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this chappy is dedicated to madhu for 3 reasons:

1. for praying for my comp 😃

2. for listening to me and updating Kurbaan first ❤️

3. and because i love you so much 🤗

so stop crying!!! 😛


Part 63

"Tum bhabhi se poocho na!"

"Aur usse kuch pata nahi hoga toh?"

"Shefu... baby! Agar bhabhi ko pata nahi hoga toh voh bro se ugalva lengi."

"Lekin Romit, tumhe aisa kyu laga ki kuch gadbad hai."

"Bas... kal sab mujhe bohat tension mein lagey. As if they were waiting for something to happen." Romit lay back on his bed with the phone in his hand.

"Hmm... baadmein mujhe bhi Arohi thodi distracted lagi. Aur Gauri toh ekdam chupp hogayi."

"Pata hai... Rashi di ko bhi kuch chot laggayi thi. Aur achanak sanchit... YES! We should ask Sanchit. Usse jaroor pata hoga. Mein abhi usse call karta hoon!"

"Thik hai. Tum usse call karke mujhe phone karo. Ek kaam karo. Ussey kehna humey college canteen mein miley. Wahi thik se baat karenge."

"Ok... Done!"

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Lovedeep held her head and closed her eyes. Too much information! That was all that she could think... and her poor little brain could not take that stress. Luckily there were sitting on a bench in the open park, or else or any closed space would have made Love feel claustrophobed!

Arohi waited patiently as she saw her bua react so unlike her. She waited till Love sighed deeply and looked up, straight in to her eyes.

"Ye tuney mujhe pehle kyu nahi bataya?"

"Bua... kisi aur ko involve karna means risking that persons life. So we didnot want to take any chances. But now..."

"Now kya??? Tujhe aur Arjun ko realise hua ki tumlog insaan ho and that you should ask for help??!!"

Arohi flinched at the hurt tone in her aunts voice. Where people wanted to stay away from other peoples troubles, there was her family which wanted to know each and every small thing happening with her and Arjun. Arohi scooted closer to her bua and took her hand in hers.

"Bua... mein jaanti hoon ki aapko bohat bura laga hoga. Lekin yakin maaniye, humara iraada aapse kuch chupaane ka nahi tha. In fact, humey khud kuch dino pehle pata chala hai..."

Lovedeep gave a defeated look and pressed Arohis hand lightly. "Teri Gauri se baat hui?"

Arohi shook her head. "Thik se nahi. Voh kaafi dari hui hai aur... mein nahi chahti ki meri vajah se koi aur musibat khadi ho jaaye. Lekin meine Simi se baat ki hai... usse kuch bataya nahi hai, lekin kuch bhi karke Gauri ko lekar bahar kahi milne ke liye kaha hai. Agar humey kuch karna hai toh Gauri ko hamara saath dena hoga."

"Hmm... waise sach kaha hai kisine. Swarg aur Nark dono dharti par hi hai. Apne karmon ki sazaa Rab humey yahi dete hai. Kisne socha tha ki bholi surat aur shatir dimaag waali Gauri ek din khud musibat mein phass jaayegi. Aur usski help voh log karrahe hai jinhe ussne sabse jyaada chot pohachayi hai. Shayad yahi usski saza bhi hai. Zindagi bhar voh ye baat bhul nahi paayegi ki jarurat padne par usski iss dost ne usska saath diya."

Arohi smiled. Love for her was oozing out from Lovedeeps talks as she reprimanded Gauri yet again for stabbing her best friend in the back.

"Chal... ab mujhe jaana hai. Meri pehli meeting hain for a corporate contract, Rashi ka koi purana dost hai. Late jaungi toh impression achha nahi hoga. Tujhe pata haina tujhe kya karna hai?"

Arohi nodded her head. "Mein aapse baad mein baat karti hoon."

The aunt-niece hugged each other and set off on their way to the surprise that lay for them ahead.

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"Daaaddd..."

Oblivious to his sons whining, Arjun tightened his grip around Raj, hugging him as if they had met after years. Raj frowned and stood still, with his hands at his sides, waiting for his father to release him. All he had wanted was to sleep in till late because he was exhausted from the picnic. But Arjun had woken him up, bathed him, fed him breakfast and had suddenly in a fit of love display, was trying to crush him by hugging him so tight.

