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masooma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Wow! Beautifully written! Absolutely loved it..

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Beautiful⭐️so overwhelming😳 Please continue soon.

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Zaya.hp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Ah! Ah! This is FANTASTIC! I never thought you'd continue this drabble series. Thanks for continuing. You took the whole love story to another level altogether. Your OS gave the clearest picture of what Sonakshi means to Dev! Beautiful! Post the next part SOON!

Edited by Zaya.hp - 9 years ago

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Miaprincess

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Cute!! Nice!! Please update soon..

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.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

It was great!!😳😳

Please cont soon😊😊

Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: juthie_j
Loved it very much...waiting for part b
Update soon

yup working on it. should be up soon.

Originally posted by: kitty1995
just owww
waiting for the update

Thank you.

Originally posted by: gdfss
Thank you for updating ur ff..
Loved it...
Continue soon

Hi.. Thanks for dropping by again.

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: anjy957
Wow! Loved it. It was like poetry.. Soothing and pleasant. Thank you so much for writing. Please continue :)

Thanks for saying that. I find Dev and Sona's relationship has a calming beauty to it. They just flow together. Glad that you could feel it too.

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Khusharni
This. Is. AMAZING.
Please, please, PLEEAASSSEE, write more. I love this Dev in which you see his vulnerable side, and how he's really not as strong as perceived. Hope there are more parts!!

Dev is such a child. And it is not because he loves his mother so much.😉

Dev even though he claimed that he loved Sona the way a man loves a woman, has always behaved like a child. He is such a welcome relief from other leads who push and pull and are usually all over the heroines flirting and asking for more. Don't get me wrong. I want that in their relationship too. But I remember the next day after the proposal when he expressed he wanted to know everything about her and stalked her facebook profile. There was an innocence and vulnerability to it. I found it very refreshing.

And the fact that he gave in so quickly for his mother's happiness actually highlighted how emotional he is. I don't like his stance and the hurt it has caused Sona but this guys loves so unselfishly. He caused hurt to himself too.