SS :Pathjad Saawan -last part pg17, imp note pg23. - Page 6

wondrfl ss kavya..⭐️

Originally posted by: kavyasam

Shona thank you for this lovely feedback. after writing I was for a long time very disturbed myself. Arjun ke feelings likhti hoon toh I am usually moved.

This is all fiction that I wrote in first part, and most of the story will be fictional imagination. In real life this did not happen not was he a silent lover. I will summarise the real wala story after the last part 😳. I wanted to make changes so it will suit arjuhi.

but there are guys who fall deeply in love with a girl and arent able to express. Their silent love sometimes works sometimes it just becomes a memory for them. I loved ur depiction of this emotion as ibaadat.

thnx for da clarification but I must say wow cauz u portrayed da love in dis ff so beautifully and in a unique way...ur imagination and thoughts are awesome...yeah dis is very true tht many silent lovers r out dere whose love remain as memory in dere heart deep within and I believe dis ff wud be a great dedication to them..."I loved ur depiction of this emotion as ibaadat" thnx and I wud love to know da real story also...😊

wow another beautiful update...I caught my breath for a second when I read "all the while playing with her mangalsutra" I waz so scared tht she is still married...I felt like there is no hope...even though I'm happy tht she is not married anymore but her story is very painful...so true tht ppl exist in dis world who use others for their selfish reason...yeah they were in love but they don't ve any right to play with someone else's life...u brought out another issue on our society through dis...Arohi became da scapegoat...she must have went through a lot...any other woman in Arohi's place wudn't ve let dem be happy but she is such a good soul...she also understood dis life waz never her...but I can understand her emotion tht she also wants to feel da love tht is so deep and want to ve someone special who only belongs to her and loves her unconditionally...aww Arjun has problem in leg tht's why he never worked around so much...His heart must ve filled with pain seeing his love in pain...wow she can see love in his eyes...I hope she also realizes tht his love is only for her...they both belong to each other...he is da man of her life and he can only give her da love tht she is searching and craving for...cauz without each other they are incomplete...superb...loved it to da core😊

Originally posted by: ricsr

wondrfl ss kavya..⭐️

poor arohi.😭 glad she gt rid of such lvless marriage..yep that was the best thing of it. she didnot endure it giving in for social norms, it was a small town and it was difficult.

hope she'll understnd arjun's lv n care..

god.. cant wait 4 der union..lets c how dis happens😃

plz cont soon n den BTBH.. - sure will write for this, sn and then btbh.

Originally posted by: mysticlover

this is the kind of story that touches one's heart!

arohi must have been to hell realizing her husband didn't love her!

but what she hadn't realized till now is that the girl she believes to have arjun's love is her!

but i know arjun himself would never tell her that! he will think he would sound like an opportunist! but arohi can realize it! if she saw love in his eyes then she can surely realize it's for her! - Bingo!!

you said it was based on a true story? hope the protagonists of the real life found each other and are living happily together! but you know a funny but sad thing i came to know? people who have dreams like this always get it very late or sometimes never! you know their dream of living a life with someone who loves them unconditionally! but the interesting thing is that those who never ask for such things get abundance of it! and they are always running away from such love and care! strange naa our world? - arohi's story is most of the true story, arjuhi I wrote till now is fiction. in third part again real story ka end ayega. agree with you archu. that is the way life is. those who want dont get and those who get dont care. irony it is. :(.

k sorry for boring you! but update soon and do pm me like before! - you have a very deep thinking, certainly m not bored :). i love these kind of discussions. :).

thanks again for the beautiful feedback 🤗

Kavya...lovely SS 👏 i must say the concept is really nice..

I really felt bad for Arohi..she had to undergo so much pain when the only thing she desired was love...:'(

update the next part soon!

Ps- will edit the rest of ur FFe tomorrow pakka (or remind me if i dnt :P)

Originally posted by: arjuhi4eva

Kavya...lovely SS 👏 i must say the concept is really nice..

I really felt bad for Arohi..she had to undergo so much pain when the only thing she desired was love...:'(

update the next part soon!

Ps- will edit the rest of ur FFe tomorrow pakka (or remind me if i dnt :P)

Promo

She could still see love in his eyes. She felt bad that he could not get that love back. She wondered how special that girl would have been that Arjun loved her so much. As she focussed on that another thing started to occur to her, if Arjun can love the girl even after he knows she is married and he cannot have her, then how special Arjun must be. One thought led to another, without her knowledge Arjun occupied her thoughts most of the time.

yes dis arjun is so special !

love him & his pure love

so excitd for da nxt chappy . .

plzz updt soon

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

yes dis arjun is so special !

love him & his pure love

so excitd for da nxt chappy . .

plzz updt soon