Arjun pulled back and looked at Raj's face. He brushed his hand through his sons hair, combing the unruly curls with his fingers. Holding his face, Arjun continued to stare at his sons confused expressions.

"Raj... tum... thik ho na beta???"

Raj frowned seeing the worry on Arjuns face.

"Haan dad... bas thoda thakk gaya hoon. Kal ki picnic ki wajah se..."

Arjun smiled as Raj spoke in his typical tired childish voice. "Why don't you come to my room? Hum video games khelte hain..."

"Not now dad. Mera homework complete hone ke baad, warna mom daantegi. I will finish my homework and come. Ok?"

Arjun smiled and nodded his head. Raj grinned and ran back to his room. Arjun stood up and stared after his sons retreating figure. His smile faded as Raj went out of his sight. He was not able to trace any sadness in Raj, even in yesterdays picnic he looked quite happy and cheerful. But Arjun knew that his son was mature for his age, and he didnot want him hiding anything... especially his feelings. No one knew better than Arjun, what does suppressing feelings at this age can bring about changes in a persons character as an adult. And so he was determined to give Raj, as normal childhood as he can.

Arjuns thoughts took him back to the holi day and he frowned. He didnot wish to see that kind of sadness on Raj's face again... ever!

FLASHBACK

Arjuns cheeks had started hurting from all the grinning! He had just hit Arohi with a water balloon... hard. It had landed square on her upper back, right where the kurta ended. The water had drenched her and the impact had stinged her skin. Arohis irritated expression had made Arjun smile wider and after swearing to get back to him, Arohi had walked off from there. Arjun had hid behind the trees near the swimming pool area, to avoid a fuming Arohi roaming around, with a massive water balloon in her hand. Before he made to move out, he heard some loud talking and he ended up listening to Sanchit and Arvind Ahluwalias conversation.

He knew that Arvind and Sudhir still didn't approve of him, but the way Sanchit defended him made his heart soar. After they both went back to the holi party, Arjun saw a small figure move out from there with his shoulders slumped. Arjun realised that Raj had heard the conversation too and his body language told him that it made him sad. Seeing him move towards the exit, Arjun followed him hurriedly.

Just as he turned towards the parking lot, Arjun saw Raj talking to someone and he stopped. Sneaking softly, he went near to see who it was. And he was totally surprised to see ACP Rajveer Singh Ahluwalia, crouched on his knees, wipe his sons tears. Arjun blinked in confusion. This was the first time he had seen Rajveer behave so softly towards anyone other than his family. Arjuns thoughts brought him to the present when he heard him speak equally softly.

"Kya aapne jo suna... voh sunke aapko bura laga?"

Raj nodded slowly. Arjuns heart went out to see the sadness on his sons face, never before had Raj been so quiet till today.

"Voh uncle... voh uncle mere dad ke baare mein bura kyu bol rahe they??? Mere dad bohat ache hain... voh criminal nahi hain!!!"

Rajveer looked on surprised at Raj's assertiveness. He held Raj by his shoulders "Jaanta hoon. Lekin ye baat voh uncle nahi jaante. Issliye toh Sanchit unhe samjhane ki koshish karraha tha."

"Mere dad world ke best dad hain. Unke jaisa koi nahi! Aur meri mom bhi. Mujhe meri sagi mom bhi itna pyaar nahi karti thi jitna Arohi mom karti hai... aur Rashi mom bhi!"

Rajveer smiled at the innocent confession.

"Fir sab mere dad ko hate kyu karte hain???"

The pain in Raj's eyes and voice brought tears in Arjuns. He wanted to go to his son and hug him right away.

"Sab nahi... Sirf Sudhir bhaiya. And he has a reason for it. Lekin baaki sab... they don't hate him. Infact DJ, Lovedeep, Amrit bhabhi and Sanchit are fond of Arjun. Bass... haalaat aise hain ki they cant openly display what they feel for him."

"Aur aap???"

Raj's question caught Rajveer off guard. He looked at Raj's innocent eyes sceptically. Arjun held his breath to hear the answer.

"Mein???" Rajveer let go of Raj and got up. He walked to the nearby planter edge and sat on it, Raj went next to him.

"Mein tumhare dad ko hate karta THA. Lekin ab nahin. In fact i don't know what i should feel for him. But i know one thing... i trust Arohi. And so if she trusts Arjun, then it is good enough for me."

