New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 34

hey!!!

Originally posted by: premeerrock

unreserved! 😃 em da first one to commment!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yaayaaaaaayy!!!! lolx! yaya...woo hoo for u!! 👏👏

hey jaz! first of all welcome back wid a bang too as da update was awesome! 🤗 loved prem and heer's interaction! 😳😳 the kissing scene was too good! i think i forgot to breath wen i read it!😆 partly coz i cldnt belive tht she was kissing him back!!! 😆😆god both of dem are sooo in love wid each oder.. it showed so clearly wen dey talked of old times... i mean it has been four years n both of dem noe every detail to perfection!!! 😳 ya...its not easy forget your first love...even if prem doesnt admit it...he loves her...hes just stubborn...thats all...😉😉 he he😳 awwww prem even remembered da last time he laughed so hard! my heart went out to him wen he said tht it was da last time he had laughed so hard! poor guy! n i cant believe he totally made a jerk out of himself in front of heer! "wat abt lunch!?" dude buck up! u are far from getting her if u go on like dis! i felt like slapping him n i noe tht my emotions are shared wid heer and every oder reader of dis ff😆😆 lol...ya...i was thinking that a few of you would want to smack him for the stunt tha the pulled...lmao...saab ke saab bohot violent hai... 😉😉 buh i understand..... he hasnt done dis before n ppl do tend to say wrong things at da wrong time! i hope prem realizes tht n clears his mistake coz i noe now heer wnt even go near him! so much for improving his image in her eyes! 🤔 anyway! okay so y did preet had to be sooo sweet and kill heer wid da guilt tht she kissed her ex! gosh! poor heer! she must be feeling so terrible and disgusted wid herself n da cherry on da top is tht prem agn proved th he is a jerk to her ya....preet is just like the best guy ever!! i mean omg...i want someone like him..*fingers corssed* that i meet someone like him soon...*swoon* 😉😆😆 ! prem! can sum1 pls giv him sum tips as to wat to say n at wat time?! dis guy wil have me pulling out ma hair if dis continues😆😆 okay i noe em over reacting! buh its kinda hard to take in tht she hates him u noe😳😳 n loves preet tht is sumfin i really dunt want to think abt!!! i have one question though.... does heer still love prem n if she does thn has she realized it yet tht after all dis time she still loves him???!! pls do answer! cant wa8 to noe how da story wil proceed cz em clueless!😊 do continue soon! well...as for the answer...you have to wait to see how the story unfolds....as for prem and his idiocy...hmm....lets just say...he still has some idiotic tendencies 😛😛😛...you will see what i mean as the story progresses 😉

love

hiba😊

p.s: whao thts long!! the longer the better...i LOVE IT!!! 😳

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
Awesum update
loved it
tooooo goooood
loved the way u described it

Originally posted by: shabo24

PREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET! 😭shabbooooooooooooooooo!!! 😆

What a sweetheart. Oh, he made me cry with this update (yes I cried -pish posh) the lil ways he was trying to get "withHeer" with the messages and the 2nd message on the answering machine made me laugh - so adorable. hai naa...im totally in love with him!! ...haila...cried...like real tears 😲😲😲...omg...if this made you cry...aage aage kya hoga...😉😉😉

But wow, Prem and Heer's chemistry. ☺️ That was ... dude, I got no words. Just wow. The slow hesitation then the way they were kinda lured into the past. :) besharam....chemistry...romance...tauba...im spoiling all of you 😛

God that part gave me shivers. I've told you again and again I love your writing, one of my fave fanfic writers and you could take years to update and I would still find my way back here to read and comment! :) i love you yaar...you are so awesome!!! i know i update rarely...but i just hope the waits are worth it 😳😳😳

Congrats on graduation! *runs to comment on Sau Dard* 😆😆 ive gotta run to reply to the comments and then post as well 😆😆😆

--shabz

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

WOW!! it was a good Update after such along time... Seems like Heer can not stay away from Prem and Vice Versa, but she is not admitting it.... Prem and Heer's part was good and Preet seems to love Heer alot too... He really cares for her.... Heer must be having alot of diffuculty in dealing with him I guess...

will be waiting for your PM for your next update...

