CV's and dialogue writers of kd

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Until now, in my head I was still justifying kum's character because I thought she still thinks that aru framed her for tulsi's murder and tried to protect aaba...but after yesterday's epiosode I don't understand her hatred anymore. I am sure she knows that under all circumstances jairaj and aaru arenot together.
Both Aradhya and shravani are from the same family...so how is shravani better than Aradhya. And if the fight was between blood and upbringing (where she claimed that she has done a better job with Aradhya... at the swapping truth episode)...shouldn't she be choosing Aradhya, at that point she was ready to take her also.

In a way I don't understand at all what is kumu fighting for now...aaba has accepted that he was wrong, he has not killed tulsi, Aradhya has not framed her...so what is she supposed to achieve now by playing all the dirty tricks?

All this while we thought it was David who has amnesia... but just realised that it only and only cv's of kdland

They could have played on each and every emotion of all the individuals so well when the truth was out...kumu mourning and repenting...Aradhya's reaction...aryan's...and aara would have absolutely nailed the sequence... It would have been sad but worth watching

Instead of that they brought this pregnancy drama...which was so not reqd...Even if they wanted it should have come later...

Dialogue writers, for our own sanity...we shd probably use mute button on our remotes when Aradhya/kumu/shravani/jairaj/bhamini...open their mouths

So in totality...kudos to CV's and dialogue writers for completely loosing it...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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exactly yar dun know y kd cvs spoiled this beautiful show,also dey r not paying attention to wardrobe of main leads but giving beautiful dresses to side leads
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Posted: 8 years ago
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In one line: the show has lost its charm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I too felt cheated with the truth swap storyline...there so many things they could have done or play around with but have chose not to. For instance they should have included:

- Shashwat and Tulsi scene, two people who knew each other but are not in good terms due to Saras so it would be good to to see how they felt about raising one another child or offer a closure on their relation
- should have included a scene to explore around Pavitra's feelings toward aaru her own blood over aryan her nurtured child ...how does she feel about raising a devasdi child or knowing her own child was raised by the clan who she consider beneath her...how will she look at aryan after lnowing the truth about his identity
- pavitra and Tulsi scene would be preferable too...will they exchange the children back? Pavitra adore aryan for being the heir of their family. Ye motehr and son had a good bond..he was her world not even Gayu came close back then whereas tulsi adore aaru more than anything so will the mothers be attempted to exchange the children again to keep their nutured child or be a war with one another to keep both children.
- Tulsi once said to Kumu and arayn that she could never forget the child who she raised with her heart and soul and when PvR express his dislike on Pavitra wanting to keep aaru with them..,she very passionately yell out..'Abhasaab, I gave birth to her' she couldn't let go of the child she gave birth to...does that mean she consider her own bloosline superior or did she develop some strong feeling during pregnancy that she thought that baby was arayn that why she remain close to him but when she find out the truth...she kept her real birth child. What does that mean...whereas rulsi couldn't forgwt the child she raised, the child who motivate her to live when she had no one. That should been explored more deeply...will both mothers change their minds or will become more closer to aryan after claming down
- Tulsi vs Kumu shoidl have been included Kumu had deliberately kept her true child away and as a consequence she couldn't forget the child who she raised but wasn't hers nor she could find that instant maternal feeling for her true child...giving her true child to their enemy family ...I would expect tulsi to be full of rage to Kumu.

So many things that should been included but was amiss
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@ charmgal, I so completely agree with you...
I am really appalled at the way they are building this story...even if they had to stretch, they are doing it all wrong.

For instance for Aradhya, they completely overlooked or forgot about giving her and tulsi the closure which was so required as that was the purest and the best relationship in kd

Even now, they have completely ruined her character, even if they wanted her to fight for shravani and against Aryan, they could have played on the fact that she herself grew up without a father and obviously given her better dialogues...

I am sure there is a team which works together, do they have no one to keep track of trp's or no one to do research or re-read the script etc. Don't they need any kind of training for writing dialogues or script...

They have such amazing cast be it Indiraji , Uday Ji, Shravan or Sana, I feel bad from the bottom of my heart for all of them. It is only because of them that they are getting whatever trp's they are...anyone else ...people would have given up long time back.

@mani,...dresses yes...on a lighter note..our leads dont need designer dresses because they can act ;)...expressions do it all for them...





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharmGal

I too felt cheated with the truth swap storyline...there so many things they could have done or play around with but have chose not to. For instance they should have included:

