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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Scene202 Arjun-Arohi nhok jhok

Gunjan: But you really hit aunty, Arjun bhaiya. You are not scared of aunty at all

Arjun smiles: Scared, did you not see in mall seige. You aunty is mad. I am scared of her

Gunjan laughs: That was funny. My parents and brother laughed so much on all those jokes

Arjun and Arohi embrassed.

Arohi: You went and told your parents and brother

Gunjan innocently: Then, i never hide anything from my parents and bhaiya especially. Dadaji was also laughing so were some of the maids who were serving us dinner

Arjun puts brake and stops car

Arjun: You should have told your security, secretaries, your fishes, your horses and birds too baby. Why did you only tell dadaji, parents, brother and maids?

Gunjan innocently: I never told maids, they heard it themselves

Arjun: Ohhh they heard themselves. Then they will tell others and soon entire chandigarh will know this weight loss for kiss joke

Gunjan guilty: Actually few people in US also. I told that funny incident to my friends in US

Raj and Gunjan do hi-fi and laugh: What a funny joke?

Arjun stares at her badly and Raj too. Both stop laughing

Gunjan innocently smiles: Only 4 of them, only four (shows her 4 fingers) and hides behind Arohi giggling away

Arjun smiles. Gunjan has the most angelic smile that he has seen in this world among kids and her smile can melt even a rocks heart. She rarely smiles is serious majority of times not like other kids her age but when she does it warms anybody's heart who sees it.

Arohi: See Raj, I am famous in US also now. Arohi Ahluwaliah is famous. Your mom is famous.

Gunjan comes out from her hiding and stops her giggling and she and Raj stare at her and then Arjun. Both thinking their mom and aunty has gone crazy and shaking their heads looking at each other.

Arjun reaches for Arohi's throat: You have spoilt my reputation in entire world, you mad female

Arohi: Leave me leave me

Gunjan and Raj hit on Arjun's hand: Leave her

Arjun: Ohhh, you three have ganged against me. I will see you three

Gunjan warning: Do not give dhamki bhaiya, no one gives dhamki to Gunjan or her friends

Arjun: Ohhh i am scared, pitte bar ki bacchi mujhe Arjun ko dhamki de rahi hai what are you lady Rambo?

Gunjan: More than that

Gunjan gets up and gives her karate chop on Arjun's shoulders

Arjun leaves his hand in pain and somehow controls and stops the car in one hand

Arjun turns back: Ok, meri maa. You are more than lady rambo. I agree do not give such sample hits my hand may break especially while driving

Arohi: Baby, careful he is driving. We three are also in car

Arjun: Means, i can get hurt, you three should not

Raj and Arohi laugh: Maine aisa toh nahi kaha

Arohi looks at Arjun: Driver drive the car properly OK. It should not get damaged

Gunjan and Raj laugh. Arohi also laughs and does Hi-Fi with Raj and Gunjan.

Arjun acts angry: Driver I will not drive let me see how you go to mela

Raj and Gunjan look at Arohi

Arohi stammering: Those who sit in front are driver only nooo baby Raj

Raj and gunjan stare at her to not aggravate situation.

Raj and Gunjan massage his hands: please please

Arjun: You both never called me driver? Arohi called me

Gunjan: Aunty tell sorry now only

Arohi: Arohi Ahluwaliah never says sorry to anyone

Arjun: Car shall never move then baby tell your aunty

Gunjan and Raj sad face: Aunty mom say sorry

Arohi: Okkk Okkk sorry whispering issko dekhlugi

Arjun stares at Arohi and then looks at Gunjan

Gunjan whispers: Aunty, bhaiya is angry keep quiet and smile and say sorry

Arohi: Should I?

Gunjan ordering: Yesss

Arohi smiles and says sorryyy

Arjun starts driving: Okkk Okkk. Baby tell your aunty i am driving only for you and Raj. If she was alone even if she fell on my legs i would not budge

Arohi: Fall on your legs hahaha Gunjan grabs her mouth with both hands before she can complete

Gunjan almost begging: Please keep quiet aunty

Arohi: Okkk Okkk just because you said

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

cute...so cute...sweet!!!!!!

one ouest how do u update so frequently...i mean give sum tips!!!!

