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I like kitani mohabbat hai. This is my first FF. I am taking an initial plot from the telugu movie "bomarillu".
CHARACTER SKETCH:
THE GAREWALS
FATHER: D. K. GAREWAL
WIFE: NAMRATA GAREWAL
ELDER SON: PIYUSH . HIS WIFE: NEHA . DAUGHTER: PINKY
ELDER DAUGHTER: NEETU. HER HUSBAND: UDAY SON: RAJ
YOUNGER SON: ARJUN
YOUNGER DAUGHTER: NISHA
BIG FAMILY...HAPPY FAMILY...BUT ARE THEY TRULY HAPPY???...WILL KNOW LATER
THE SHARMAS
AROHI SHARMA AND HER DAD PANDIT HARI PRASAD...(I didn't feel like changing the names)
Index:
Part 1: page 1
Part 2: page 3
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5
Part 5: page 7
Part 6: page 8
English translated version: page 9, 10
Part 7: page 10
Part 8: page 12
Part 9: page 14
Part 10: page 18
Part 11: page 20
Part 12: page 22
Part 13: page 23
Part 14: page 25
PART 1:
A FATHER TEACHES HIS SON HOW TO WALK. BUT WHAT IF THE FATHER NEVER LEAVES THE CHILD'S HAND EVEN WHEN HIS CHILD GROWS INTO AN ADULT???
A guy is carrying a bag on the road and muttering to himself something. He is so lost in his own thoughts that least he cared about people walking or vehicles passing by. While he was walking, he didn't notice a car coming towards him. (Good that the guy pushed the breaks instantly)
person 1: oh hello!...kyun bhai dikhai nahi deta kya?
ARJUN coming back to his senses, "ohh sorry. I was lost in my own thoughts. Life mein bahut saare problems hai."
person 1: Aur tumne kya socha, life ek Cinderella ki kahani hai? Even Cinderella had to face a lot of problems before she got her happy ending.
The person saw that arjun wasn't saying anything. His mood showed many emotions at the same side. But to the peak was frustration and anger.
The person calmly asked,"Are you going somewhere?, If you are taking this route then may be i can give you a lift".
Arjun nodded yes and sat inside the car.
person 1: Hi. My name is Salil. Mittal
Arjun: hi. My name is Arjun Garewal.
Salil: Agar bura na mano toh ek baat poochu?
Arjun: ha poocho.
Salil: Bahut frustrated aur gusse mein lag rahe ho. Baat kya hai?. Kis pe itna gussa ho.
Arjun: Apne dad par.
Salil: Kyun kya hua?
Arjun: Mere Dad mujhe woh dete hi nahi jo mujhe chahiye.
Salil: ye toh sahi mein badi problem h...
He was interrupted by Arjun.
Arjun: He gives me more than i want...
Salil: Arrey tum pagal ho kya??...your dad loves you so much that he gives you more than what you want. Aur tum phir bhi complain kar rahe ho?
Arjun: Meri problem tum nahi samjoge. Meri problem samajne ke liye Lifestyle mall mein ja kar poocho...(Flashback scene narrated by arjun to salil)
Flashback Scene:
Arjun is in the mall, shopping for clothes. He wears a nice T-shirt, looks at himself in the mirror."You are so handsome, girls would die for you"...he says.
He comes out of the dressing room and finds his dad talking to the sales person and selecting a t-shirt for him.
D.K: What shirt should i choose for my son?
sales guy looks at Arjun. "sir, i think your son has already made a choice"
D.K: What would you say if you see someone wearing that what he is wearing?
Sales guy: Its the new youth style sir
D.K chooses a shirt and places it in arjun's direction and asks the sales guy,"What would you say if he was wearing this?"
sales guy: He would look decent sir.
D.k: And what if he tucks the shirt in?...then?...what did you say before?
Sales guy: "Youth". Even he knew it wasn't true. but it was not the guy's fault. He was a sales person and he had to agree with his customer's point of view.
.D.K: yes youth. Arjun remove that and go wear this and show me.
Arjun is speechless 🥺. He does what his dad says. He goes once again into the dressing room and wears the shirt his dad gave him. He looks at himself in the mirror. He looked like a champu and he hated it 😡. "Not even a fat and ugly girl would look at me now", he thought. He hears his dad calling his mom,"Ya, I am with arjun in the mall shopping for him. It took me 2 hours to find something proper"
Just then arjun comes out of the dressing room wearing the shirt. D.K looks at him,
"Superb!!!" 👍🏼 he says cheerfully. Arjun becomes sad and goes back in to change. He hears D.K saying,"shirts and pants are done, time for underwear 😳."
Arjun never liked that his dad use to choose things for him. instead he liked his choice, but his dad would never let him. He thought he knew what is best for his children.