- Shashwat and Tulsi scene, two people who knew each other but are not in good terms due to Saras so it would be good to to see how they felt about raising one another child or offer a closure on their relation
- should have included a scene to explore around Pavitra's feelings toward aaru her own blood over aryan her nurtured child ...how does she feel about raising a devasdi child or knowing her own child was raised by the clan who she consider beneath her...how will she look at aryan after lnowing the truth about his identity
- pavitra and Tulsi scene would be preferable too...will they exchange the children back? Pavitra adore aryan for being the heir of their family. Ye motehr and son had a good bond..he was her world not even Gayu came close back then whereas tulsi adore aaru more than anything so will the mothers be attempted to exchange the children again to keep their nutured child or be a war with one another to keep both children.
- Tulsi once said to Kumu and arayn that she could never forget the child who she raised with her heart and soul and when PvR express his dislike on Pavitra wanting to keep aaru with them..,she very passionately yell out..'Abhasaab, I gave birth to her' she couldn't let go of the child she gave birth to...does that mean she consider her own bloosline superior or did she develop some strong feeling during pregnancy that she thought that baby was arayn that why she remain close to him but when she find out the truth...she kept her real birth child. What does that mean...whereas rulsi couldn't forgwt the child she raised, the child who motivate her to live when she had no one. That should been explored more deeply...will both mothers change their minds or will become more closer to aryan after claming down
- Tulsi vs Kumu shoidl have been included Kumu had deliberately kept her true child away and as a consequence she couldn't forget the child who she raised but wasn't hers nor she could find that instant maternal feeling for her true child...giving her true child to their enemy family ...I would expect tulsi to be full of rage to Kumu.

So many things that should been included but was amiss




I echo you 👏

For me, like for many KD fans, apart from AaRa, Tulsi & Aru's bond was the essence of the show.

They showed the baby swap revelation beautifully, but ruined the consequences. The build up was non existent. First of all I wanted to see Pavithra squirm after knowing the baby swap truth. I wanted to see her tears, guilt & desperation in trying to make things right with Aru & Aru not giving her bhaav/ being weirded out .

This we did not get. They could have spent a month on this & then revealed the swap to the entire family.

Further, Tulsi & Aru's dynamics post reveal could have been shown. We got solo scenes of both saying that nothing had changed between them. But it would have been awesome to see them interacting with each other. You know what would have been more interesting?

To see AaRa moving into Krishna niwas as a married couple & having Aryan's grahpravesh rather than Aru's 😆

I also wanted a better Aaba-Aryan & Aryan-Pav show down. How would the in-character Aabasaheb treat Aryan? With hate initially sure. But would he also see a missed opportunity since he no longer has a male heir. And Pav? We never got any Aryan Shashwat Pavitra scenes


Coming to AaRa, okay we got a beautiful wedding scene in mandir. But again the CVs followed it up with crap storyline. Why couldn't we have had more of AaRa trying to figure out their new identities together & trying to manoeuvre through the new relationships together? They could have shown some scenes like some heirloom which Aryan used to carelessly throw about & now they realise it belongs actually to Aru & the tension that prevails after that. They could have shown a scene in which AaRa wish that the truth had never come out. The possibilities are endless!

Coming to Kumu - this was such a great character. Again the possibilities are endless with her! From the beginning she was sort of a Krishna character with all the "doris" of all relationships in her hand. From the start she was plotting for AaRa since she always wanted Aabasaheb to die from shock that his grand daughter was married into a Devdasi family. But I still believe the old Kumu had a soft spot for Aru. She loved to manipulate the girl but she was obsessed with her merely because she was PVR's poti.
How I wish the Kumu-Aru relationship could also have been explored into something good: Kumu continuing to manipulate Aru but with a good purpose vis a vis Krishna driving Arjun's chariot. A
And then repenting badly

Coming next to overall plot - they needed to retain the KD storyline because that's what was unique about KD. They could have shown post swap reveal, Aryan becoming King & as per customs egged on by the village crowd & Kumu, entitled to have Aru as his KD & the ensuing chaos & AaRa manoeuvring through that jungle.

So many cool possibilities
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I won't cry over the past, it's all covered by you guys perfectly.I m going to cry about the present.
A show about Krishnadasi.One twin uses the practice to get what she wants from the other. As Kumudini pointed out to Pvr is parallel to her story with Pvr's sister and how he used to treat her for this.Today the same is happening to his grand daughters.Rather than playing on those emotions that one scene was the end of it.Pvr didn't care much and Kumu went back to chasing Aradhya.

Again Shravani uses a wrong practice to get what she wants but it never backfires on her at all. I m begining to wonder why was this practice abolished if they were treated this well by everyone.Do villagers really listen to anyone over their beliefs? They could have shown her trap in her own web thus highlighting the dark side of it.But they are more interested in sautan drama.The kind of mockery that has been done by this show to all those devdasi's is pathetic.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eloquent




I echo you 👏

For me, like for many KD fans, apart from AaRa, Tulsi & Aru's bond was the essence of the show.

They showed the baby swap revelation beautifully, but ruined the consequences. The build up was non existent. First of all I wanted to see Pavithra squirm after knowing the baby swap truth. I wanted to see her tears, guilt & desperation in trying to make things right with Aru & Aru not giving her bhaav/ being weirded out .

This we did not get. They could have spent a month on this & then revealed the swap to the entire family.

Further, Tulsi & Aru's dynamics post reveal could have been shown. We got solo scenes of both saying that nothing had changed between them. But it would have been awesome to see them interacting with each other. You know what would have been more interesting?

