Arjuhi OS#17: Tumhain Haq Hai - Page 4

Originally posted by: moonkmh

anarkali...i love it..
super duper cute..haye arjun kitna sochta hai n arohi kitni samajhdar...i got from where this came n i so love it. brilliantly written...

Originally posted by: moonkmh

i updated my resv...mujhe haunt mat karna plz

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik

aww... a perfect story <3 <3

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hahhaha Everyone is scared of Aani's taunt 😛 LOL i promise to unres too 😉 😉

Off to read

Love you

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

lovely lovely OS ana

super awesome one dear

oh what a perfect continuation of ur other OS -

loved it to the core - beautifully written

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Goshh!! your write up's are addicting Dear 😃 Thank You so much pranju🤗

Marvelous ...beautifully written. 👏 👏 👏

It was So so So so Romantic Wow what a perfect continuation though i dont mind another continuation as these two are such a pure souls they love each other so much. 😊

Haila...No yaar...aik or is ki continuation nahi aa rahi...
Next OS is very special for my gf...so wait for that till next month😳😳
but surly, they are the most innocent lovers of my lot😉😆

Their innocence, cuteness & those shy & little attempts to be close to each other are supremely Romantic. special wow for your detail description about everything you make everything So appealing & real that i almost start visualizing while reading it. Start from his house to that Sparkling clean marble flooring to Arohi's arrival & her Dressing 👏 👏 Aweee...Thanku yaar...I really want to make you guys see through my eyes...hope u r getting that image😛


Their first ever date & Both are so shy. I love that little touches of him directing her to his room & his things. he didn't let her use guest room as she isn't a guest . bhai yeh toh mohtarma ghar ki malkin banne wali hain. 😃 He for the first time let someone enter his life...but then allowed her completely...no restrictions...the only thing he was considerate and worried about touching her😳 My shreef bacha😆😆


Arohi used to things with so much love & affection the feeling of belongingness & this house is soon gonna be hers that feelings her actions & mainly her blushing you described it all 👏 👏 Yup, I got to see my cousins having those feelings as in our family, marriages mostly are arrange inside...so that all i wanted to put through her actions😃

What a perfect gift Aweee poor Neha really aru ne us pe do din experiment karke phir yeh sikha. Arjun was holding back his urges to touch her & hold her close to him but he is really a gentleman but As always our Aru is smartest & she lead him on this path too. love her confession & Finally those magical words & their beautiful Moments. Gawd i am in a dream land. Neha bhi arohi ki pagalpanti ka part bani...hehe...but that what sisters are for...😃 Aru is not a girl who relents,...she go for her share of happiness and she got it...

Loved loved loved it ...Please One more Continuation to these cutie pie's love story. Nah pranju...already its extended to two part but i will try to come up with something soon that can make you happy😃

this was magical...thank you

Love

Pranjal.

Luv ya...
hugs pranju🤗

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

See I told you no one remember its first part !!!
Cuz I love it moreee hehehe
After he gave her earrings on birthday I was wondering Wht happen next but the way you describe his dilemma , it's awsomeee . You portrait this Arjun from starting to first part to end beautiful , he is really awkward but arohi finally learnt him
Ohhh partner you make me so happy with this part it's so so so beautiful
Tie behalf of earrings eh whe totally loved it , tie ka idea I knew kaha se aaya but chod warna log Bahot kuch kahege , loved blue tie
Now when will new ff ???

Originally posted by: prettyji

awesome

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb awesome brilliant so romantic

Originally posted by: arjuhi_kmh

WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFUL UPDATE

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

Hehe yeah ammu... U r such a superb writer... Ds ws smthng dat straight away gt added to my fav os lists... Ds s amthng so pure,innocent without any hardcore romance..chal nt even a kiss..bt it ws swesm bby... Awesm mtlb am speechless..i cd imagine punji-sharma jodi in ds os..though u told tws singu-allu pair...
Keep writing more darling...