WEN DID I FALL IN LOVE ??ffarjuhi page 17 DEC 27

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guys this is my very first FF in this forum 😃.but i ll do my best .hope u peple will like it

this one is a simple LOVE STORY .inspired frm a telugu movie GODAVARI .ita a mythological one but suits our ARJUN and AROHI 😉
index-page 1-1st scene
page 2 -scene 2
page 3 - part 2
page 4 -part 3
page 5
page 8
page 11- part 6
page 13
page 14
page 14-part 9
page 16 - part 10
PART 11-PAGE 17

CHARECTER SKETCH ;
ALLUWALIAs ; is a small middle class family .frm chandigard
mr sudhiir ;manajer in a bank -arohi's father
mrs amrit ;house wife -arohi's mom
miss shafali ;fire brand .student inter 1year - arohis sis

and now entering
AROHI ALLUWALLIA ; a simple girl ,in a dreamy world .wanted to b independent .attitude ,proud ,funny ,sensitive ,loving and a modern girl with romantic ideas .just like our arohi

SINGHANIAs ;a bussiness family
mr rudr;buisness man - arjuns uncle
mrs lali ; house maker - arjuns aunty
miss gauri ; - cousin (beleived to get married to arjun one day )
and now
ARJUN SINGHANIA ; a passionate man ,live in the world ,a good citizen ,little political minded wanting to serve the world .mostly unlucky





aluwalias daily rotinue ;

morning ;7 o clock
amrith ; in her kitchen .with some wrk
shefali ;shouting loud her answers to tell everyone she is syuding
sudhir ;gets up .and cmes out the room .sees the calender and then again slips under his blanket to sleep .bcoz it was sunday .and his wife wld force him to take her to the temple ,after a long head bath and it was tooo coool outside.

arohi ;maaa cofee jaldiii.bits her tongue and thinks fr a while"aaj sunday ,coldwater head bath ,halfsarii ,temple,marriage ki liye lecture 🤢.nahi arohi behatar hoga ki tum b dad hi taraha soojaaa"😆
amrith ;uuth jaa puthar ,naha lo mandir janna hai jaldi kar arooo
arohi;gets up walks to her "dekh mei abbhi bol rahi hu ,tumhi mandir me drop karlithi hoo.likin head bath ,halfsarii sab nahi cheleGA anna hai tho aa"
amrith ;cooly aroo ajj date 1st hai patha hai na ??sotch loo.tumhari koyy zaruurathe hongiii.


arohi on the scooty in her half sari .looking gourgous in troubled mind .
reach the mandirand aroo starts covering her bare stomach .her mom giggling and scolding her

arohi ;"hai bhagvan ,muji batcha lo ,mari choti choti dreams hai ,meri collectin sabbi ko pasand aajai aur meri shopki collections world famous hojaii aur main akk achhi designer banjau ,mein lakhoo kamauu aur accha hansom ladki se mari shaadi hojayy...aur...😎🥺
nahi nahi ye bohath hogaya😵 .meri collection uss paagal manager pasand karle aur muji ithna paise mile ki mein 550 / watchman ko do ,aur akk 1000/ vo punam ko du .aur 5000 uss kiraya dedu bass ithna dedoo plzz bhagvan ithna kardoo"😃

in her shop
punam sails girl ; caleder dekhate .mam ajjj ...
coustermers enter
arahi ;punam jaa .dekha na
punam ;date
arohi;😭ha meri maaa abhi lathi hoo teri paise ,abb ja bhii

on her scooty ;thinking "ab kya hoga ,maa ke saamni gidgidana padega aur paise maangna padega .😆aroo tu too gay ajj phir se lecture .

taaffic police ;ye larki gadhi rukh
arohi "ab e he batch gaya tha🤢"
traffic police -licence dehka .rc book bhi .
arohi - uncle vooo
tp- uncle??💔
arohi -sir nahi hai ,phir deka thi hai "milgaya "
tp -😭. accaha helmet kaha hai .arohi bit her tongue and "uncle ,sorry .vo sir ghar me muje dekhne kileye larki vale aa rahe hai tho agar me helmat lagali tho meri baal ki kyahaalath hajayeji aapko patha hai na ??muji aur meri aisee baal dekh kar kon muji se shhadi kereaga ??bhaliye na sir 😉"
tp-😭 lekin ...
aroo -sir 200 /- dungi .(starts corrupting attitude)
tp- nahi 300/-
aroo-😡 nahi sir voo... cing his face
aroo-sir keys
tp -baghna chathi hai .tum muji uloo nahi banasakthi 😳
aroo- sir bag dekhi mein hai
starts her scooty and runs away 🤣
tp izzath bachane kiliye chup rehajatha hai 😆

singhanias life
arjun has no parents but he had only one person who lover him like his parents DADI
arjun was in love with gauri
but gauri is confused as always
arjun was intrested in politics .wch no one liked .everyone frced him to take up a job and if he earned his uncle wld marry her daughter to him
this is the situation there ...

how did u all like this??anything to change or any expectations??let me know


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Sandrav thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear i had also watched the film its really lovely story. And I m sure arjuhi will rock the story .and pls add me to ur pm list.
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Originally posted by: Sandrav

Dear i had also watched the film its really lovely story. And I m sure arjuhi will rock the story .and pls add me to ur pm list.

i first one to comment 👏thanx aa
i was in dilamma wheter u all will like it or not .lets c if peple r intrested i will con otherwise... also i will cont,...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...thats cool!
arjun in love with gauri?? nooo!*filmy style*
please do continue..:)
congo on your new ff :D:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very funny update
Arjun is in love with gauri ??,eew
plz pm me when you update and plz cont soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good Concept. Please PM me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start - lovely ff - arjun in love with gauri - hahaha - noways - i have not seen the movie but do not make the ff short - make it a never ending one -
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gd outline..
bt arjun in love wth gauri?? "naahhiii" lol
arjuhi r meant fr each other so no worries
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏it seems u r loving it glad to knw that then i will con ... soon

dont miss, really intresting .wen u c new charecters entering

it is some wat animated .i am sure u will love it .do reply b coz muji encouragemaent ki zaroorath hai .😉☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luvly startng...lukng 4ward 2 it. Do pm me.

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