Edited by mansi_47 - 14 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

hahaaha!! its was sosoo cute <3

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

oh that was cute!

loved vry bit of it!

tnx 4 the pm...

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Fozia

@MsFuzzybear69

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#185

That was sooo cute...Please continue soon..

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: mansi_47
cute...so cute...sweet!!!!!!
one ouest how do u update so frequently...i mean give sum tips!!!!

i do not watch much TV(not more than 30 mins a day)

i spend half an hour a day to update(some days i have no interest to swtich on computer and skip updating)

as far as story goes the entire story came to my mind in feb only

i only have to type not think of the story forward.

and as i start writing my idea i get the dialogues instantly. I do not think before hand that this character will tell this its on that given day may be tommorow i may have written a different dialogue for same situation

so basically i love to write story poems etc very much

its not a work for me or task its my hobby so i do not get bored.

second is will if i decide i have to update so even if its 12pm i will update

so if you have love for a job and will power you can do it

somedays i have updated on my exam days during my study breaks

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

i want to read your next update :D

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago

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Tia

@arohi_arjun

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#188

That was too cute. Love Arjun and Arohi nok jhok... Raj and Gunjan was so cute playing pranks

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#189

Scene203 Arjun-Arohi 2nd Nokh Jhok

Gunjan pulls Raj in Arohi's back and whispering: Raj why is your mom like this?

Raj: I am trying to figure out Gunjan. No clue. Your mom also fights with your dad and acts like my mom

Gunjan: Nooo ways. My mom is scared of my dad. One stare from him and she will keep quiet

Raj: Then i will advice dad to stare at mom from next time. Buttt

Gunjan: But what?

Raj: Your mom she will keep quiet with one stare. My mom may pluck out my dad's eyes if he stares. Why do you think nowadays mom-dads act like this cannot they be like your parents quiet and serious?

Gunjan looks with pity at Raj: Kalyug Raj Kalyug parents are acting like kids and

Raj: Kids should act like parents. Seperate fighting brother and father in mud fights

Gunjan: Seperate fighting mother and father in car

Raj and Gunjan: Too many responsibilities on our shoulders. Lets have one dark chocolate for energy and both put a huge piece of dark chocolate in their mouths annd keep chewing

Arohi has started irritating Arjun again and he has stopped car applying a massive break

Raj and Gunjan shake their heads: Oh no not again and take their heads from behind Arohi and grab Arohi and Arjun and pull them apart who are at each other's throats this time fighting over which direction is shorter route

Arohi: Go left

Arjun: No right

Arohi: Left

Arjun: No right is shorter and will reach faster

Gunjan authoritative: Keep quiet both of you. I will decide which direction to go

Arohi: Arrey she is acting as if she is my DJ?

Gunjan: DJ

Arohi: Granny

Gunjan seriously: My dad says i am his mother's reincarnation

Arjun smiles. Arohi frowns. Raj is busy watching outside car trying to figure out directions.

Gunjan takes a piece of paper from her pocket and stares at it seriously analysing it.

Arohi and Arjun look on. They cannot win over her in talks. Gunjan sometimes acts more serious and mature than their grandmoms.

After 3 minutes

Gunjan: Go straight left takes 40 KMs and Right will take 46 Kms but center you will reach in 42 Kms but less time because other two have railway crossings and more signals. We will waste time at railway crossing

Arohi and Arjun gasp: How do you know all this?

Gunjan: Google maps. I downloaded the various directions to reach mela yesterday

Arohi: You are a genius Gunjan. Why do such ideas not come to my brain?

Arjun whispering: Brain, that only humans have nottt

Gunjan stares and he keeps quiet. Gunjan acts like a real grandmaaa only strict and serious. He better shut his mouth before she gives him a slap like his dadimaaa no no karate kick rather she is modern dadimaaa no slapping and jhoothi for her

Arjun: Yes and mine too. Your dad is right you are very clever like a dadimaa only.

Gunjan angrily: Because you are busy thinking of other non important things

Arjun: Other things

Gunjan: Yes like getting one up over each other

Arohi laughs: Baby good good you scolded him like a real dadi maaa

Gunjan bangs her head. She had told for both but aunty did not understand

She has no mood to explain and falls back to rest her back on the car.

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago