Shopping Blues ~ A DevAkshi Two Shot (Completed Pg 4)!!

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Ohh dear! That was lightning fast!😆😳

Aapse fast nahi tha madam. 😛 😉

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Hajra

@-Haju-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

OMG that's such an adorable ts

Totally in love it

I really like sonakshi's character

Please do write more

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Mahadevi

@Morana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

It's so so good and I needed it like a tonic after today's episode. Thanks Mahi 🤗

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Mahi ( hope i can address you like this)

This was beautiful! Its seriously a notch higher than the previous one so brush aside any thoughts of this not being up to the mark.

I love how i can visualise all that u write in my head. And trust me, that's huge girl. I have a ton of things running through my mind. Most of it is pointless things.

Lol here i was supposed to write a tragic one shot on twinkle amd kunj and here i am smiling like an idiot after reading this

So imma gonna stop here before i eat up more of ur time

This was awesome.

Don't doubt youself

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Just read it in one go. Loved the both part. Perfectly written down for Dev n sona.

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Mahi🤗

so nice😳😳😳

hilarious loved it😆

ma da laadla bigad gaya😆😆😆

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1017333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Mahishee it was an awesome entertaining piece and I loved it but yeah as you said we expected more...but don't lose heart. We know you're a great writer and will write awesome stories :)
And sona's dialogues were toh phadooo!!! ;)