Raj studied the adult in front of him.

"Pata hai Rashi mom kya kehti hai? Voh kehti hai ki koi kisi ko love kare ya na kare, lekin koi kisiko trust karta hai then voh love se jyada important hai. Kyuki love ke bina trust ho sakta hai lekin trust ke bina love nahin."

Rajveers eyebrows jumped up in surprise, hearing pearls of wisdom from this little budhha. Arjun imitated his expressions standing behind the wall.

"Rashi thik kehti hai... you're too smart for your age."

"Aap bhi bohat inteli... intell..."

"...intelligent?"

"Haan... intelligent ho. Kyuki aapke naam mein bhi 'Raj' hain."

Rajveer chuckled and Raj grinned. Arjun smiled at his sons confidence. Where many people were scared of this angry ACP, his son was giving him a certificate of being intelligent! Suddenly Arjun felt a bit jealous and possessive towards his son, seeing him bond with another man.

"... isiliye toh aap Rashi mom se hamesha staring game mein jeet jaate ho!"

Rajveer jumped up and looked around. He kept a finger on his lips indicating Raj to keep quiet and guided him inside the house for refreshments.

Neither of them noticed the frozen statue of Arjun with confused expressions on his face.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Three things had stumped Arjun that day.

One. Rajveers soft side and the way he had cajoled Raj.

Two. His confession that he trusted Arjun because Arohi did.

And Three. What was this staring game with Rashi di???

Arjun had tried to figure out this man ever since but he failed to understand. He had seen the changes in Rajveer over a period of time and Arohi had told him about how he supported her too. But he never expected him to actually talk the way he did to Raj when he was upset. Neither did he voice his opinion nor did he feed Raj any lies. But the entire conversation told him that his outlook towards Arjun was positive. And that confused him!

Maybe he should tell Arohi about this whole encounter. She might be able to understand and even talk to Rajveer about it. It could probably help them in uncovering Mikhails plan and protect Gauri and Simi. It was obviously clear that Rajveer was no longer holding on to any grudges and so he wont have any issues in helping Gauri. Yes. He should talk to Arohi.

But what was this staring game with Rashi Di?????????????

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"Come in..."

Arohi took a deep breath as the strong voice spoke and she turned the door knob to enter the cabin. Shutting the door softly behind her, she walked slowly and stood in front of the main desk. Her steps were unsure but determined, her gaze was worried but steady, her body language was anxious but confident. Arohi stopped near the massive glass table, waiting for the man sitting in the chair to leave the file in his hand and acknowledge her presence.

History was repeating itself, yet with a twist. This time Arohi was not here to warn this man, well she was going to potray it that way. But she had half baked information about his involvement in all the mess that was happening around her and she could not go in to an accusing mode. But the facts that she had, were rock-solid and she was going to bank on them. She had memorised the whole speech a thousand times in her mind when she was on her way here, but she also knew that the person whom she was dealing with, had the capacity to throw her completely off balance.

Keeping his eyes on the file, he pointed to the chair, indicating that Arohi should seat herself. As she made herself comfortable, she stared at his concentrating figure. She would be lying if she said that she was not even a little bit impressed by this personality. His aura and the way he conducted himself, demanded undivided attention from anyone that he was talking to. Not only was his brain as sharp as his tongue but it was as clear as his goals too.

The only thing that Arohi hoped is that he had not repeated the same mistake twice. Because if he had, then this time Arohi wont spare him, this was her promise to herself. Not matter how smart or powerful he was! She straightened in her seat when he shut the file and kept it down. Scribbling a few words on his notepad, he kept the pen down, removed his glasses and ran a hand on his hairless head. Running the same hand on his face, he looked up at the person sitting in front of him. And for the first time Arohi felt respect as she stared into her father-in-laws emotionless eyes.

i will be starting to unfold some twists now as even Arohis head is spinning with all the mystery 😆 need you love and support in the form on likes and comments 😳 its important for me to know where you guys see this story going or even what you would like to see... thank you all for giving MR so much love 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Cherry Ji the most hopeless late latif reader of your thread is Here ...Late again but trying to improve 😛 Waise I saw everyone calling you Di sorry i didn't know your age So never Addressed you as Di but from now on Will call you DI ...Hope you don't mind. 😃 doesnt matter pranjal! u can call me anything 😊


waise i blabber a lot sorry ...Coming back to update 😃

Omggg...
Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki kahan se shuroo karu