Back to today
Salil Laughs😆😆😆
To be continued...
CHARACTER SKETCH:
THE GAREWALS
FATHER: D. K. GAREWAL
WIFE: NAMRATA GAREWAL
ELDER SON: PIYUSH . HIS WIFE: NEHA . DAUGHTER: PINKY
ELDER DAUGHTER: NEETU. HER HUSBAND: UDAY SON: RAJ
YOUNGER SON: ARJUN
YOUNGER DAUGHTER: NISHA
BIG FAMILY...HAPPY FAMILY...BUT ARE THEY TRULY HAPPY???...WILL KNOW LATER
THE SHARMAS
AROHI SHARMA AND HER DAD PANDIT HARI PRASAD...(I didn't feel like changing the names)
Index:
Part 1: page 1
Part 2: page 3
Part 3: page 4
Part 4: page 5
Part 5: page 7
Part 6: page 8
English translated version: page 9, 10
Part 7: page 10
Part 8: page 12
Part 9: page 14
Part 10: page 18
Part 11: page 20
Part 12: page 22
Part 13: page 23
Part 14: page 25
PART 1:
A FATHER TEACHES HIS SON HOW TO WALK. BUT WHAT IF THE FATHER NEVER LEAVES THE CHILD'S HAND EVEN WHEN HIS CHILD GROWS INTO AN ADULT???
A guy is carrying a bag on the road and muttering to himself something. He is so lost in his own thoughts that least he cared about people walking or vehicles passing by. While he was walking, he didn't notice a car coming towards him. (Good that the guy pushed the breaks instantly)
person 1: oh hello!...kyun bhai dikhai nahi deta kya?
ARJUN coming back to his senses, "ohh sorry. I was lost in my own thoughts. Life mein bahut saare problems hai."
person 1: Aur tumne kya socha, life ek Cinderella ki kahani hai? Even Cinderella had to face a lot of problems before she got her happy ending.
The person saw that arjun wasn't saying anything. His mood showed many emotions at the same side. But to the peak was frustration and anger.
The person calmly asked,"Are you going somewhere?, If you are taking this route then may be i can give you a lift".
Arjun nodded yes and sat inside the car.
person 1: Hi. My name is Salil. Mittal
Arjun: hi. My name is Arjun Garewal.
Salil: Agar bura na mano toh ek baat poochu?
Arjun: ha poocho.
Salil: Bahut frustrated aur gusse mein lag rahe ho. Baat kya hai?. Kis pe itna gussa ho.
Arjun: Apne dad par.
Salil: Kyun kya hua?
Arjun: Mere Dad mujhe woh dete hi nahi jo mujhe chahiye.
Salil: ye toh sahi mein badi problem h...
He was interrupted by Arjun.
Arjun: He gives me more than i want...
Salil: Arrey tum pagal ho kya??...your dad loves you so much that he gives you more than what you want. Aur tum phir bhi complain kar rahe ho?
Arjun: Meri problem tum nahi samjoge. Meri problem samajne ke liye Lifestyle mall mein ja kar poocho...(Flashback scene narrated by arjun to salil)
Flashback Scene:
Arjun is in the mall, shopping for clothes. He wears a nice T-shirt, looks at himself in the mirror."You are so handsome, girls would die for you"...he says.
He comes out of the dressing room and finds his dad talking to the sales person and selecting a t-shirt for him.
D.K: What shirt should i choose for my son?
sales guy looks at Arjun. "sir, i think your son has already made a choice"
D.K: What would you say if you see someone wearing that what he is wearing?
Sales guy: Its the new youth style sir
D.K chooses a shirt and places it in arjun's direction and asks the sales guy,"What would you say if he was wearing this?"
sales guy: He would look decent sir.
D.k: And what if he tucks the shirt in?...then?...what did you say before?
Sales guy: "Youth". Even he knew it wasn't true. but it was not the guy's fault. He was a sales person and he had to agree with his customer's point of view.
.D.K: yes youth. Arjun remove that and go wear this and show me.
Arjun is speechless 🥺. He does what his dad says. He goes once again into the dressing room and wears the shirt his dad gave him. He looks at himself in the mirror. He looked like a champu and he hated it 😡. "Not even a fat and ugly girl would look at me now", he thought. He hears his dad calling his mom,"Ya, I am with arjun in the mall shopping for him. It took me 2 hours to find something proper"
Just then arjun comes out of the dressing room wearing the shirt. D.K looks at him,
"Superb!!!" 👍🏼 he says cheerfully. Arjun becomes sad and goes back in to change. He hears D.K saying,"shirts and pants are done, time for underwear 😳."
Arjun never liked that his dad use to choose things for him. instead he liked his choice, but his dad would never let him. He thought he knew what is best for his children.
Back to today
Salil Laughs😆😆😆
To be continued...
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