FF: Anokhe Rishte ka Rag - Pt5(Last Part)@Pg19 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: MsFuzzybear69

Awesome start...

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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Hey everyone. Amira told me to write the first part of this FF. So here it is:

Arohi was sitting down on the bed, smiling to herself. She was waiting for her husband to come It was their Suhaag Raat. Ten minutes had passed, no one was here. Twenty minutes, still no one. She decided to go out of her room. As Arohi opened the door, Arjun stood there. He barged into the room, pushing her to one side.
Arohi: Arjun, where were you?
Arjun: None of your business.
Arohi: But I'm your wife!!!
Arjun: Well, in front of others, you maybe my wife, but to me you are just a simple time pass.
Arohi was shocked. She loved Arjun all her life and thought that he loved her to. But his answer had now changed her mind...

Arjun walked to the bed and sat down.
Arjun: Arohi, don't show me those fake tears. Now, go to sleep.
Arohi lay down on the bed, tears rolling down her cheeks.
Arjun: And Arohi, I just married you because of Dadi. I'm sending her to the village tomorrow. You'll have no one.
Arohi cried even more harder, the words piercing her ears. 😭

*****

Arohi woke up bright and early. Today was her first day at her sasural and she was already feeling down.
Arohi thought: Arjun doesn't like me. Why? But Arohi, think on the bright side. Romit likes me as his bhabhi and I can get Arjun to love me.
Her thoughts disappeared when she saw Arjun's sister, Rashi standing at the door.
Rashi: Bhabhi, Dadi's calling you. Jaldi karna.
Arohi: Just done. Chal, I'll go with you.
Rashi: No. I don't like to walk with low-class people. It will ruin my image.
She skipped down the stairs. Arohi had tears in her eyes but didn't show them.

Everyone was at the dining table.
Romit: So, how was the night?
Arjun: Very good. Hai na Arohi?
Arohi nodded and served the food.
Dadi: Arohi, you come and sit with us. The servants will do the work.
Kumud: Sasu-maa, I gave all servants a day off, so she will have o serve us, like all typical bahu's do.
Kumud and Rashi sniggered.
Dadi: Kumud, don't forget that you are a bahu aswell. I can easily get you to serve me.
Kumud stayed quiet as Romit chuckled.
Arjun: Acha, I'm going to office. Bye Mum, Rashi, Romit and Dadi.
He touched Dadi's feet and disappeared outside.
Dadi: Ajeeb kisam ki insan hai. Sabko bye kaha aur Arohi ko nahi?
She got up out of her seat and went to the temple.
Arohi was feeling very lonely. Only one person could get rid of that feeling...

Hope you liked the first part.

Nahi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
yes nahi - i liked the first part indeed - good start - lot of questions in my mind - ofcourse i have to wait for some time to anwser the same - please continue - thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

yes nahi - i liked the first part indeed - good start - lot of questions in my mind - ofcourse i have to wait for some time to anwser the same - please continue - thanks for the pm


Thnx dear!!! Amira might carry on from that part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
it was good start
waiting more to read
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
nahi iloved it..
superb wil love to read more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
super FF
yes sure carry on...
will be fun to read how arohi attracts arjun towards herself
plz dnt send dadi to village keep here as a catalyst a cupid between arjuhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
a good start hope arjun starts falling for arohi soon
Sandrav thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Rally first part was great. looking forward to this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
gonna see arohi with typical sasural, poor arohi..
hope soon she build a place in arjun's heart and become his princess

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