Devakshi OS - Of Confessions and Stolen Kisses

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Tune new OS post bhi kar diys aur bataya bhi nahi.. 😡

Chal maf kardiya..just bk home..badme padke unres karungi...

I know m late..but i hv to tell u Behna m in love with your OS ❤️

It was cute d way Dev ws trying to grab her attention while sona was just too engrossed in readding her book..bechara dev 😆

Good to see naughty side of Dev too.. 😳😆

Entire OS beautifully penned down..loved every bit of it..😳

Your write-ups are.making fall in love with them 😳

And ya it was too romantic ☺️ kuch purane yaade bhi taja hogayi..your old write ups.. ok I know m on different forum and I should not talk abt it..but u see adath se majbur 😛😆

Nywaz coming bk to your OS...bas issi tarah likhti reh behna..and as promised I'll b here to read it.. 😳

P.s. hope will get to see something similar soon

Edited by sweetdivya - 9 years ago

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ratika89

@ratika89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I have loved it to the core..!!👏😳

Thanx for writing and looking before are for some more romantic stuff.😛

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1017333

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey ananya.. I assume that is your name going by your username..😛

Thank you so much for all the appreciation you gave me and this story..😃. This is actually short compared to my other stories.. Say 4sides of my A4 pages where I write 8 sides..😛. I reduced the length because I didn't want to type so much through phone..😆.

And yes, I'd want to make an honest confession there is actually no relation of Paithyam and Shona its just that I imagined Erica's dusky rough voice saying this word and loving it so much in my mind that I just had to write it down painting my imagination in the minds of my readers too so just a little creative liberty that's all.. 😳Hope it didn't kill the reading mood??

Oh no! Yaar! Of course not!
It.didn't kill the the reading mood rather I was intrigued!
And yeah my name is an any a.
And don't thank me for the appreciation you deserved it ;)
And I agree imagining Erica saying it would be nice!
And I was just speculating coz no writer does that but you did and I liked it!
Just keep.writing more and more and no need to worry I'm a writer too and I understand
Take care 😊

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Anushka

@Choclate...

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Choclate...
Res...
Will unress it soon and will read it also soon.
Unress*

Hi Kashmi,
OMG, U r such terrific writer.
I am in just love with your writing.
Thanks for continuing this.
The last parts are my fav, I don't know how many times I read it😉
Loved the way he always distract her.
BTW, even I am reading Shiva trilogy's and even Amish is my fav writer😉
The flow of your words were like waterfall and such a beautiful piece is just WOW.
Do write more like thois romantic, cute and passionate one like this.
Sorry for being late as I am really very busy with my studies and tutions

Love,
Anushka

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Lovely os! you write really well. cheers! Keep them coming 😊

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LilyPotter

@LilyPotter

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Kashmi!! Pehle batana tha na rey, ki tune naya OS likha hai.

Kam se kam ek PM hi kar deti!😡

Coming to your OS, I loved it. 😃You have penned it beautifully and no number of words would be sufficient to express its excellence.👏 The feelings were depicted in a subtle yet intense manner, which made for a very refreshing read. Your OS revealed shades of the protagonists which I would not even have thought about.👏 Continue to write such beautiful pieces, and I'm warning you: You better PM me the next time.😡

Writing mein coaching classes lete ho kya?😆