OS: Summer Vacation - Part 2, pg. 10 & Note pg. 13

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kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

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finished reading it. I was perfect pooja 👍🏼 loved it. whenever u get such brilliant ideas pen them down like this.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kavyasam
finished reading it. I was perfect pooja 👍🏼 loved it. whenever u get such brilliant ideas pen them down like this.

thank you kavzz 😳

haha I will surely try to write one this weekend 😳 or next weekend 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dr.BasketGupta
@sknra - thank you 😳

well it won't be a continuation to this, but I will surely write another OS for Arjuhi 😳

thats great so nice of u ,😊 now waiting for another OS

on arjuhi😊 n thanks alot for giving us such sweet OS...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sknra

thats great so nice of u ,😊 now waiting for another OS😳 on arjuhi😊 n thanks alot for giving us such sweet OS...

you are welcome 😳

Originally posted by: princess14
great story!! loved it!!

thank you so much 😳

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Pooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sowmya18
loved it......keep writing more................

thank you 😳

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Mona

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Yeah I finally read dat😆it was really good, and the way u make them talk 2 each other in garage made me 🤣 u talk exactly like dat at time, and i just love it😳😆but the end, i wanted more🤣u know how u r reading something and u r liking it and it finishes🤔I want more OS's from u and i think i might write 1 too, its been so long since i wrote 1, been so many months now, well lets see, m looking forward for more🤣

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naveen

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow pooja i loved it carry on writing wow

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@Monuuuuuuuuuuu - hehe i am going to call u that now because it's easier 😳😆

yeahhh i know i talk like that sometimes, but that's how Arohi is too 😆😆
*bows down* finally you read it 😡😆

😲 you've written OS's before?? 😲😲😲 u didn't tell me??? 😡😡

hahahah yesss I am happy i left u wanting more!!! that's what it was supposed to do

@mrs.karan.kundr - thank you 😳

@Soulmate_Sana - thank you 😳

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midhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Pooja i liked it so much⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...as we r seeing them in more intense scenes i expected more at the end...extend it... love to read more of OS from you...grandparents leaving looked fake...other than that everything is perfect and in all takes i cud just visualizing arjun and arohi😍😍😍😍...nice smooth take👏👏👏......first when i saw it i felt its so long🥱, after started reading it...its more interesting and wanted it more and more and not to end..hahaha😊.. dil mangi more😉....waiting for your next OS

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Pooja

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Originally posted by: piamist
pooja i liked it so much...as we r seeing them in more intense scenes i expected more at the end...extend it... love to read more of OS from you...grandparents leaving looked fake...other than that everything is perfect and in all takes i cud just visualizing arjun and arohi...nice smooth take......first when i saw it i felt its so long, after started reading it...its more interesting and wanted it to extend more and more and not to end..hahaha

thank you so much....yes it's quite a long OS 😆 but I couldn't stop myself...and i think had to rush it up at the end

well i don't see how grandparents leaving is fake? 😕 they left so the kids could enjoy as they want...usually if an elderly is at home, you tend to be more careful of what you are doing...

so when these friends came over, they left because they don't want the kids to feel uneasy 😳😳 they all just went to hangout with their group. They hadn't reached home yet, and Arjun had taken the opportunity to come home and talk to her before she left the next morning

but I can't extend this, and the OS wasn't really something I was seeing from what they are showing in the show right now. It was just my thought, and my own imagination for Arjuhi. Nothing to do with the track right now.

but i'm happy u liked it so much, u want it extended 😆 i guess I might think about it idk...I might give it a part 2 😳

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