To see AaRa moving into Krishna niwas as a married couple & having Aryan's grahpravesh rather than Aru's 😆

I also wanted a better Aaba-Aryan & Aryan-Pav show down. How would the in-character Aabasaheb treat Aryan? With hate initially sure. But would he also see a missed opportunity since he no longer has a male heir. And Pav? We never got any Aryan Shashwat Pavitra scenes


Coming to AaRa, okay we got a beautiful wedding scene in mandir. But again the CVs followed it up with crap storyline. Why couldn't we have had more of AaRa trying to figure out their new identities together & trying to manoeuvre through the new relationships together? They could have shown some scenes like some heirloom which Aryan used to carelessly throw about & now they realise it belongs actually to Aru & the tension that prevails after that. They could have shown a scene in which AaRa wish that the truth had never come out. The possibilities are endless!

Coming to Kumu - this was such a great character. Again the possibilities are endless with her! From the beginning she was sort of a Krishna character with all the "doris" of all relationships in her hand. From the start she was plotting for AaRa since she always wanted Aabasaheb to die from shock that his grand daughter was married into a Devdasi family. But I still believe the old Kumu had a soft spot for Aru. She loved to manipulate the girl but she was obsessed with her merely because she was PVR's poti.
How I wish the Kumu-Aru relationship could also have been explored into something good: Kumu continuing to manipulate Aru but with a good purpose vis a vis Krishna driving Arjun's chariot. A
And then repenting badly

Coming next to overall plot - they needed to retain the KD storyline because that's what was unique about KD. They could have shown post swap reveal, Aryan becoming King & as per customs egged on by the village crowd & Kumu, entitled to have Aru as his KD & the ensuing chaos & AaRa manoeuvring through that jungle.

So many cool possibilities




I agree with your points...this is what I meant that there is so many ways the makers could gone with the truth swap plot but they have messed everything around that there no going back and no logic exist in the story. I couldn't believe that there hadnt been at least one proper scene with aryan and his parents! It's doesn't make sense, Pavitra was more of a mother to aryan than to any of her other children. One word from her...he would obey as a dutiful son of his mother...all she had do was to tell him to marry Aaru and he would have done it. That too happily as he love aaru, the duaghter of Pavitra, who was also his mother who had full authority over him. Not even Kumu could stop him from obeying his mother who raised him. And more importantly Pavitra in her true character mode would have done that. She would have order aryan to marry her daughter to prevent her life from being spoiled and aryan in his true characater mode would have brought his nuture family back to the mansion in their rightful place once he had found out that PvR wasn't the one who shot tulsi, but the makers have deliberately limit and avoid aryan having any scenes with Pavitra or any other Rao members as they don't want that to happen and want to prolong this silly Shravnai drama! Kumu used to so clever and now to see her becoming dumb was disappointing and unbearable too. At the moment pvr is only likeable character. Aru is so irritating and not her ususal self and aryan is not doing anything to prove his innocence this is equally annoying. But less compared to aaru. I think people are only watching or reading the LUs is due to Shrana. Their unique chemistry as AaRa continue to persuade me to come here and check the updates to see and hope if the makers have come to their senses! This Shravani track is th worse one and make no sense at all.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharmGal




I agree with your points...this is what I meant that there is so many ways the makers could gone with the truth swap plot but they have messed everything around that there no going back and no logic exist in the story. I couldn't believe that there hadnt been at least one proper scene with aryan and his parents! It's doesn't make sense, Pavitra was more of a mother to aryan than to any of her other children. One word from her...he would obey as a dutiful son of his mother...all she had do was to tell him to marry Aaru and he would have done it. That too happily as he love aaru, the duaghter of Pavitra, who was also his mother who had full authority over him. Not even Kumu could stop him from obeying his mother who raised him. And more importantly Pavitra in her true character mode would have done that. She would have order aryan to marry her daughter to prevent her life from being spoiled and aryan in his true characater mode would have brought his nuture family back to the mansion in their rightful place once he had found out that PvR wasn't the one who shot tulsi, but the makers have deliberately limit and avoid aryan having any scenes with Pavitra or any other Rao members as they don't want that to happen and want to prolong this silly Shravnai drama! Kumu used to so clever and now to see her becoming dumb was disappointing and unbearable too. At the moment pvr is only likeable character. Aru is so irritating and not her ususal self and aryan is not doing anything to prove his innocence this is equally annoying. But less compared to aaru. I think people are only watching or reading the LUs is due to Shrana. Their unique chemistry as AaRa continue to persuade me to come here and check the updates to see and hope if the makers have come to their senses! This Shravani track is th worse one and make no sense at all.



Exactly, ShraNa & hopes of redemption (even though I know they're slim) make me come back. I literally watch the show on mute & unmute only if interested:(

I'm hoping now only for groom-swap in the common marriage mandap. I imagine Aryan will be ecstatic & Aru annoying-but-secretly-happy. Also it's the only way AaRa will stay married to each other & the CVs will still have some plot left in the show.

But I guess they will go ahead with Uday-fication of KD land & all that it entails
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Posted: 8 years ago
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But, if Aru and Uday are acting...there should be no wedding drama for the two ...also gayatri and David would not let that happen...so no swapping I would imagine...
Considering it is color's channel, where they have not gotten the leads married in the recent past in any serial...except kasam...I would just keep my fingers crossed and hope that aaba finds the truth before it's too late






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