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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
aww..my arjun😭.. Ari..beautifully described..the way Arohi handled each situation was great..so knowingly unknowingly she is becuming Arjun's support😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THAT IS BEAUTIFUL!! arifa..girl..u have a talent to keep ur audience captivated.. i can see tht lake, the bench, the letter, arjun's eyes, arohi's hesitation.. all so beautifully portrayed. well done..

he was about to lose his best source of strength in the world and in the process of saving it, he found his best source of comfort.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: aksh4IF

THAT IS BEAUTIFUL!! arifa..girl..u have a talent to keep ur audience captivated.. i can see tht lake, the bench, the letter, arjun's eyes, arohi's hesitation.. all so beautifully portrayed. well done..


he was about to lose his best source of strength in the world and in the process of saving it, he found his best source of comfort.



thank you...😆....was waiting for your comment since you liked it....i was not sure if it was ok or i had gone too far too fast....now m pretty sure of it....😳😉 and if he found his greatest comfort or no that depends....i take inspiration form ekta maiyya kuch bhi ho sakta hai🤣 😛😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi ari.............that was such an intense & romantic part.............nuisances of the first meeting were portrayed beautifully ....and then it flew auto matically. their spending so much time together & going to the part...it was lovely , especially their first hug.............loved it throughly.......😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum updates as always.....da interaction btween arjuhi was so sweet nd cute nd da intense scene btween dem was nice.....arjun gettin jealous bout karan finkin he is arohi's bf was sweet...just w8in waitin 4 arjun to tell bout his parents 2 arohi so she culd support him nd more lovely cute scenes would arise....update soon nd thnx 4 da pm
Edited by XDutchPwincessX - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
hi ari, sorry to take so long in checking out the new post, but definatley the worth the wait. you are so good at writing, it surprises me every time i read a new update, they were both so beautiful, cant wait for next one again
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so sweet update dear loved it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
loved it
plzz update more soon & thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi everyone here is the update for the FF...first of all thank you all very much for liking and appreciating my work it made me very happy and encourages me to write more...constructive critisicm is always welcome...do give me your feedback


DISCLAIMER:

only the story is mine...the charecters and the quotes arent...i'll be using quotes from various places like books,internet etc

okay so more thing before you go on to the story in this chapter text that i write in bold italics like this will denote the conversation between arjun and arohi...

I'll be there for you:

Eventually arjun composed himself'arohi was still adamant to let him walk on his own she was afraid he might break down again'she led him to the bench by catching his hand and supporting him with another hand and made him sit on the bench'but she didn't let go of his hand'she looked into his eyes the pain was on its peak' the sun was setting in the sky'this made arjun thoughtful'arohi had given him enough time and she couldn't see him that way anymore'

"okay arjun I know I don't have the right to ask you but I would like to know what is making you this sad that it fills your eyes with sadness to this magnitude'is there anything I can do to make you feel better?"

"Arohi'I have always taken care of people since I remember no one has ever taken care of me and I m used to it that way there is nothing you can do more over whats the point in sharing something and making you sad as well when there is nothing no one can do about it?"

Arohi had heard her name many times but this time when arjun said it in his silky voice it made her get goosebumps'she had heard it hundreds of times of infinite occasions but she had never felt her name sounding so sweet and special ever before'ughh arohi control yourself first you have to make him feel better'

"oh well theres a first time for everything and you hadn't even met arohi aluwalia till now na'now come on tell me whats bothering you this much'the pain in your eyes whats the story behind it'even if I cant help'I can be there for you'plss arjun'"

Arjun was really touched by her words...he had held his pain in him for so many years'showing rashi that he was strong so she could be happy'pretending to chachu that he didn't need anyone and was independent so that he could be peaceful in his life'now his pain had reached its maximum point and that one moment of feeling that he had lost that letter had given him the final blow'he couldn't hold it in anymore'