If I say that I haven't read such a beautiful story and the presentation and the writing in a long long time then it isn't exaggeration
Too Good !!! Brilliant !! Superbbb so sweet of you... thanks 😳

I just love Rashveer 😃 you have created such a heavenly Couple their love their talks even their eye gestures makes me happy from inside whenever I read about them 😃 Rajveer is working on the most important thing he just want to find out about the attacker at any cost. 😃 Loved his super cute concern for his Jaan what a beautiful start to update Dear 😃 Rashveer is amazingly Cute i just love them. he was sure he can never fall for any girl but Ek nazar aur Hamare sahab ghayal 😉 what i love the most is the way you have written their love story 👏 those meetings Hidden feelings and finally when they come close and best part is now with every passing day they are discovering new feeling possessiveness for each other. 😃 i just love them. One sentence from rashi and Rajveer is lost in her beauty 😊 i just love the way you described his feelings self talks And emotions was fabulous 👏 👏 👏 I am so happy Rashi told him each and every think about the attacker and Now Rajveer is more alert and clear about his target. 😊 she told him everything but haven't told Arjun yet, This feeling of unsaid trust and belongingness is making Rajveer ecstatic 😳 i am loving them totally. im glad you can feel what i wanted to potray... when kmh2 was on i always wanted them to get together 😉

Arjun Arohi my cutie pie's 😊 kya kahe inke baare mein these two are ultimate, Love they way they look at every situation 😊 Arohi is trying to get on the root to everything she was talking aloud every crossing thought on her mind but Arjun was busy romancing Wifey the whole scene was super hawttt ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ when Arohi understood Hubby's intention she tried to scold him but he is The great Arjun singhania apni baat k\manvana koi inse sikhe 😆 😆 loved his romantic theory definition of cottage 😉 loved his besharmi her cuteness 😃 the way you described their togetherness was Amazingly beautiful. Sensuous yet decent and very romantic. 😊 Arjun slept waiting for Arohi loved that moment when she caressed his hair the kiss of love was awesome. Arohi is still worried about Guari she is not able to take out the thoughts. But i am loving Arjun he is worried too but he knew he has to support arohi hence he has already started planning to send Guari and Simi both away their love is out of their world! never before had i felt where two completely opposite people compliment each other so well 👏

Arohi's last word indicates she will share it with Rajveer hain naa?? who else wouldbe there 😕 the best part about your write up's are the way you balance every update with Romance ka tadka 😃 hmm... voh toh waqt hi batayega 😛 waisa romance thoda reduce hoga from now on as mysteries start opening up!

Fabulous Read once again... Keep Writing so beautifully !!! Cant wait for next ...Jaldi likhana 😃

Love
Pranjal. thanks pranjal.. love you and your comments 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

lovely chappy 👍🏼
arjuhi ❤️
i love it how arjun was trying to get intimate wit arohi nd she just snapped it out by saying that they r in d hut to discuss abt gouri not getting intimate nd arjun being arjun started to give her reasons for why they r in d hut 😉
nd den arohi just broke his heart by saying dat she has not taken shower which she wanted to do now...! 😆
bechara arjun 😆
i love it how arohi was staring at sleeping arjun nd was thnking abt the events of d day...!
Arjun trusted her wit his evrythng nd he kept his promise to arohi nd yet again he made arohi fell in love wit him...! ya actually! these two fall in love with each other again and again every single minute of the day ☺️
rajveer nd rashi,such a cute couple they r...!
Rajveer ko aise romantic mood mein dekhna is simply all new to me 😉
uska woh angry look hi meko yaad hai show se 😆
but i like him in dis all naughty nd romantic avatar...! 😛 haha i know 😆 issiliye i cant make him go all out n romantic! its not in his character and love was not in his dictionary... so he will be taking baby steps towards romance 😉
superb chappy 👍🏼
wat d hell is dis michael upto..????? 😡
arghhh i hate him sooo much 😡 thats the idea! i dont like dumb villians... thats like underrating them 😛
waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳 thanks for the comment ara 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
main khusi ke mare faint ho jaungi avi... long comments for sure...love you di
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arjuhi_s


i am always late..ab tu ap ko bhi adat ho gayi ho gi...but i never forget to comment haan...so i m here again to give my comments on ur wonderful story..


