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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very emotional chapter anny...
Shuklaian was angry and furious over veer and Krishna...she never wants to forgive them , for taking away radhe from her...but somewhere she realizes that they are not at fault ...may be tats y , somewhere in the corner of heart , she yearned to watch Krishna...
KrishVeer being ideal human beings wanted to seek her forgiveness ,
Shukla gave all the responsibility to Bela? 😲 well that's new ...
Let's see what epilogue holds...
Thanks Anny...that was great⭐️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thabassum19

Very emotional chapter anny...

Shuklaian was angry and furious over veer and Krishna...she never wants to forgive them , for taking away radhe from her...but somewhere she realizes that they are not at fault ...may be tats y , somewhere in the corner of heart , she yearned to watch Krishna...
KrishVeer being ideal human beings wanted to seek her forgiveness ,
Shukla gave all the responsibility to Bela? 😲 well that's new ...
Let's see what epilogue holds...
Thanks Anny...that was great⭐️


Because to me the only way the change of attire make sense is that Shuklain is lost in her own grief and Shukla has handed over everything to Bela rani. Bela is the only person who would go all modern...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very well written Aneeqa. You have kept essence of all the characters intact👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Wow Aneeqa, I wish, creative team has your kind of people in their show. I love your tracks and I want all this too happen. You are a very good writer.😊😊 Thank you for this.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is the final and very short update. I hope you guys enjoyed it!

**************************************************************************************************** The Sahay Mansion

Sunaina was restlessly walking up and down the room. Her son was returning after 5 long years. He had not forbidden her to visit him, not that it had stopped her from trying. Every time she had shown up, he had refused to meet her. It had pained her. It was all because of her'.

She was hoping Krishna would not show up. Naini had stopped talking to her a long time ago. She asked Naini, time and again about when Veer was coming or why did they not go pick him up but she had not received any satisfying answers. Well, he'll be home soon. Sunaina was looking forward to seeing her son.

The bell rings. Sunaina runs to the door and opens the door to see both Veer and Krishna standing together.

Sunaina: Veer...

Veer gives her a half-hearted smile. He sees Naini coming with the pooja thali. He sees Shashank holding a cute little girl smiling at him. He returns the smile.

Naini: Aik second dadda... Phalay hum apki aur bhabi ki aarti utar layn... phr andr ana...

Naini comes forward and does the aarthi. Veer notices his mother's hateful glances at Krishna. He knows her mother is not going to accept Krishna, but he doesn't care.

As soon as the aarthi was done, Sunaina hugged Veer and started crying. Sunaina ignored Krishna completely while Naini hugged both Krishna and Veer.

Shashank: Welcome home dadda...

Naini: Ub ap dono sath andr ayn...

Veer holds Krishna's hand. First time since morning, their hands met! They looked at one another, smiled and stepped in...

Yes, things from here on are going to be very difficult. So much to do, so much to fix but as long as they are together, everything will be fine...


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Your updates are provoking me Lady !!
All this creatives are A-One ...I want to see something like this to happen...but sigh we have something else in store for us ...😔..

A simple and beautiful ending Anny...Veer letting go off all the worries after seeing his mother and taking her wife along him in his new journey ⭐️...plz keep writing...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You know Aneeqa, after reading your post, my expectations are increasing more, if CVs don't show something like this like you have written, I would be not satisfied much. I wish you would have been in creative team of KCL, we would have got some logical and good story. 😊😊 I still have hopes from KCL.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I know right, I mean I can't wrap my head around the normal hatred that is expected. Why can't Krishna empathize? That's her trait. She doesn't hate - unlike Veer.
And when Veer is being punished for his actions, I don't see a reason for any hatred.

Sunaina and Krishna can have a cold war, be on no talking terms.

There is still so much of scope here, with fixing everything, the hospital, the relationships, getting forgiveness from Shuklain, and forgiving Sunaina. So much scope already.

An alternative could be what Jen suggested - Veer dies, Sunaina confesses.
I still see Krishna letting Sunain off the hook, not letting her go to jail, but no on talking terms with her - another very cool story where Krishna looks after the Shukla house and Sahay Mansion, hospital, becomes a doctor... BS in jail...
Can think of two plots for Veer, either, the usual memory loss lost kind of track, or, BS hadn't really killed him but hidden him for all these years. And since the body was not found, he was guilty of kidnapping only - gets 5 years - comes out of jail, to see everything changed.
At the same time Veer returns, and after initial adjustments, the war against BS continues...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
OMG this so good and logical and more realistic...!!!
I was waiting to read this once you complete...!!!
I wish CVS read this
Thank you for writing this❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Good write up aneeqa 👍🏼
wish creatives take some sensible route like this 🤔

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