FF: Scars of Love...Closing down. Imp Note pg38 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Ooh!! Haffi love the promo you have to update soon <3 (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
ooohhh my gaaad its terrrefic ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
they met!

pls tell me the guy who nearly raped her wasn't arjun! let it be his brother with same eyes!

and i am a goldie now!

update the first part soon pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: mysticlover

they met!


pls tell me the guy who nearly raped her wasn't arjun! let it be his brother with same eyes!

and i am a goldie now!

update the first part soon pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wont tell anything!!!!
Muaahahahah (evil laugh)!
Sorry dont wanna torture you, but you will find out!!!!!! soon...

❤️Hey congrats on being a GOLDIE now!!!!!❤️

I will update asap!!
xx haffie
Edited by DoroPavone - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
waiting for ur update Haffie...

Please PM me when u update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
What a brilliant update...

loved the way you have described every bit of it...especially the description of the spring was fabulous

Simmi is such a good friend...really loved their interaction...

So Arjun is the same guy but it seems he was under some tricks played by Natasha..so he was drunk and seems like drugged as well./.what a cheap character this Natasha...

Feeling so so sorry for her..what a traumatic experience to have in life at such an young age..time will heal the bruises and the wound but what about the unseen scar..hope she gets some peace soon...


Edited by Anupa28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Very well written update. This is new to me to see Arjun in a mistake, unknowingly too..hehe..it taking little time to sink in the matter. but wud like to see more progress and come out of this dilemma as soon as possible...

I loved the way you explained the nature. " beautiful light blue sky with the white clouds. She was as light as a feather." I could feel the weather and for a minute i forgot what i am interested in(tknow abt the mystery man). I also along with arohi felt like a bird :)

POV gave an insight of both arohi and arjun and it gave a very clear picture of their viewz..You explained it so well. sometimes it seems clueless whats in the leads mind ;)

Now i cant wait for the next update and how will u make them meet again and when will arjun remember that days incident. how will arohi know abt real arjun..ooh no .. .ur update already occupied my mind and i cant think any further. i am struck up. So please update ASAP.

Happy Holidays and All the best for ur exams :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

good update haffie

pity aru - its the worst which can happen to any girl - just cant imagine the plight of such girls who are harrassed
so it was natasha who made arjun behave like that but need to know more about that incident which made arjun act like a beast - iam sure u will reveal it slowly in ur future updates
good storyline haffiee - pls continue sooonn
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
good one dear!

and thank you!

wow so the guy was arjun or not?

whoever he is i am sure natasha is to be blamed!

poor arohi must be feeling so frightened and alone!

and hey all the best for your exams!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey haffie,

I love this emo story 😛

so update soon!!!

xx




Edited by SA_KA - 13 years ago

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