FF arjuhi..story with a bit of comedy - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Nice chapter..i dnt know about the movie but your FF is good..would like to read more of it:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Loved it! Wainting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Suprb yar..luvd it..
i didn't watch d movie bt ur ff is very interesting..update soon..
thnx 4 d pm..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
haha..beautiful yaar! at least he won't let this happen for his career and woman! ab dekhte hain yeh kya kahaani hai!lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Luvin it so far!!! Update soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3:

Flash Back

GAREWAL HOUSE:

ARJUN'S ROOM

The servant comes in Arjun's room to wake him up. His name is Dhondhu. He is Arjun's favourite. He is his secret weapon. If Arjun wants to get any information related to his family members, Dhondhu comes in handy. He knew all the gossip that took place at the Garewal's place.

Dhondu: Arjun Baba wake up, subha ho gayi hai.

Arjun: Sone de na Dhondu. Har din ki shuruwat waisi hi honi chahiye jaise hum chahe.🥱

Dhondu: Your dad has already got up.

After hearing his father's name, Arjun wakes up immediately. He knew how particular his dad was in following rules. And one of them was that the whole family will eat breakfast together.

He looks at Dhondhu. He has green facial on half of his face

Dhondhu: Aap kuch chahene ki baat kar rahe the shayad? 😃...he taunts Arjun. He knew Arjun was always scared of his Dad.

Arjun looks at him with a straight face. "Ise toh baad mein dekh lunga", he thinks.😡

He hears Nisha screaming out Dhondu's name.

Nisha, his younger Sister. Nisha was 20 years old. She always wanted to be a beautician. But her Father didn't allow her to work in a beauty parlour or have her own beauty parlor. He thought girls in the family shouldn't be working. The guy should work and provide the ladies everything they wish. But little did her father notice that he himself is denying her of something she wished for so long.

And since she didn't get to fulfill her dream, she used to experiment on all the family members and her favourite was Dhondu because he is always in the house, so it wouldn't matter if one of her experiments ever failed. And plus he was their servant, he had to obey her orders.

Nisha: Dhonduuuuuu where are you?

Dhondu: Sir, Please tell her I am not here.

Enters Nisha.

Nisha: Dhondu....

Arjun pointing in Dhondu direction: "He is not here", he says.

Nisha: Dhondu, why did you come half way through?

Dhondu: Kyunki mujhe kam se kam aadhi salary to chahiye. Mein aapke experiment aur bardaash nahi kar sakta. Rs. 50 cream lagane ke.

Nisha: That's facial 😊

Dhondu: Rs 100 to curl my hair.

Nisha: It's called curls 😊

Dhondu: Rs 10 to cut my nails

Nisha: That's called manicure 😊

He looks at Arjun.

Dhondhu: She takes away all my salary. Either set up a beauty parlour for her or else hang a "Beauty Parlour" board in front of the house.

Nisha: Dhondu, will you shut up? Bro, come I'll do a facial for you.

Arjun: How much?

Nisha: Rs 100 only

Arjun: I'll will give Rs. 100 extra.

Nisha is very happy. 😃

Arjun : Remove his facial

Dhondu is happy. 😃

Arjun: And do a facial for him again..

Dhondu: Arjun Sir……….😲

Nisha takes him away

Arjun with his evil looks: Next time he will think 10 times before taunting me. That it's Arjun he is dealing with. 😈

Arjun gets ready and goes down for his breakfast.

Next room:

His bro Piyush is getting ready to go to office. Piyush was a simple sweet guy. His was so dominated by his Dad. Even though he was married, every decision in his life was taken by his Dad. And yes this included his choice of clothes too. But unlike Arjun he had already given up. He had already adjusted to the fact that his Dad would make all the decision and somewhere he felt that it was correct and his right to do so too. He loved his kids. He wanted the best for them.

"Tomorrow I would do the same for my kids too"…He thought.

But it was wrong; he knew it well that even tomorrow his dad would be the one taking all the decision for his kids too. But he was satisfied with what he had. His career, his wife everything was what his Dad had decided for him. He had a happy married life with a loving and caring wife Neha and his daughter Pinky, a job and a loving family.

"A settled life"…He thought.

"There would be many who would die to be in my place. What else can I wish for?"

He thanked God for his Dad who made all this possible. 😊

His wife Neha was also a calm person. She hardly spoke. Sometimes Arjun even wondered if she knew how to talk. The only person she used to interact a lot was her husband.

Neha to Pinky: If you come back without having lunch then…

Pinky leaves the room.

Piyush is on his way for the breakfast. He is at the stairs when Neha calls him from behind;

"Darling…"

She says it softly so that she couldn't be heard by anyone except her husband. She comes closer to Piyush.

Piyush was about to kiss Neha but iust then both of them notice Arjun staring at them. They starts looking sideways.

Neha: Ehh.....You forgot your mobile…

Piyush: haan….yes…..its ok....thanks…😳. He didn't know how to react.

Arjun just smiles.😊

He looks at Piyush and winks. 😉

Piyush is embarrassed. 😳

To be continued....

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I hope you like it. Till now its pretty clear that its only D.K who lives his life as he wishes to. The others are just dragging along. There are still some members of the family yet to be talked about.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Wow!! it's getting better by the minute! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
going good..waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Nice....... Just like the movie.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Wow.. I luv it!!! Can't w8 2 meet the other family members!!! 😃

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