Arjuhi OS#17: Tumhain Haq Hai

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: zoya_naziya
Lovely OS Ana:)

thanku so much zoya...
:D

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mansi_47
I uresvd it already 🤣 now dont haunt me 🤣

hahahha...
ur dreams are safe from me for tonight :P
haha

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mysticlover
Just how innocently n sincerely they accepted their feelings!! :)
Loved it!!

thanku so much archu...
am glad u liked it :D

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

i updated my resv...mujhe haunt mat karna plz

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

aww... a perfect story <3 <3

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hahhaha Everyone is scared of Aani's taunt 😛 LOL i promise to unres too 😉 😉

Off to read

Love you

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

lovely lovely OS ana

super awesome one dear

oh what a perfect continuation of ur other OS -

loved it to the core - beautifully written

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Goshh!! your write up's are addicting Dear 😃

Marvelous ...beautifully written. 👏 👏 👏

It was So so So so Romantic Wow what a perfect continuation though i dont mind another continuation as these two are such a pure souls they love each other so much. 😊 Their innocence, cuteness & those shy & little attempts to be close to each other are supremely Romantic. special wow for your detail description about everything you make everything So appealing & real that i almost start visualizing while reading it. Start from his house to that Sparkling clean marble flooring to Arohi's arrival & her Dressing 👏 👏 Their first ever date & Both are so shy. I love that little touches of him directing her to his room & his things. he didn't let her use guest room as she isn't a guest . bhai yeh toh mohtarma ghar ki malkin banne wali hain. 😃 Arohi used to things with so much love & affection the feeling of belongingness & this house is soon gonna be hers that feelings her actions & mainly her blushing you described it all 👏 👏 What a perfect gift Aweee poor Neha really aru ne us pe do din experiment karke phir yeh sikha. Arjun was holding back his urges to touch her & hold her close to him but he is really a gentleman but As always our Aru is smartest & she lead him on this path too. love her confession & Finally those magical words & their beautiful Moments. Gawd i am in a dream land.

Loved loved loved it ...Please One more Continuation to these cutie pie's love story.

this was magical...thank you

Love

Pranjal.

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

See I told you no one remember its first part !!!
Cuz I love it moreee hehehe
After he gave her earrings on birthday I was wondering Wht happen next but the way you describe his dilemma , it's awsomeee . You portrait this Arjun from starting to first part to end beautiful , he is really awkward but arohi finally learnt him
Ohhh partner you make me so happy with this part it's so so so beautiful
Tie behalf of earrings eh whe totally loved it , tie ka idea I knew kaha se aaya but chod warna log Bahot kuch kahege , loved blue tie
Now when will new ff ???

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mansi_47
woh super awesome ! 😡
Kitna sweet tha ! 😃
Arjun shy and arohi bold 😲
Heye there has to be a part 2 🥱 I want to see the naughty naughty arjun.my favorite kind 😆
I love it...!They way how she declared she was his and only his.
I love pure love ❤️

Rofl mannu ye second part hi tha hehehe

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