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Anshita

@..anshita..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

awesome....nw arohi should knw d truth..

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indianamerican

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Good job! Thank you for the pm.

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

Hey prem i m back with my comments and feedback...finally m done with all of it...had a very emotional ride through all the chapters....loved every bit of it...U described and showed various emotions and scenarios and situations in a single scene...loved ur detailing and depth analysis of charecters in kmh2 that isnt possible to do in depth in the half an hour tym slot...its grt that we get that from here....love it how u are building up strong relations between arjun-romit,arjun-rps it often happens that wen someone is going away we realise their value in our life u showed that beautifully through this FF...Arjun turning completely white from a grey charecter is something we might not get to c in kmh as at the end he will always be affiliated to rps in some way or the other thankfully u r taking his charecter take a different road which he might not take in the serial...really liked it all....raj is very cute...romit shefu are very sweet...arjun is sweeter and aro is very dumb she needs to put 2+2=4....it was innovative the way u suddenly brought in the law students...its high time arohi does some thinking herself....oh wow and ur story just started matlab theres lots more to come wohooo m eagerly waiting now that i've caught up i can be up to date with it...

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

Scene60 Raj and Romit pulling Arjun's legs

Arjun glancing at Arohi avoiding her seeing him do that.

Raj showing that to Romit and both smiling.

Raj: Lage Raho dad

Arjun turning red as tomato with embrassment and threatening them to stop pulling his legs(by ishaara).

Arohi: What did you say Raj?

Arjun staring at Raj.

Raj starts fumbling: Mom I.............................I

Romit: Nothing babhi, yesterday we were watching Lage Raho Munnabhai. Raj was saying that to bhaiya. Isn't it Raj

Raj: No, looking at Arjun staring and saying Yes, yes i was talking of movie.

Shefali: What does that movie have to do with Arjun, Raj?

Raj: Err Err Shefali aunty, Romit bhaiya will tell

Romit: Hmm Hmm Raj was saying Munnabhai character is is like Arjun bhaiya.

Shefali: What?

Romit: Raj please explain

Raj: Yes, Munnabhai reminds me of dad. So caring

Romit: Selfless

Raj: Loving

Romit: Always taking away others pain on himself and givng others smile

Raj: Always thinking of others

Romit: Hiding his feelings and always smiling

Raj: Tough on outside softie on inside like Munnabhai

Arjun: Enough you both stop it. (Feeling akward)

Shefali: So true. Arohi you are so lucky.

Turning to Arjun

Shefali: I also wish my husband is like you Arjun, but i know people like you are very rare one in crores. I am so happy you are my friend.

Arjun feeling akward again and saying "You people stop praising me and eat your lunch"

They finish lunch and go to watch movie "No one killed Jessica".

Arohi and Arjun sitting with Raj in middle. Arjun keeps on glancing to Arohi in theatre.

Some scenes remind Arohi of court argument in her supari case.

Arjun saying: Reputed my Lord, do not tie a 18 year old kid in police station and give him electric shocks till he faints and keep repeating it for 2 days though that boy pleads innocence. Reputed people do not remove grudge against one family member on other family members. Alhuwaliah family do not like me because i married their daughter against their wishes. But they removed that grudge on my kid brother Romit and tortured him so bady. My brother Romit cannot sleep properly in night and gets up feeling scared. Who will give back his peaceful sleep and his lost innocence back to him? These reputed Alhuwaliah's

Arohi remembers above dialogue and looks at Arjun who is eating popcorn which Raj is putting in his mouth. She looks at Romit who is engrossed in movie and has tears in eyes. Movie ends and Arjun drops them back in car.

Arohi is sitting at back with Raj and Shefali. Arjun keeps looking at her through side mirror in car and about to hit a person crossing on road. Luckily Romit shouts "Bhaiya" and he stops the car putting break.

Arjun gets down and tells person: Sorry, it was my mistake

People: Are you blind?, These rich people think our life has no value.

Romit getting out: Sorry, bhaiya was distracted by my talking

People: OK, next time tell you brother not to drive car when distracted

Both sit and start driving

Raj: Romit bhaiya, you never spoke to dad, how was he distracted?

Romit: My voice is not the only distraction in car Romit and laughing

Arjun: Romit and staring at him

Raj: I did not understand. Please explain bhaiya

Romit: I will go to house and explain in detail.

Raj: No tell me now only

Arjun: Raj beta, you both come home. I will explain in detail to both of you what it meant

Raj getting scared and keeping quiet

Arjun arrives at Arohi house and she gets down from car and hugs Raj and tells bye to Romit and Shefali.

Arjun thinking "Good Night and sweet dreams Arohi" and looking at her

Arohi thinking "Bad dreams Arjun"

Gauri and Arohi's mother watching this and seeing Arjun looking at her from car.