Originally posted by: meiskan

You updated! I recently began reading and caught up to all the chapters and I love this FF! Ahh, why does Preet have to be a sweetheart? 😔 Going on the radio like that...he knows Heer inside out! Anyways , other than Preet - 😆- yay...new reader...woo hoo...sorry for the delay...i hope you are still interested..and as for Preet..he is a dream isnt he...😳😳😳

Heer and Prem....wow! loved the way you described everything and it was pretty cute how Heer remembered the Three Stooges marathon....😛 And how Prem knew it was exactly Three weeks before she left him...😔 But anyways, above all I love this FF and I love how you write this FF, so when you update next I'll be eagerly reading! 😊 the next update is coming ...just working out a few kinks and what not....it will be posted as soon as it is ready 😳😳 thanks for taking the time to read and comment...you're a doll!!! 😃

Originally posted by: sweetdamage

OMG!!!....awesome comeback, with a doubly awesome part! 😉😆....loved it!...the emotions of regret, confusion...everything was described so well, hon!...I loved how sweet Preet is!...it almost breaks MY heart to know that Heer still loves Prem, but is engaged to Preet...it will definitely break his heart, and that would be so sad, cause he is such a loveable character!...loving the aggressive, playboy Prem...loved Heer's mum, haha all the messages and notes made me laugh soo hard!! 😆😆

great going Jaz, loved it!...please do update soon! 😃 thanks for reading and commenting...really appreciate it...i love the little messages too...especially preets second one 😆😆 as for breaking his heart...im working on possible solutions...he he...ill try my best to keep his heart in tact 😉😉

PS: will we be seeing a jealous Prem soon?...I love seeing Prem jealous!😃 oh you wait and watch...his jealousy knows no bounds...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😉

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
ur back...🤗 that was an amazing update. omg...preet is so cute. he dedicated a song for her...thats so romantic. continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: katane

dear jaz

finally,you did update again, we had been miss you. it was realy great .when prem will know about his son, what willbe his reaction then?

i illbe waiting for your update.

on the best

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey di that was a great part! glas to read this after a long time! wonder what will happen next...cant wait for the next part! thanks for the PM..will be waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: angel82

Jaz dear , you updates finally !!! wow and that too what an update........ he he..i know...i take forever 😳😳

PRem !!😍 hot as usual.... you know it 😳

He still remembers exactly the time they had such a laugh....He loves her bt why isnt he able to express it to her in the right way...is it coz he never been 'in love' before...i want to see him confess soon and I want to know what would be HEer's reaction....He should let her know how incomplete he feels without her.... he cant express it because he still denies it...denial is his enemy but he just cant see it...or he refuses to see it...im not sure which...😆😆😆

Preet !! he is such a sweetheart....Why Jaz, why are u making him soo sweet that it becomes difficult for heer to break his heart.... what do you say...Preet or Prem...i mean look at the facts...Prem=jerk...and Preet= *sigh* dream boy!!! 😍

Heer still hasnt worn the ring ha? but they are engaged rite or is it supposed to be their wedding ring? or has she asked him for some time more?they are engaged...she has said yes...but she hesitates to wear the ring...and since Preet knows all about her past and her feelings...he is giving her space...is he just a doll or what?! 😳😳

Aah , aarav's away at the camp, I hd forgotten that....I would also like to read Aarav's meeting with PRem and their little moments....

basically I want Heer and PRem to be together soon 😆 u know I'm a sucker for premeer😆 well...i guess i got the answer to my previous question 😆😆😆 you are premeer all the way...😉

oh I loved the premeer scene in this update...it was hot !! he he...glad you enjoyed it 😳

Originally posted by: fungrl

I love Preet, he is like perfect...................would it be consider cheating Prem if I want Preet to be happy, but if Preet is happy that means he gets Heer and Prem would be sad, and Heer will have unresolved emotions so she'll be sad, if she is sad than Preet'll be sad.............so confusing na............your characters are so well written that I want all of them to have a fariy tale lives.........alright enough of my bakwas Heer's reaction to Prem's Kiss was spot on, and Heer's parents are so worrisome, but just like real parents...............Prem's hot as usual, but Preet is shuch a sweetheart, I don't want him heartbroken

The update was awesome Jaz, thanx for the PM and I hope to devor the next update soon😛

Originally posted by: zaara06

YAY!!! An update!!👏 👏 👏 yaar...kahaan ho...havent heard from you in a while...🤗

And what an update it was.Heer!!!!! If she got any further with Prem, i would have killed you.... not her sinse it is your update!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 Only kidding, but you know i am rooting for Preet and Heer to be together in this ff.... and you also know i think this Preet is a darling, and he doesn't dissapoint in this update. The messages where really sweet and the flowers the request on the radio... the way he knew Heer was still worried about Arav. It was written really well. 😆😆😆 you are my Preet-Heer lover...and i love you for that...and tauba...any further...chi...sure she may (or i may) get carried away...but tauba...i have limits too...i just needed something spectacular to make Heer realize what Preet means to her 😉😉 mission accomplished...dont u say 😛

Heers emotions where shown really well too, all the emotions she went through were written out very well. I still think she should forget Prem and stay with Preet, come on the guy left her after using her for one thing and now he wants her back, how much years later????? Preet Heer all the way... he is the one who stood by her through thick and thin. Jaz please don't do this to Poor Preet, you make him seem soo good just to then make him the biggest dissapointment of his fiance leaving him for someone else... how mean!!!!😲 (is the guilt trip working yet or shall i carry on???? I will deffinately carry on after the next update). he he...guilt trip is having some effects but i may need more doses...after all...kis desh is all about Premeer is it not 😉😉😉...lets see what else you can dish out...bring it on yaar...i cant wait 😛

On the contarary to other readers i don't like this Prem!!!!😕 😕 And i think i have stated the reasons above so i need not say more!!!! lol...ya...im not a prem fan in this ff either...hes more like a jerk than a lover...did that make any sense 🤔...oh wells...next update soon...promise 😳😳

Update soon!😊

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

omg u have amazing ffs!!i just read another one of yours and im loving it!!i luv this how its so different from allll the other FFS the modernization the details the everythign wonderful!

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

cookies n creme!!!

Originally posted by: resham12345

great update quickly please
You are a great writer and ur ff is really cool
it is quite modern compared to the other ffs
love
resham

Originally posted by: 268143

thanx soo much 4 da PM .......... you finally update n wat a update !!! i loved it all !!! plz dnt tke dis long 2 update again will w8 4 ur PM 2 tell me uve updated soon i hope 😛

Originally posted by: zaibun

poor heer hope arav comes bck soon and i want premeer together soon plss update soon and keep up the amazing job

Originally posted by: sohail2additi

lovely emotions

awesomeeeeee

like a flowers

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

hey, this is an awesome ff!!! i really like it!!! its so good..anyways, could u add me to the pm list?

Originally posted by: hil4eva

hi!! omggg!! lol..i did sumthing very stupid..u had a few updates that i did not read and then imessaged u asking when ur gonna update when i accidentaly did not read some previous ones and respond!! (sorry abt da stupidity jazz)lol..well ..thank u 4 updating....so far all the updates have been,awesome,gr8..i luv guys like u have desribed in prem's character..dont ask me why..thats my weakness..lol..and i can relate to heer's weaknes well..awesome updates..and as for this update..a lil hot..well saying lil wud be an understatement..but gr8 update..but c'mon heer!! u gotta hve sum self respect but then again its the man she luved so much..so i totally understand...gr8 update once again..hopefully u wont make wait too long..but its worth the wait :)