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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
No, Yug and Anjali are not married. They decide not to get married. Anjali leaves to start over. That is where the story starts.
Yug is not the father but gives the baby his name.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
plz plz continue!!

am waitin at the edge of my seat.... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Part XVIII

Kavya Nanda could not digest this. This was his baby after all. Why hadn't Anjali said anything? Kavya was left behind at his home among people that were severely small, ever scrambling for money over relationships and those that were too weak willed to face reality. Had Kavya lost his baby to Yug. Could he try to beg his way back into his baby's life? Yes, he could do that, for all the insults what else could a helpless father do? Kavya reached Yug's home the next morning.

Anjali and Nivee were playing with their baby. Yug was nowhere to be seen. After all the man worked, he had to take care of his business for his kishmish. Kavya spoke with Anjali and asked her why, how? Anjali showed Kavya the truth. Kavya read a letter written several months back just before Anjali and Yug were to get married. The truth, the honesty, the courage he read made Kavya want to kill himself for being so weak.

Yug had written,

"My dear Anjali,

Maybe you will hurt, maybe you will cry, and maybe you will be broken. But, I cannot deny you the hope that there will be a time when you will be back with your Kavya. I will pray for the time when he will hold your baby in his arms, when the both of you wake up together next to your child.

It breaks my heart to see you torn apart convincing yourself you love me. Maybe you do, but there are so many colors to love. You and I maybe share a different one. As much as I want to hold you in my arms and love you, I cannot. I will be there for you and for your baby, I promise to give you everything. I will promise to love the baby like my own.

If you can find it in your heart please forgive me, but I cannot marry you. Because I can give you everything but my conscience.

Yug."
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
dear rindam
welcome rindam on this forum.
but your entry on this forum is very bad .really.
because tumhai koi bhi huq nahi pohanctta kkavyanjali ka mazaq banana ka . agar tum na ya sub karnna ka liya iss forum par entry ki to sorry to say but acha hotta ka agr tum entry karttai hi nahi. 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
Huh-
I will discontinue. I wasn't making fun, I am sorry if you feel that way. I cannot understand how I am making fun? Sorry again buddy, didnt mean it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Didnt want to start a whole new post for this. So checking here.
Can I find videos for hindi movie songs (70's) on the web. Not remix versions- It wud be great if you could help.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
heya!

maybe request ur song request here,

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/nach-baliye-4/121715/anyone-wants-the-song

HEY!!! plz plz plz dont discontinue ur story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cmon....u will have like the whole forum on ur bak for discontinuing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE continue!!! i'm so curious to find out wat will happen next......i'm luvin every bit of it....so plz dun stop!!!!!!

Ciao!
Ena
Edited by bewafa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
which idiot thinks that rindam was making a mazak out of ka story? please, his fanfic is a million times better than the stale ideas in kekta's head. creative team my foot.

anyway rindham, please don't discontinue. you are doing an amazing job!

🤢 🤢 to people who cannot write much so have to satisfy themselves by putting down others.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Rindam

Huh-
I will discontinue. I wasn't making fun, I am sorry if you feel that way. I cannot understand how I am making fun? Sorry again buddy, didnt mean it.



hi. i've been away for the last week of festivals and fun. came back and read all of your story in one huge gulp, and all i can say is ...

please don't stop!

it would be a ridiculously criminal act. almost as bad as anjali ever accepting to live with brainless kavya at some point in the future. 😛 -esther
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
hi! dun stop.. 😭 i think ur fan fic is v gd... 😊

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