WEN DID I FALL IN LOVE ??ffarjuhi page 17 DEC 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
very nice start...
arjun n gauri????? *nahiii*
continue soon n add me to ur pm list...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
scene 2

🤢arjun really wanted to b come a politician and so started to know abt parties to join them .he just wanted to marry gauri as soon as possible ,

in the office
leader -wat is the work u hav com here ?/
arjun - i wanted to join u r party soo...
leader -r u kidding ??ur just 24 and u want to ruin u r life ??y politics 😕.i hav seen ur file .u better take ajob u will do well
arjun -sir plzz its my decition i want to serve people❤️
leader-paagal ho kya ??accha tekh hai chalthi bathkarengi
they go to the canteen to take few sips of tea
leader- waise naam kya bathaya tha haa arjun puthar to javaan hai .patha nahi kyoo anna charahe ho .tum ko pehale paisa dena hoga ham nahi deange vo tho jaantha hai na thu??
arjun -sir u mean corruption .no i cant do it
muji c.m se milna hai baas
leader tho tumari margii .3 mahi ne baad ajjana 😡
arjun - time??
leader -10
arjun -thank u sir .leader -tumhe kutch samaj me ayya kya??
arjun yes sir -sep 5th 10 o clock and leaves😆


arjun to other official party head
same thing there also
but after knowing the opp.party had given him appointment he asks fr his details

leader-naam ,adress ,age,files etc
leader -caste ??religion??👏
arjun-nahi bataunga
leader -kyo ??computer accept nahi karegi .bhol na prob kya hai
??😆
arjun -sir soory
leaves
😛

here befre she is back to his house we see people comming out
rudra -ye jay hai .voo gauri ko dehknre ayee hai 🥺
arjun -hellow
jay -hellow ,gauri told me that u r her best frnd
arjun -😲🤢😭

**happy guyss ??

gauris room

she was removing her jhumkaas and payal .
arjun - tumhe pasand ayaa?
gauri-ma aur dad ko pasand hai
arjun -main ne putcha tumhe pasand ayaa kya??
gauri -choodoona

arjuns eyes turns towards a teddy wch he gifed her .it was on the floor .one of his photo with her so tilted (jhatka lag gaya 😆

gauri- this teddy is still my fav.pulled it frm him

beep msg
arjun -koon??
gauri- vo voo...jay
arun - tun ne no. deya tha kya??
gauri -ha voo
arjun- bahaar chalengi /?cofee
gauri nahi abb anhi
arjun -accha tekh hai
cing his face
gauri -me dree change karunji .we will go out
arjun - i wll wait fr u


gauri closes the door msgs jay😉

jay -did u like me mm??
gauri -ilets c foward sir


rudra -kaha ja rahe hoo tum dono
arjun -appko patha hai na mein uss se pyar karthi hoo
rudra -tum se kaise shaadi kavay meri beeti ko
vo tumhari mindset kutch galath hai
akk paise b nahi kammathe ho... and so on

arjun-agar kamaya aur bank me 1 lakh hai to shaadi karvayen gi kyaa (in anger)

tab dekhenge

they move to a small cafe
arjun-bhaya 2 chaai aur biscuit
they sit
arjun -tum muji pasand nahi karte ho kya??
gauri -arjun -tum meri best frnd ho .tumhara kaam dad ko passand nahi hai aur dejkh muji kaise jagaa pe laye .koyee accah hotel nahi mele kya?/
arjun -shocked and says yaha cofee achee hithi hai isiliyee😕

later they leave
gauri-dekh akk larki saab bags pakar rahi hai aur tum aise chalee ja rahe ho😕

tumhe larkiya samaj nahi aathi choodo abb🤢

they move on the bike
suddenly it gets spoil .no petrol (lari ki sam ne izzath chala gaya😆😉)
gauri- yahi hai tumhari problem .
i will call jay aur my driver
arjun- no i will drop u in the cab


nowhere i will just give u the mind set of all the 4 of them .how r they .i mean wat kind f peple they are

hope u all liked it .press the like button .and dnt forget to comment...
Edited by phoo_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

nicee!!!! a diffrent concept!!

add me 2 ur pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

another update gr8 keep it up !