"I m sorry arohi'so sorry that you have no idea'this is our first formal meet I should have made you feel special and happy and here I m making you sad with my dukhbhari dastan'but what can I do arohi I cant hold it in anymore'no one in my life knows how much pain I have taken on me'I lost my parents when I was 14 rashi was only 10'that nights memory still gives me nightmares' they had left me and her at home because we had our finals next day and had went to Mumbai for my grandfathers death anniversary'me and rashi were habited to staying alone and they thought it was just a matter of 2 days who knew that those two days would become forever'they were returning home from Mumbai when their plane crashed they were spot dead'when both their bodies were brought home covered with white sheets'rashi was asleep I had gone through so much alone that night chachu came the next day'I was in complete denial I haven't shed a single tear for them till today in some way I felt they were always with me in my house in delhi where we had grown up in our small and beautiful world when I left that house to come here to fulfill my dream of becoming an actor I had lost the feeling of their presence with me'all I have is this last letter they wrote to me and rashi which still gives me the feeling that they are with me and when I saw it fly away from me I felt I was loosing the last thing that connected me to them'now I had nothing I was actually an orphan'it finally struck me that I have no parents no one in this world to take care of me and then my tears just couldn't control themselves 'I have taken care of rashi like my own daughter arohi but there was no one to take care of me cause I never let anyone know that I needed to be taken care of'I have tried to keep rashi as far away from these pains as possible for that I had to take many pains on myself'sometimes I think if rashi wouldn't have been there my life would have been so easy no one to take care of it would have saved me a lot of pain'but then again if she wouldn't have been there I guess I wouldn't have had a life to begin with she is the reason I lived for after my parents if she wouldn't have been there I guess I would have died long back'I guess that's why I love her so much that's why it reflects to anyone who sees us"

Saying this arjun started weeping as if he was that 14 year old child who had just seen the dead bodies of his parents and his relatives plotting how to cheat them and take all their money away'arjun was surrounded by so many people yet he was all alone that night' he couldnt even acknowledge and cry for the death of his parents and now 8 years later here he was finally accepting his pain and feeling it before a stranger a girl whom he had known for less than a week..he felt pathetic about himself'he began to get up to leave'

Arohi's eyes were so clouded with tears that she couldn't even see arjun'she was right about the pain but she hadn't thought his pain was so immense and intense'he had gone through so much and this was just the beginning he had just told her the summary of his very dark childhood she couldn't imagine how the whole of it was'she didn't know how to make it better'she always had ways to make someone smile and happy'she was a writer it was her job to make up and write things that would make people happy and smile'but with arjun it was different'she understood the magnitude of pain that he had kept hidden inside him'if it didn't come out now it would hurt him even more'and then she saw him trying to loosen her grip on his hand and leave'this angered her how much pain did he want to take on himself that he was even walking away from her??she let his hand loose'cupped his face among her two hands and made him look into her eyes'

"Arjun listen to me'its ok to be vulnerable sometimes and let someone else take care of you'I know you cant do that with rashi cause shes your kid sister but you don't have to act strong before me from now on'think me as your friend from today your best friend'I m here for you to share your pain and I will always be there for you'" saying this hugged arjun and let him cry his heart out'his pain was indescribable'she just hugged him even tighter and told him that he should let all his pain out and cry till his tears stop by themselves'she told him accumulated pain hurts more and arjun just hugged her even more tighter than before crying and told her that

"With so much love around me from chachu and rashi also I used to feel all alone in this world cause my smile was a camouflage to hide my pain from them to keep them happy'they never knew me or what I was feeling'today for the first time after my parents I feel like I have someone in my life that I m not alone'thank you so much arohi for saying that u'll be there for me that means alot"

Edited by --Ari-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Arifa..i got ur name right na😊
This one was very heart touching n emotional..loved how arohi supported n took care of arjun😳
i was waiting for ur update and this was quick😛 update soon😊

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