part 61:


Sanchit looked pointedly at Rashis hand and she immediately covered it with her dupatta and hid it behind her back.


what!!!...kia hua rashi ko..and why didnt she tell arjun?...and how did sanchit know abt it...??


i knew it natasha would be behind this accident and she actually was...i hate her...but why did she attack rashi...or was it by mistake..no it was not..but as a brother i was expecting something more serious as a reaction from michael but it was so so..mean he is..selfish..but i am glad rashi's bodyguard came on time...but i have this feeling..a very bad one that rashi would be the victim of everything...god she is so innocent..i dont want any harm to her...and obviously to arohi also...

hehe interesting...michael is not stupid..i underestimated him..he is intelligent haan..he is aware of rashi and rajveer's feelings...and so our arjuhi are underestimating him in some way...he is very clever haan... has to be na! warna arjun will crush him in one second 😉

ahh how much i loved arjuhi in this update...the silent love..sometimes words really are not necessary and this is what u proved in this update..their love and understanding is so well described in their silent communication through eyes and gestures...how can one not trust in this unconditional love...loved them to the core in this update.. thats the best part of their relationship! no matter how different they are, their love is solid strong 😳

ok now the main qts...what does michael want from gauri and if she is unable to give it to him then he has simmi as a susbstitute...there is definitely something missing..or its already there but we are overlooking it...what is this actullay going on in ur shatir dimaag... haha! shatir dimag is overworking 😆

the story is twisting more and more and is becoming complicated for my innocent mind to understand plz jaldi se sare raz kholo di... even arohis head is spinning 😆 so will start the solving of mysteries now 😃

and last...dadi...i so loved her for saving gauri..indirectly helping her ...love u dadi...jiyo...
missed raj though... next update mein Raj 😳 i love him too

sehar..



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part 62:



rashi and rajweer...i never knew that i would ever love any other couple other than my arjuhi..but thanks to u..u made it possible..and made me fall in love with this couple too...and i am in love with how their love story is progressing...infact it has progressed very well and beautifully that now their relationship has amlost reached the same level as arjuhi...for me they are arjuhi's replica...i loved the way rashi confide everything in him...this is the most strong thing in every relation..trust...and this is found in their relationship too...in last update it was all abt arjuhi's trust in each other and in this its all abt rashi and rajweer's trust...loved them... i feel they are a softer or milder version of arjuhi 😳 😆


rajweer's concern for arjun..thats something unexpected but something loveable too..and appreciative...if rashi and arohi are important to him then definitely they are important for arjun too..so this is the main thing common in them..the two most important girls...the same girls...😊..i guess they will now...or if they wont then they should start working on this matter together... thats common between them both! and i had always seen this similarity in rajveer and arjun... so teaming up is the only going to make them stronger 😃

arjuhi's romance...god our arohi is busy in her inverstigation but our arjun definitely has one track mind...i loved their romance... hehe... thanks ☺️




This was getting too complicated now. Natasha and her intentions for Arjun... Mikhail and his twisted plans for Gauri... Rudra and his vision for Mr Brar... it was all so messed up! In all this her main concern was Arjun. If Natasha even tried to put a scratch on him, she will kill her with her bare hands. Maybe she shoud confide in one more person who could help them... maybe it was time.



really its all getting too complicated now...and i am now curious to know who that person would be jis k pass arohi jae gi..rudra?...or rajweer...

only u can tell this to use...plz clear all the mysteries and continue soon... have cleared it in next update! your guesses are not all that wrong 😉

sehar.. thanks for commenting sehar... der se hi sahi 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonkmh

main khusi ke mare faint ho jaungi avi... long comments for sure...love you di



love you too muahh!!!

waiting for long comment

wl pe comment kiya???
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Posted: 12 years ago
i want long one form now on *please*
children are really innocent they love with their whole heart no matter what..!
arjun and raju are soo good together its heart warming to read.
love how raj coudnt hear a single word against his dad. even thought so much happened between alluwalias and singhania's rajveer still confronted raj .
it was all so cute to read
1 complaint i have
my arjun arohi are romance deprived and getting desperate please make them romace again! or they are threatening to run away form your story 🤣
please update !
<3 mansi

sorry for un-resving late ! i have exams on ! 😭
Edited by mansi_47 - 12 years ago

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