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Posted: 9 years ago

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Samee16

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Posted: 9 years ago

You write so well!!!!! I could feel every single word and emotion written. Amazing!

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing OS.. I'm speechless after reading, absolutely loved how you have described the contrasting lives of Sonakshi and Dev and her feelings for him were also beautifully described by you.. Even though words were subtle you could just make out the same torment Dev was going through as Sonakshi..

Lovely writing, wish you'd continue this one and let us know what happens after the kiss and through the kiss and Dev's thoughts before and after the kiss.. Yikes, greedy me.. But please really consider continuing this one it'll be a great story..

It's a good thing that you got this idea off your chest, else we wouldn't get to read something so awesome..

Continue this if you can (please do continue it).. Write another one soon and continue writing it..

Love,

Kashmi

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INSHRA4U

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome os...beautifully written... 👏
pls continue this... 😊

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diksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome.

Really gripping OS.

Loved it 😊

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Samee16
You write so well!!!!! I could feel every single word and emotion written. Amazing!

Thank you. It was after so long that I felt like writing something. Glad you liked it.

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue
Amazing OS.. I'm speechless after reading, absolutely loved how you have described the contrasting lives of Sonakshi and Dev and her feelings for him were also beautifully described by you.. Even though words were subtle you could just make out the same torment Dev was going through as Sonakshi..
Lovely writing, wish you'd continue this one and let us know what happens after the kiss and through the kiss and Dev's thoughts before and after the kiss.. Yikes, greedy me.. But please really consider continuing this one it'll be a great story..

It's a good thing that you got this idea off your chest, else we wouldn't get to read something so awesome..

Continue this if you can (please do continue it).. Write another one soon and continue writing it..

Love,
Kashmi

Hi Kashmi.. Thanks for so much praise. This story has so much potential and I sincerely hope it does not get lost between Mami and Khatri. Dev and Sonakshi's story cannot be childish/ filmy. Unless their emotions are tangled and passion is involved, I cannot see Dev commit. He is hard nut to crack. Let me see if I can get into his head. I am very bad with full fanfiction (no discipline) but OS I think I can manage it.