FF: Anokhe Rishte ka Rag - Pt5(Last Part)@Pg19

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Amira.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Arohi andhere mein apne bed par baithi hai... Usne white salwar kameez pehni hain... Uski ankhon mein bohot dard hai jaise usne apni zindagi ki bohot badi cheez kho di ho... jaise woh jee to rahi hai lekin phir bhi ek adhoori zindagi ho.. uski sansein to chal rahi hain lekin dil nahi darkh raha... jaise uske honth muskurana bhool gaye hai.. uske dil ki baat jo sirf ankhon se bayaan hoti hai lekin hothon par nahi aa pati.. jaise usne ek anokha rishta kho diya ho... bed ke saath wale table par ek candle pari huwi hoti hai to Arohi usse jala thi hai achanak hawa ka zor se jhonka ata hai jo uss candle ko puchaa deta hai tabhi Arohi ki ankh se ansoo ghirta hai... Arohi apna haath uss candle ke jale huwe hisse par rakhti hai aur phir apni mang mein lagha deti hai.. woh apna chehra dosri taraf karti hai aur mirror mein dekhti hai... Uski mang mein kala rang lagha huwa hota hai.. achanak koi usse sweety keh kar pukkar tha hai.. woh yeh sunn kar hairan ho jati hai.. uske ankhon se khushi ke ansoo ghirte hain aur hothon pe ek khusburaat si muskuraat.. jaise woh bohot barson baad dil se muskurayee hain... Arohi jaldi se baghte huwe jati hai.. bohot raat ka waqat hota hai... woh garden mein pohnj jati hai uss awaaz ko sunte sunte.. woh apne charon ore dekhti hai wahan koi nahi hota... woh muskurat uske hothon se gayab ho jati hai aur woh takhte huwe apne gutnon par ghir jati hai.. Uski ankhon se ansoo ghirte hain...

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Part1 - Page5

Part2 - Page8

Part3 - Page12

Part4 - Page14
Part5 - Page19

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Hey friends.. I'm Amira, I will uptade this FF after 1/2 week in my holidays... Hit the like button and leave you compliments.. and please give me some suggestion, should I start this or not?

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 14 years ago

1rst awesome!
do pm me!
n also continue...
we'll wait for your next update!!
sounds so classy...after a long time..i'm reading something which was completely in hindi,it gave me a very good feeling!!
the promo sounds interesting...:):)

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channi_star

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Posted: 14 years ago

add me to ur pm list ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Add me to Ur pm list n it was awesome start

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Posted: 14 years ago

ur ff promo's heart touching plz update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow...it was amazing...do continue...i wud luv to read it...pm me...tc :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Do cntinue dr. N add me also in ur pm list.
Varsh,ya she is writng clasy hindi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

it's awesome
do continue nd pm me too

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Amira.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vrshn
1rst awesome!
do pm me!
n also continue...
we'll wait for your next update!!
sounds so classy...after a long time..i'm reading something which was completely in hindi,it gave me a very good feeling!!
the promo sounds interesting...:):)

Yep.. you are the 1st! 😉
Thanks... 😊
Sure, I will pm u 😊
Thank u so muchh 😳