TS: The Leap (Update 4 on page 4) Completed!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Because Sahana asked me to... So this one is for you! It probably only two or three shots... Hope you guys like it.

This is going to be probably two or three shots, I'll add the final update later today or tomorrow!

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4 years 10 months later...

Life can never be trusted fully. It gives you dreams and hopes only to take it all away the next day and gives you the most difficult path to get what was yours in the first place.

4 years have passed since Krishna had moved to London to complete her degree. Every day was the same. She entered the university at 8 AM sharp, with Radhay smiling and waving at her as she enters. Every day, she stops at the gate for a few seconds looking at Radhay, only to get back to the real busy world.

Dr Sahay, please wait for a second!' The familiar voice made Krishna stop. She turned around to see Dr Batra coming towards her.

Krishna: Yes, Dr Batra?

Dr Batra: Dr Sahay, how are you today?

Krishna: I am good, and you?

Dr Batra: Good too, thanks. Dr Sahay, I have noticed that every day you stop at the gate for a while staring at empty space. May I ask what's that about?

Krishna: Nothing Dr Batra. The empty space is my strength. Do you want to say something?

Dr Batra: Yes. Well in about two months time you'll be a qualified doctor. Have you thought about your future?

Krishna: Yes, well I'll go back to India...

Dr Batra: What if I give you an opportunity here? Well, as it is, you've topped your class every year and the department knows you'll be the top of your class this year too. So the London Hospital wants to offer you a job as an oncologist in training.

Krishna: Thank you, Dr Batra. It's a great position but I think I'll have to...

Dr Batra: Don't say anything just yet. You have two months to think about it. Give us your answer then. You don't have anything left in India. It will be best for you to stay.

With this, Dr Batra leaves.

Krishna: No Dr Batra, you're wrong, my whole life is in India...

As Krishna starts walking towards her class, her phone rings. Without even looking at the caller id she knew who would be at the other end. Smilingly, she answers the call.

Krishna: Hello Naini

Naini: Hello bhabi, kasi ho ap?

Krishna: I'm good, tum kasi ho?

Naini: Hum b theek hain bhabi.

They both knew that now only silence will follow. For the last 4 years, that's how they've conversed every single day. The silence meant everything was fine.

Krishna could not gather her courage to ask Naini about Veer, or ma. She knew things and emotions were too complicated there.

Naini did not want to burden Krishna with all the hatred Sunaina had for Krishna nor did she want to tell her the struggles of her dadda in jail.

Krishna: Naini, humari class agae. I have to go now. Apna khyl rakhna.

Naini: Okay bhabi, ap b apna khyl rakhna. See you soon bhabi.

With a heavy heart and a smile on her face, Krishna enters her class.

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It's been 4 years since Veer was in jail. Being a doctor had helped him keep his sanity. He had been asked by the jail authorities to work as a doctor for the prisoners. Veer had jumped at the opportunity.

It was the usual Monday morning. He was in his small cabin, provided by the authorities, busy with his patients. He knew Naini would be showing up soon. She's the only one he had agreed to meet in all these years.

Prison guard: Doctor sahab. Apki behn agayn. Mulakat ka wakt hogaya h.

Veer anxiously gets up and goes to the meeting room to meet his chutki. He had noticed that in the past few years she had grown up so much. He was glad that Shashank and her relationship had only strengthened with time. Both of them had taken over all his responsibilities.

Naini looks at his brother.

Naini: Dadda, kasay ho ap?

Veer: Theek hoon. Tum kasi ho?

Naini: Hum b theek hain...

Veer: Aur ma...

Naini: Ma bhi theek hain. Apko bht yaad karti hain... dadda 4 saal hogae... aik dafa ma say tu mil layn...

Veer: No, Naini.

Naini: Par kyu...

Veer: Kyu k it was as much ma's fault as mine. I can't see her in jail - but she needs to be punished too. Aur phr uno ne mere Krishna k sath jo kuch kia...

Naini: Dadda...

Veer: Krishna kasi h? Uski parhai kasi ja ri h...

Naini: Dadda, bhabi bilkul theek hain. 2 months me she'll be a doctor. Woh wapis aa rahi hain 2 months me. Aur 2 months me ap b release ho jao gae...

Veer: I'm so proud of her. Pata ni kasay samna kar paon ge me uska...

Naini: Dadda, please. Stop blaming yourself. Even bhabi forgave you, samjhti hain woh apko. Janti hain k woh aik accident tha. Apne ma ko tu saza dae di but bhabi say b milnay say inkar kar dia tha...

Veer: Haan ta ke woh mujhe chor dae aur apni zindagi bna sakay. Mere waja say already usko bht kuch sehna parha h...

Naini: But dadda, woh aj bhi apsay utna he pyar karti hain...

Prisoner guard: Doctor sahb, Time khtm. Apko chalna hoga...

Veer nods at the guard.

Veer: Apna khyl rakhna Naini, aur ma k b...

Naini: Don't worry dadda. Bus 2 months aur... apko ma, ghar aur apka hospital wasay ka wasay he milay ga...

Veer: Shashank ko thank you bolna. Mere sentence k badh usne ghar aur hospital ki responsibility bht achay say sambhali h...

Naini: Dadda, bahir nikal k khud thank you bol dijye ga...

Veer leaves the room while Naini looks on... Two months more and then her family will be together again...

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Update 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150074686

Update 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150076500

Update 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150079251

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Thabassum19 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Arre wah someone is back with short stories ...
First I want to thank you ...for this TS ⭐️ ...
Second that was brilliant...I guess every single member in this forum would want this to happen if there is leap and seperation...coming up on the show ...let's be positive and wish for good...

