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ASHZWIN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Nice update👏

Looking forward for next scene😊

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rasika_DS

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice one..update soon😃

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myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Thanks a lot for all your posts and encouraging me in my story writing.

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myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Scene11

Rashi suddenly surprised that so many family members visiting her in hospital now and that includes Arohi. She feels something is wrong but cannot understand. She keeps asking everyone but they avoid her questions.

In the night, Makrand goes to give her food and Rashi asks "i think something has happened to Arjun, everyone came to visit me in my room other than Arjun tell me honestly what happened". Makrand feels that she may have some inkling on Arjun's condition and feels that if she sees him she will be fine and come out of depression. Makrand tells her about Arjun.

Rashi starts crying and says "I want to meet Arjun now only to Makrand".

Makrand says to Rashi that in night only the person who takes dinner to patient is allowed and Rashi says she will go with dinner to ICU.

Rashi takes the dinner box and goes into ICU and is shocked seeing Arjun in that condition and starts crying. Arjun tries to console her and says he is absolutely fine and happy that his sister who was not reacting for anything has started signs of improvement and come to meet him. Rashi hugs him and tells him to get well soon and that she will come to meet him often. She then gives him his dinner. Arjun asks her whether she has had dinner and she says no. Arjun tells her to sit and have the food with him and asks permission from nurse and both have dinner together. Arohi sees this from outside and gets to realize how close Rashi is to Arjun and says "now I realize why you reacted so badly after her miscarriage and fall".

Rashi wants to tell Arjun about Gauri pushing her but thinks since he is unwell let me tell once he is fine.

Arjun asks her what she is thinking but she says that "I am thinking of our childhood days we were so happy as kids, wish we could become kids again and carefree".

Some flash backs shown where rashi plays with kids in neighborhood and harassed by other kids and Arjun fights with them. Similarly Rashi and Arjun sitting in school and having lunch together. Arjun helping Rashi in doing homework. Arjun playing holi with Rashi and Michael in childhood. Rashi, Billu, Makrand, Michael and Arjun playing cricket and Rashi getting hurt and Arjun taking her inside and bandaging her leg. Rashi tying Rakhi to Michael and Arjun. etc

Arjun says to Rashi "go and take rest and we will speak tomorrow".

Rashi says "I am fed up of being alone in that room with no one to talk"

Arjun says "i will ask them to shift me also in your room so that we can be together in hospital till I leave".

Rashi leaves to her room and Makrand goes to drop Arohi back to her house.

All ask Arohi how Arjun is feeling and she says that he is fine and Rashi for first time in a month give any reaction-she cried in ICU holding Arjun and spoke to him. All feel happy that Rashi is doing fine. Gauri is tensed.

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

nice...now gauri's brain is going to work double hard to do something!! i guess rashi cant get hurt or anything coz arjun is planning to shift next to her.. am gonna put on my guessing cap now.. well done prem..looking forward to the next bit.. 👍🏼🤓

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myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

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Raj is upset in house because he cannot find his dad. He refuses to have dinner without Arjun. Dadi and Romit try to persuade him to have food but to no avail. They dial Arohi(who is at her parents house) and she says at least have milk before sleeping then Romit will get him to meet Arjun tomorrow. Raj insists on sleeping in Arjun's room only. Its late night and Kumud feels someone trying to wake her from sleep.

She thinks it RPS and nudges him and says "You are 3 big children baap why do not you let me sleep in peace?" RPS in sleepy mood "Did you forget your Animal Planet son, we have 4 children Kumud". She hears a feeble voice and switches on light to see Raj in her room. He says he is scared to sleep alone and to come and sleep with him in Arjun's room. RPS tells Kumud to go but Kumud refuses to go and sleep with him in Arjun's room. Kumud rings and wakes up Romit and tells him to come to their room. Romit comes and asks why she called so late in night. Kumud tells him to take Raj and get him to sleep in his room. Romit takes him along but Raj starts crying saying he will sleep only in Arjun's room, so Romit takes him to Arjun's room and both settle in for the night. Early morning Raj is up very early and ready to go out. He wakes up Romit and says "get up we are not in African jungle for you to sleep through the day". Romit does not want to wake up so early but upon Raj's persistence wakes up. Raj again says he will have breakfast only after he meets his dad.

Both leave for hospital without breakfast. Raj on the way keeps providing finishing touches to a get well soon card in crayons and Romit sees it and praises him saying brother will feel very happy seeing this card. Both reach hospital very early and go to ICU to meet Arjun with breakfast. Arjun is sleeping when both reach his bed and Raj ask Romit "what happened to dad, why so many tubes and needle attached to dad?"

Arjun wakes up and finds both of them and ask Romit why he got Raj to hospital. Romit explains that Raj refused to eat and has not had dinner and breakfast also. He makes Raj sit on Arjun's bed and Raj starts asking innocently "Dad what are these tubes and wires, doesn't it pain for you?". Romit provides breakfast for Arjun and Arjun feeds it to Raj also since he has not had dinner and breakfast.

Nurse comes to take Arjun's vital statistics (BP etc) and Raj keeps asking questions on "what machine is that. Why does it give reading?". Nurse says sit silent in ICU and do not speak much. Raj says to Arjun "when are you coming to house, i do not feel like staying there without you". Arjun says he will come soon. Arjun asks Romit to take care of Raj in his absence. Then Romit and Raj leave ICU.

Raj remembers his drawing and says "I forgot to give and left in car only". Romit and he go and get it and ask nurse to allow them to give it to Arjun. Nurse says the doctor is on rounds and they can hand it to her so that she can give to Arjun but Raj insists and she allows only Raj to go in. Raj goes to Arjun's bed and gives card to Arjun and says dad "i made this get well card for you". Arjun gets emotional seeing the card and wants to hug him but unable to do so and just touches his head in hand. Nurse comes and ask Raj to leave as doctor is coming on rounds and Raj says dad "i will come and meet you later" and leaves. Uncle asks Arjun who the kid is and he says the kid is his. Uncle says but you said you married Arohi 3-4 months back and he says "uncle i may not have given birth to him but we have a father-son bond and the kid thinks i am his dad". Uncle says "bless you Arjun, you are a good person. In this age when own children do not love or care for their parents you are treating someone else child as your own". Arjun thinks "sorry uncle but how can i tell you its not someone else its my own family member's child".

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

oh god serial mein suspence kafi nahi tha u brought the raj mystery here also....but loved the way u potrayed raj he was adorable....m lyking the uncle as well....waitin fo next update....

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

well...prem.. lagta hai.. KMH team nahi..toh tumse toh suspense ka khulasa ho hii jayega..😉 par tumne yeh raj ka suspense laakar accha nahi kiya 😈 ab toh hum din raat KMH team ko chod ke tumpar focus karenge, ki tum agla part kab likhoge!!! just kdding...

awesome update.. luv raj's part n the way u have portrayed his attachment to Arjun.. n i like tht woh Arohi ki baat maan raha hai.. par yeh Arohi.. apne ghar kyun chali gayi?? hamare Raj ko akela chod kar 😭

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Clarification on Arohi

Since Arjun was in hospital, Arohi was in her house. Now that RPS and family has returned she will go back tommorow to RPS house. That's why Raj is alone.