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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96
Aww this was so cute :)
Thank you so much for the PM 😳
Loved it 👏

You are welcome for the PM. Glad you like it.

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
wonderful! brilliantly written...do write more!
and thanks for the pm

U are good for my confidence in writing. I'll try to write more. If you have ideas share it, maybe I can write about that.

Originally posted by: vidyaniru
Awesome!! Both parts very well written! Dev's thoughts and emotions were fab!

Dev was very difficult to write - him being a guy and a mysterious moody one at that. But as I wrote I realized how alone he is. And how much he needs Sona in his life.

Glad you liked my interpretation.

Originally posted by: mouli021
Wow...I've no words dear..it's truly amazing...you've portrayed dev's character so well...👏
And thanks for the PM...😊

Thank you.. It means a lot when u guys like my Dev.. but then I think Dev is a fabulous hero.. He doesn't manhandle Sona.. Is sensitive and caring to all the females present in Dixit and Bose houses. I think I am falling in love with him too.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: jasleen_singh
seriously don't have any words.. this was just too great.. such a great story really loved it.. hope you write more on this forum :)

Am glad you liked it.. I am thinking how to go ahead.. One shots are easy as they are suspended in time.. but continuing it, is difficult. It could go either way.

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz
OMG !! This is getting better and better!
Dear writer, you are a magician and now I am under your spell.
Plz write more!

I am flying above the earth now.😆 Thanks for such an ego boost.

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem
Wow
Its lovely
Thanks for the pm

Thank you for coming again and continue to read my story.

Originally posted by: Shree1005
Simply awesome... Very well written...!!!!

Thanks for the appreciation.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sneharay
Beautiful..
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: juthie_j
it's BEAUTIFUL 👏
I loved it to the core
You've peened down so brilliantly...

Thanks both of you.. Thanks for calling this story beautiful. Falling in love should be beautiful. And for Dev and Sona.. These two have just captivated me... I am eagerly waiting for them to fall in love. Sona has but Dev has miles to go right now both in my story and the serial.. He is getting interested in the ides of Sona.. Don't know how much he has thought about Sona... Anyways till then.. Just trying my hands about it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Zaya.hp
FANTASTIC! And such a simple word wouldn't do even the slightest justice to what you've written. And you've figured out Dev pretty well too. How he knows nothing but to don the role of a protector, how he didn't know he wanted something for himself. BEAUTIFUL! One of the best I've ever read. Please, please do continue. It is so easy to get lost into your writing. And this part was amazing. If I thought the first part was fabulous, this is even more. Please continue this series of drabbles!

Thanks Zaya.. I wasn't sure what I was doing with Dev but the fact that you found this part to be better than Sona's, I guess I did right. Sona was easy to write... Educated, Liberal, modern working girl waiting for love but Dev.. he still has to make up his mind whether he would like to fall in ishq wala love. Lets see what he does after the kiss ends.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: INSHRA4U
i am speechless...this is one of the best stories i have ever read...
u hv described dev's feelings n emotins so well...
amazing writter u are... pls write more... 😊

Thanks a lot for all your praise. What can I say Dev inspired me. I'll try and write more.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: msnayak
Amazing... Wow... So so .. Good
Keep writing...

I'll try my luck if I can take forward this story.. If you have any particular direction you'd like the story to go in, do tell me..

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Wonderful update😊

Thanks for coming on this thread again.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Love your collection.

OMG! You're magnificent, Madame.

Hope to always keep reading your work.

I am in awe of you right now.

Awww! Dev and Sona are so adorable!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SewwandiVB
This was A-maazing... Could grasp the emotional side of Sonakshi & imagine the entire situation. You have jotted down every little detail about what she felt for him so nicely & expressively. Great job, thoroughly enjoyed...
Do write more & if you are able to, do pm if you write further about DevAkshi...😊

I am glad you liked Sona.. She is so ordinary and yet so extra ordinary in her own way.. I admit I identify with her seeing as I am of same age group.. am a workaholic.. am frank and independent.. and am waiting for my mr. right.

I hope you like Dev's POV too. Not sure if you read it on Page 8.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: gowripriya
beautiful 😳
thanks for the pm dr

Thanks for taking time to read this.

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Awsome dear...keep it up..

Thanks for the appreciation.

Originally posted by: Ksgrkfan
Oh my God!!!!! You have to continue this, I'm telling you. I love this entire drabble. It's so detailed and the descriptions are ossom. You're an ossom writer. Keep up the good work and continue soon

Ok.. Ok .. Getting ready to write some more about Dev and Sona. Thanks a lot for liking my work