Nice aneeqa... ⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's so good Aneeqa, so heart wrenching and I think this will be the best future track for KCL, it meets the standard of the show. I really wish, whetever you have written so beautifully, makers follow the same because this track will be the most logical. 😊😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow supppeErrRbbb it is !! 👏 u need to be in creatives team dear cvz ki toh chutti krdi tumne !
Wish they'll show smthng like this after d leap in d show 😳
I don't knw what & how they'll gng to show but m positive & this was much needed sooo a BIG Thank yew my super hot model 🤗 😉
Loved reading it
But y it is only three shots ? Make it ten shot for me plz or ss plz I want to read more m greedy now 😆
Tq for this
Was missing yew :(

Ps: plz make it ten shots for me pleeejj I request waise bhi TS means ten shots for me 😆
Edited by HarJen4evr - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabassum19

Arre wah someone is back with short stories ...

First I want to thank you ...first this ...
Second that was brilliant...I guess every single member in this forum would want this to happen if there is leap and seperation...coming up on the show ...let's be positive and wish for good...

Nice aneeqa... ⭐️


Thank you Thabz... I hope this happens or something along these lines. I just don't want to see a divorce track - or hatred of any sort!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Curious_Renee

It's so good Aneeqa, so heart wrenching and I think this will be the best future track for KCL, it meets the standard of the show. I really wish, whetever you have written so beautifully, makers follow the same because this track will be the most logical. 😊😊


Thanks, Renee, I hope so too. Something different is what I am hoping for...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: HarJen4evr

Wow supppeErrRbbb it is !! 👏 u need to be in creatives team dear cvz ki toh chutti krdi tumne !
Wish they'll show smthng like this after d leap in d show 😳
I don't knw what & how they'll gng to show but m positive & this was much needed sooo a BIG Thank yew my super hot model 🤗 😉
Loved reading it
But y it is only three shots ? Make it ten shot for me plz or ss plz I want to read more m greedy now 😆
Tq for this
Was missing yew :(

Ps: plz make it ten shots for me pleeejj I request waise bhi TS means ten shots for me 😆


Thank you, babes... 🤗 three shots because I can't revisit ideas later. I have an idea. I write it down and then post it. I'll write something new for you next weekend 😃

Miss u too, been a little busy since its only mum and me at home. My sister returns on Monday so I'll have more time then!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: annx


Thank you, babes...🤗three shots because I can't revisit ideas later. I have an idea. I write it down and then post it. I'll write something new for you next weekend 😃

Miss u too, been a little busy since its only mum and me at home. My sister returns on Monday so I'll have more time then!

okay my cute super hot model 😎 I'll be waiting for it !!

Btw where did ur sister go ?
@ her in-laws ?
And since u & Mom is there so did u help her in any work ? 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: HarJen4evr

okay my cute super hot model 😎 I'll be waiting for it !!

Btw where did ur sister go ?
@ her in-laws ?
And since u & Mom is there so did u help her in any work ? 😛


Haan, to her in laws. Shadi thee koi

And nope 😆😛 but then we ordered food so mum didn't have to work too... 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is a shorter update! There are two more updates after this one. Hopefully will post those two update today too...

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2 months later...

It's a famous saying, no pain, no gain. But sometimes, when you lose everything only to gain what you desire, you realize that happiness was also lost.

Krishna was full of emotions. She was scared, anxious, happy and sad. She had returned to India after 5 long lonely years. She was Dr Krishna Sahay today. Yet, the thought did not bring her any pride. On the contrary, it brought her pain. She had lost so much over the years, that her dream being fulfilled did not bring any sort of happiness to her.

She stood at the airport, waiting for a cab only to realize a man waving at her. She had explicitly instructed that no one should come to pick her up. She had a few stops to make before she reached home.

Man: Bhabi ji, mujhe Naini memsab ne bheja h, gari k sath. Layn apna saman dae dain!

Krishna smiled. She should've known better. Trust Naini to defy instructions and find a way. Thank you, Naini'.

Veer was being released today. His 7-year sentence had been reduced to 5 because of his services as a doctor at the prison. The idea of freedom was not bringing him any sort of comfort or happiness. The years in prison had by no means ended his guilt.

Veer had explicitly instructed Naini to ensure no one shows up. He had something to do before he went home - a task that was pending for 5 long years...

After completing those tiresome formalities, he steps out of prison only to see Krishna standing in front of him. She looked as beautiful as always. He slowly walks towards her.

Even after 5 long years in prison, he looked as handsome as always. He looks tired and sad though'.

They stood in front of one another. It seemed like yesterday when they had last hugged, and yet, so much has surpassed since then.

London had not changed anything. He could still see her sindoor and mangalsutra. Only if you would hate me, curse me and punish me, would I be able to forgive myself'.

'How could I hate you? I know it was a mistake. I know how much you regretted it. I know you were already punishing yourself long before you confessed. I know it was an accident'. Krishna thought as she stood looking at the sad guilty looking Veer.

They stood there for what seemed like an eternity, looking into one another, lost in each other. They wanted to talk, hug, and cry. There was so much to talk about. They were still so much in love that it hurt. Yet, the silence stretched. Tears welled up in their eyes...

Driver: Madam, chalyn?

They looked at the driver, nodded, and got into the car.

Driver: Madam, kahan chalna h?

Veer and Krishna, together: Mandir

They looked at one another and they knew. They knew that now that they were together, things will get fine, eventually!

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Edited by annx - 6 years ago

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