mza ata hai tumhien...n kahi n kahi is ke piche mera hi behavior hai...but soankshi i seriosly cant help it.

sona went to her cabin

after meeting dev after so many years ,all the old memories resurfaced , she could not belive she actually met dev. It was during their college days that she had a soft corrner for him, her feelings grew stronger as days passed , she liked him for wat her was, but he alwas kept a hard shell around him .

she knew exactly , when he is angry and when is he acting to be angry so that no one gets cloe to him. He was avery reserved person, she tried a lot to help him free his heart and speak out , but all in vain. Insteead she changed her behavior , so as to keep herself away from him just like he wanted.

And that is wat she is going to do now, he dosent want me near him , i will not trouble him she thought to heself.

it was evening , she freshend up and decided to leave, before leaving she remebered she had to call back a patient.

she called neha

Neha: Hello Dr Bose.

Sona: Ms Neha, could u please give me the address details so i can visit ur mom.

Neha: sure.

(she tells her the address)

Sona: Patients Name?

Neha: Mrs.Ishwari Dixit.

Sona: wat , is it Dev Dixits mom..?

Neha: Ya ... u know Dev Bahiya.

Sona: Maam i work at ishwari enerpises as anutritionist.

Neha: oh thats great, it will be easy for u to handel the schedule.

Sona()Hesistantly): you shoud talk to Dev..umm Mr Dixit.

Neha: oh bahi will be ok with it.

Sona: okay i shall talk to him then.

Sona went to Dev's cabin

Sona: (Knocks the door) may i cme in.

Dev(yeh phir aagayi) yes.

Sona: sir , ek imp baat karni hai.

Dev: jaldi bolo tym nai hai mere paas.

Sona: sir i got a call for consulting a patient.

Dev: Dr Bose , ur working for our company, if you wnat to consult to patients please do that after woking hours...and if ur not interested in working here , im ready to accept ur resignation

sona: u knw Mr Dixit, mujhe aoke sath kam karne ka koi shauk nai hai, if i knew its you i habe to work for i would nt have come here...n ya mei yaha app se baat kar ke apka time waste karne nahi ayi hu.

Mujhe apki sister Miss Neha ka call aya tha , you need a nutrtionist for ur mom, and i very well know u wont preffer me over anyone, so i jus came here to talk to you about it... let it be you or ur mom i treat all my patinets equally, so do let me know wat u decide.

Dev: you dont need to worrry i can find my mom the best in wat ever she needs.

Sona: all the best then and let miss Neha know we had a talk over this...also let her know ur opinion.

without wiating for dev to respond she left the place.

This was not easy for sona, Dev was being very difficult to handel...

Sona: i dont have to think about him , he shouldnt be my concern...get a life sona.

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DEV'S HOUSE

Neha talking to dev

Neha: bhai who jo mom ke liye nutritionist hai unse baat hui apki

Dev: ha who thk nai hai, hum dusri dhundte hai.

Neha: bhai agr wh apke office mei kam karti hai toh sje has to be the best.

Dev thinking to himself...kya karu kuch samajh nai aa raha, maa ke liye sona wud alwasys be the best , kitni zidi maa hai sona bhi wiase hi hai.

Dev: okay mei dekhta hu.

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Dev calls Sona

Dev: Dr Bose...

Sona: ya its me(she knew it was dev but decided to ignore).

Dev: I want you to work for me.

Sona: may I knw who am I taking to...

Dev(she dosent recognize my voice):MR DEV DIXIT
Sona: Oh Mr Dixit...but im alredy working for you sir.

Dev: I need afull time nutritonst for my mom, and im appointing you as one.

Sona: wat about office sir.

Dev: you can work there part time , ie only when needed, but my mom needs a full time nutritionist.

Sona: sure sir I treat all my patients equally.

Dev: you should be jining from tomorrow morning ... be here by 9 am.

Sona: sure sir c u @9 ...Good night.

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SO I HOPE YOU PEOPLE LIKED THIS PART

KEEP READING AND DO LEAVE ME YOUR COMMENTS.

BUDDY ME IF YOU WISH TO RECIVE PMS

Edited by dik19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Ohh wow yar

Amazing

1st I feel it seem same as the real story but in last line was googleiii ...DevaKshi already knowing each other


Love to read the next part plz update soon



THANKS A LOT
I HAVE ALREADY UPDATED THE NEXT PART , DO READ AND COMMENT.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Great!!
But why are the behaving like professionals??
Friends to seedha hug karte hain...
Aur yeh hain ki... Mr Dixit... Dr.Bose karte jaa rahe hain???
Anyways cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
It was just beautiful

I am starting to love ur storyline... Just awesome


Really love to read Sona ignorance towards Dev

And Dev uncomfortableness about it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Amazingly penned
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Wow...it's amazing.. Update next part soon.. Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice Update..very different story line
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice updates
Loved it
Both were friends. Liked their meeting which started smoothly but finished with fighting. Now he need her to be his mom nutritionist. Curious to know what happen next. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awesome update
Love it.
Pm me plz

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