OS:Where It All Began? - In the Rain UPDATED PG 7 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

A very very beautiful and love filled fulfilling ending.. I loved it.. Just can't wait to see Dev's romantic side in the show too.. Your OS just makes me very very anxious for that track.. Keep writing more and more you write beautifully..

Love,

Kashmi

Originally posted by: Choclate...

Wow, Amazing.
All words are like merry singing by your writing.
Applause👏 and take a bow yaar
The way U described or said those all words were So So So Beautiful.
Dev's feelings would have been exactly this beautiful and pure like U wrote.
In Love with your writing😳
Please write more like this Lily.
And Thank U so much Lily for having written this for my please.
I am very overwhelmed by this.😊
Thank U so much Lily.

With Lots Of Love,
Anushka

P.S.: I am second to comment on 2nd part, Yesss *Childlike glee*😆

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Beautiful!!

Originally posted by: diksha0102

Lovely update.

Really nice.

Originally posted by: ananya925

There's just one thing I'd like to say . . .



Its PERFECT!

Damn you nailed it!
This is really portrays the hopeless romantic in a practical me...actually in everyone!
There's always a time a part in everyone's life which loves the silly things they used to hate earlier just bcoz of one person who turned their world upside down and apparently people love their world turned upside down :)

This was so so so perfectly portrayed that I could see Dev thinking all this and looking lovingly sona.

I mean this os is like the terrific and beautiful epilogue of a damn-too-good and awesome novel.

The rain...which was the theme is so romantic but you made it unique in the devAkshi way.

It showed the love of Dev for sonakshi...a POV which is always left untold in the show!

I loved the way you voiced out his thoughts. The
Thing why I loved it the most is dev's POV.

And how can I forget sona hugging Dev and her cute antics...it made me go aww!
Just keep.writing more and more and more !!!!
I love love love u for writing it! :)
Take care,
All the love,
Ananya

Originally posted by: lasyap3

This OS gave me feeling of completeness ... Lovely