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
heheh i like ds gauri...lol
thnks fr d update
...vibha... thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
it was awesome
plz pm me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
great update - nice ff - continue - update everyday please - pm me also
mIsHeZ.x thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
nice concept...
do cont soon
nd pls add me 2 ur pm list :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
guys thanx fr u r comments 🤗

let me tell u all something i am basically a telugu speaking girl and i dnt knw hindi properly and punjabi not fr hell 😉.sooo sorrry if i have any mistakes .i can understand hindi lekin translate karna its difficult fr me

but really thanx fr bearing me and my hindi .😆.hats off fr u all👏



a beautiful morning every one busy with there own work
arjun in frnt of office and
arohi in her shop waiting fr costomers
gauri dancing (she is a good dancer
jay on the phone


by the noon arjun tired walks to the cafe and keeps his face down
arahi tired of showing her desigs and collections
both pale restless,unhappy tired ,as if they lost smething in thee life

arjun near the signals on his bike
it dsnt seem so start ,,very less petrol
a begger comes to him .he still checks his purse finds 50/ sees the man wth no energy ,full of bones ,its highly hot out
gives him the money and starts pushing his vechile


arohi in the noon wen sun is on her head
tired ,lost her energy,almost to cry .
a small boy begging fr alms ,no petol ,to balance ,gives her tifin to him starts pushing her vechicle

gauri in her ac car ,sees the same begger closses off the mirror and asks the driver to start off

jay being a politician he is totally differret
he sees a old man begging in the hot sun
calls the police and moves all the beggers to the jeep 😆(may b to send them some where far

arjun gives his interview wch he applied fr gauri
and gets a job with a commision happy

arohi with a young manager showing him her collections
he with his seducing looks askshim to meet afternoon
she asks him whether he liked them he tells w'll see foward come in the evening . arohi goes there at the fixed time and after showing him her most famous collections folds them and packs

thw guy tries to take advantage holds her hand ,she b coms annaying trying to move her hand bleeds herself ,slaps him reach her house


arohis house;
on the dinning table
amrith;aroo kya huaa??aise kyoo ho ??wat happen to u r bak bak bak strategy??
arohi ;angrily kutch nahi
amrith ;arohi kya hua ?tumhari hath par ye ...
arohi ;sees hr father in frnt and signals her to keep quite
amrith;batha naa kya huaaa? 🤢
arohi ;akk pagal larka .voo mera haath pakad kar kutch ...
dad it wasnt my mistake he was seeing my collections and...
he gets up angrily moves frm the table without eating
arohi ;starts crying moves to her room faals on the bed hugging her pillow to the fullest 😭
her dad . i atready told u not to do all this types of buisness now u r not gng to do anything .u r going to marry
ham larki he yee sab kaam nahi kar pathe tum kya karogii??

shefali ;sad also tries to move without completing her dinner
amrith;tum vahi ki vahi baith ja .fr whom hav i wrked to feed 😆😉

after a hr
amrith;arohi puthar akk baar us pankaj ki baree me sotch .ha karduu??
kya bathaye larki valoo ko ?agar vo putche thoo??

arohi covers her wound on her hand and close her eys and saysto her self"arohi sotch ,arohi sotch. hmmm height ?-ok touch ?-ok last one kiss-waak nooo .its ok arohi .sabhi ko hrithik nahi milthe na "
maa okkk (loudly)
dad go and take u r dinner.

only the word ok brought a 100 watt energy in all f them
amrith -ladki valo ne shaadi badrachalam me karne vale hai
her father-phone no.kya hai unn logi ka??
shefali- perfect now atleast we can go out .badrachalam soo good ,we have to cross godavari(a sea)between the mountains .in b/w the sea ,on a boat ,wow y'day i saw a package ,we will opt fr it ...

arohi -mein ne tho haa kardiya app shadi ki baare me sotch rahe hai

cont...


Edited by phoo_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
it was nice
waiting for next part

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