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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

that was so cute!😊

raj nd gunjan really act like arjuhi's parents!! they are so cute!

tnx 4 the pm...

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

poor kkds so much resp on deir shouldrrs rofl..
Dey r too cute hehe

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Omg,gunjan n raj r so smart n super cute.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: myviewprem

i do not watch much TV(not more than 30 mins a day)

i spend half an hour a day to update(some days i have no interest to swtich on computer and skip updating)

as far as story goes the entire story came to my mind in feb only

i only have to type not think of the story forward.

and as i start writing my idea i get the dialogues instantly. I do not think before hand that this character will tell this its on that given day may be tommorow i may have written a different dialogue for same situation

so basically i love to write story poems etc very much

its not a work for me or task its my hobby so i do not get bored.

second is will if i decide i have to update so even if its 12pm i will update

so if you have love for a job and will power you can do it

somedays i have updated on my exam days during my study breaks

HATS OFF TO U DEAR - THANKS FOR THE REGULAR UPDATES😃

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

luv gunjan and raj - they are just great

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SHAHAD971

@SHAHAD971

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

I loved the update Prem !!

very funny...

continue soon

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Scene204 Gunjan upset

Gunjan keeps looking at Arohi. Some people have all luck at 26 -27 years also they have luxury of acting like 4-5 year old kids. But she has had no such luck her hospital visits and her family situations have made her mature beyond her age. Yes her Karan Ba has always protected her as much as possible from harsh realities of life but how much can he too protect her. Some realities come out no matter how much anyone tries to hide. May be Arohi has never faced any pain any upsets in life thats why she is so innocent and carefree thinks Gunjan. Gunjan with tears in her eyes and wipes them before they fall on her cheeks because no one should see.

Raj has observed and reaches out and holds her shoulder and asks making ishaara what?

Gunjan smiles and shakes her head and whispers Papa

Raj smiles. Gunjan is remembering her father and has tears he thinks and squeezes her shoulders. Gunjan holds his hand to comfort herself.

Right now if her Ba was around she would have hugged him and cried a lot to lighten her heart. This week she had done that thrice cried hugging him and then lied to him that her stomach was paining hence she was crying. Gunjan looks out of window. Her Ba did not know that many things he wanted to protect her from she already knew them. Ba always assumed his chutki was not aware of those truths in life. And its better he thinks like that his heart may break if he comes to know that she knew many of those truths he wanted to protect her from. Her Ba has too many responsibilities to handle from a very small age she had observed always busy and over loaded.

Poor Ba if she was healthy she would have helped shoulder his responsibilities after a few more years but she herself had become a big responsibility on his shoulders always unwell and in hospital. She had thought another 4-5 years and her health permitting she would take care of household and handhold mom in running NGOs and take care of dadaji completely. So Ba can atleast be free of these three responsibilities atleast. But that was not to be she had come from hospital and read on net about her illness and came to know many things about it. May be after all doctors were right she would not live for more than 5 years. Her brother had promised she will live 100 years how she had no idea the donor list for liver transplant was very big and even if her brother managed to get a donor somehow and she was operated the survival chance was 60-70%. No wonder her father whom she had never seen crying in any bad situations would have tears when he would come to meet her in hospital so many times he had tears in eyes seeing her in ICU.

She had asked her mother where her grandmother had gone after death and her mother said to heaven where GOD stayed. So she would also go to heaven after death. She had seen many times recently while passing through a cemetery seen people lighting funeral pyres or burying dead people in a black box. She was scared very scared. But she could never ask anyone openly they would doubt especially her family that she was thinking about death etc and become sad. She had decided she will now on enjoy those rare ocassion of outing she got to the fullest like today's trip.

And Raj's birthday which she may not be able to attend after 5 years. She and he will enjoy all his birthdays today one day will compensate for 20-30 of his birthdays in future. Thats why she had got him 20-30 gifts so that every birthday he may remember her seeing all those gifts. She had brought a gift for each year for next 20-30 years. Gunjan had decided she will try and live her life to the fullest and try and fulfill all her desires in 5 years and from now on laugh and keep her family also very happy and spend much more time with them especially her Ba and papa whom she loved very much.

Arjun observes the mirror and sees Gunjan thinking and after 5 minutes also she is still thinking upset.

Arjun: Baby, what are you thinking so upset?

Arohi and Raj look at her

Gunjan: Nothing, i was thinking of how Raj will celebrate his birthday in another 10-15 years bhaiya

Arjun: Why baby?

Gunjan sadly: Because i may not be there

Arjun puts brake: Means

Arohi and Raj look at her

Gunjan: Means means we may go back to US after 5-10 years. So i may not be there in India no.

Raj sadly: You will go back Gunjan. No let your family go you stay with me and daddy. You can go in school holidays to meet them

Arohi and Arjun smile

Arohi hugs her: Do not worry baby, i and Raj will fly to US for your and his birthday

Arjun: Then what baby's and Raj's birthday. We will come to US and celebrate with you. Smile now

Gunjan smiles. These three are not aware she is going to heaven not US where others cannot fly down. Her mother said only God can take someone to heaven no one else because its his house. And then no one comes back from heaven her teacher had told. She takes her mobile and sees her family photo papa, mama, dadaji and Karan bhaiya carrying her in his arms. In a few years she may not be in that picture. Gunjan keeps seeing that photo and remembering her family.

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

so sad...just hope nothing happens to this li'l angel 😊

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

i sincerely wish nothing happens to gunjan

nice update prem

pls continue

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Oh god,m jst vry much sad 4 gunjan. Plz,dnt let her die in cming update. She is so mature at dis age n d way she observe othrs emotn is so touchy. I luv d update.

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