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: myviewprem

Aksh thanks a lot for warning me in advance

I will be happiest to hear bak bak. Woh kya hai na meri koi behen nahi hai na toh really miss bak bak

lol prem, u have no idea wat u r getting into.. don't worry.. behen na hone ki har kasar MLSA puri karedenge.. 😈😈😈😈 this is gonna be sooo much fun!! 😛

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

uff... iss ladki ka mein kya karun!!!! "Bad Dreamz??!?!!?".. after all this she musters that thought?!?! n yeh male mother teresa.. kab sudhrega buddhuram!! arohi ke chakkar mein na jaane road pe kitne log apni taange tudva lenge!!! 😆.. ab toh i wanna ask all those virtual ppl in ur story-world to send arohi flowers wid 'get well soon' cards like in Lage Raho..!! 😆 she reaaaallly needs some reality check this girl!!..

so gauri n amrit see arjun dropping them home and they notice arjun staring at arohi.. gauri's mind -- idle mind, devil's workshop eh?.. it's saazish time at Ullu Nagar peeps!! watch out.. chachi 420 is gonna do something.. prem hopefully her char stays the same as in the show.. that is.. she plans something against arjuhi n it blows up in her face 😈

gud update.. loved romit n raj n shefu!! i hope they r able to penetrate the thick skull of arohi's n make her see the truth that she so determinedly is ignoring!!!

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

what are gauri and amrit doing spying on arohi like she's some 5 year old... i mean its not like on the show where arohi is held captive! she's in the house on her own will! great part.. LOVE ARJUN! bechara lost in aro's love:( wonder when arohi will start wishing arjun sweet dreams...

continue soon

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Scene61 Surprise party for Arjun

Arjun, Romit and Raj return home and the house is very dark. Suddenly the lights come on and surprise there is a party in house.

RPs goes forward and says "Hey Arjun, welcome home. Its a surprise party. And this is for you" and he shows towards Dadi. Rashi is sitting with Dadi. Arjun and Romit shocked. Arjun goes to Rashi and hugs her tightly. She does not respond much. RPS comes and keeps his hand on Arjun shoulder. Arjun gets up and sees RPS questioningly.

RPS takes him to the side and says

RPS: Doctor's said Rashi may start responding in the family environment. That's why i got her back home

Arjun: I am so happy dad, Rashi is here. I will miss Rashi a lot.

RPS: I know, you can come over and meet her.

RPS: Hope you like the surprise and party

Arjun: Yes, thanks dad

Mikhael is so happy at the party all are surprised that someone who is always so moody is so happy. Kumud and Jignesh are over the moon.

RPS and Kumud laughing and talking with each other.

Arjun goes to them and says "I am so happy to see you both laughing together"

Kumud "Your dad and happy, he has been sulking and moody every since he heard you are leaving the house in private. Last time you left house for that girl Arohi although Rudra said outside "Mujhe koi faraq nahi padtha" was completely different in that one week you were not in house. And......"

RPS interrupts: Kumud now stop your complaints. My God, your mom she just has to get opportunity to speak something against me.

Arjun smiles and thinks "I know dad, mom is telling truth about you and hence you cut her off"

Mikhael joins in saying "What secret discussions are going on Mom?"

RPS: See this mom ka beta, getting insecure that his mom will join our gang, right Arjun (pulling Mikhael leg)

Arjun: Right dad, but i seriously have to tell you Mikhael "Mom loves me more" right mom(pulling Mikhael leg)

Romit: Wrong, neither she loves you nor Mikhael bhaiya. Mom loves me the most. Right mom

Jignesh joins in with Rashi: I am not sure who is mom favourite, but dad's laadla is definetly Arjun. Right dad

Romit: Dad and favourites. No guesses for that. You can say Arjun bhaiya and then Rashi didi are his favourites. All look at RPS for answers.

RPS: All my four kids are my favourites

Kumud, Mikhael and Jignesh Smirk

Romit: Lets have a family photo please. They take one pic of every one.

Romit: One min I want one with all my siblings and mom and dad.One picture which i will cherish for life. Jiju please take the pic.

And RPS and Kumud stand in center. Rashi and Arjun on RPS side and Mikhael and Romit on Kumud side. And Jignesh clicks picture.

Romit: And one only with all my brothers and sister please jiju

And Arjun and Mikhael stand in end and Rashi and Romit in center. And Jignesh clicks picture

Dadi is like "Oye, mummy daddy ke ladlon. Dadi ko bhul gaye" And one more pic with dadi and grandkids.

Romit is like "One last one with my brothers only"

Mikhael is like: Romit.........................what will you do with so many pics

Romit: You never know bhaiya. I want to treasure this day pleaseeeeeee

Mikhael: Ok, one last

Mikhael in center and Romit and Arjun on both sides.

Romit: One minute Jiju. Picture is incomplete. What bhaiya you are not even holding me? Looks like three strangers and not brothers are posing.

Mikhael puts hand on Romit shoulder. Mikhael is hesitant to place hand on Arjun shoulder. Finally he places hands on Arjun's shoulder and they smile. Jignesh clicks the picture.

Everyone are about to withdraw when

RPS observing this says "Hold on. Jignesh. Take one with all the boys gang of our house. What say boys-Arjun, Mikhael, Romit?"

Jignesh angry that he is not included by RPS in boys gang.

Definetly dad say all three in unison.

RPS: And i want this picture on my office table tommorow

Jignesh: OK dad

RPS in center, Arjun on right and Mikhael on left and Romit sits down in front and picture clicked

Raj: All elders taking pictures and not including me and all laugh.

Raj joins the four and another picture.

RPS: Now enough of pictures. Let's go have dinner

All have dinner and its all Arjun's favourite dishes like Kheer, Biryani, cutlets etc

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago