New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#321

Jaz dear , you updates finally !!! wow and that too what an update........

PRem !!😍 hot as usual....

He still remembers exactly the time they had such a laugh....He loves her bt why isnt he able to express it to her in the right way...is it coz he never been 'in love' before...i want to see him confess soon and I want to know what would be HEer's reaction....He should let her know how incomplete he feels without her....

Preet !! he is such a sweetheart....Why Jaz, why are u making him soo sweet that it becomes difficult for heer to break his heart....

Heer still hasnt worn the ring ha? but they are engaged rite or is it supposed to be their wedding ring? or has she asked him for some time more?

Aah , aarav's away at the camp, I hd forgotten that....I would also like to read Aarav's meeting with PRem and their little moments....

basically I want Heer and PRem to be together soon 😆 u know I'm a sucker for premeer😆

oh I loved the premeer scene in this update...it was hot !!

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fungrl

@fungrl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#322

I love Preet, he is like perfect...................would it be consider cheating Prem if I want Preet to be happy, but if Preet is happy that means he gets Heer and Prem would be sad, and Heer will have unresolved emotions so she'll be sad, if she is sad than Preet'll be sad.............so confusing na............your characters are so well written that I want all of them to have a fariy tale lives.........alright enough of my bakwas Heer's reaction to Prem's Kiss was spot on, and Heer's parents are so worrisome, but just like real parents...............Prem's hot as usual, but Preet is shuch a sweetheart, I don't want him heartbroken

The update was awesome Jaz, thanx for the PM and I hope to devor the next update soon😛

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zaara006

@zaara006

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#323

YAY!!! An update!!👏 👏 👏

And what an update it was.Heer!!!!! If she got any further with Prem, i would have killed you.... not her sinse it is your update!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 Only kidding, but you know i am rooting for Preet and Heer to be together in this ff.... and you also know i think this Preet is a darling, and he doesn't dissapoint in this update. The messages where really sweet and the flowers the request on the radio... the way he knew Heer was still worried about Arav. It was written really well.

Heers emotions where shown really well too, all the emotions she went through were written out very well. I still think she should forget Prem and stay with Preet, come on the guy left her after using her for one thing and now he wants her back, how much years later????? Preet Heer all the way... he is the one who stood by her through thick and thin. Jaz please don't do this to Poor Preet, you make him seem soo good just to then make him the biggest dissapointment of his fiance leaving him for someone else... how mean!!!!😲 (is the guilt trip working yet or shall i carry on???? I will deffinately carry on after the next update).

On the contarary to other readers i don't like this Prem!!!!😕 😕 And i think i have stated the reasons above so i need not say more!!!!

Update soon!😊

Edited by zaara006 - 16 years ago

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maryam

@aishu_fan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#324

omg u have amazing ffs!!i just read another one of yours and im loving it!!i luv this how its so different from allll the other FFS the modernization the details the everythign wonderful!

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resham12345

@resham12345

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#325

great update quickly please
You are a great writer and ur ff is really cool
it is quite modern compared to the other ffs
love
resham

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268143

@268143

Master

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#326

thanx soo much 4 da PM .......... you finally update n wat a update !!! i loved it all !!! plz dnt tke dis long 2 update again will w8 4 ur PM 2 tell me uve updated soon i hope 😛

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#327

poor heer hope arav comes bck soon and i want premeer together soon plss update soon and keep up the amazing job

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sohail2additi

@sohail2additi

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: zaibun
poor heer hope arav comes bck soon and i want premeer together soon plss update soon and keep up the amazing job

⭐️

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@lovely_lady

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#329

hey, this is an awesome ff!!! i really like it!!! its so good..anyways, could u add me to the pm list?

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Hilary

@hil4eva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#330

hi!! omggg!! lol..i did sumthing very stupid..u had a few updates that i did not read and then imessaged u asking when ur gonna update when i accidentaly did not read some previous ones and respond!! (sorry abt da stupidity jazz)lol..well ..thank u 4 updating....so far all the updates have been,awesome,gr8..i luv guys like u have desribed in prem's character..dont ask me why..thats my weakness..lol..and i can relate to heer's weaknes well..awesome updates..and as for this update..a lil hot..well saying lil wud be an understatement..but gr8 update..but c'mon heer!! u gotta hve sum self respect but then again its the man she luved so much..so i totally understand...gr8 update once again..hopefully u wont make wait too long..but its worth the wait :)

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