Prem shouts at Heer!!! - Page 2

wooww this was amazing... the dialogues you wrote sounded just like Prem and Heer... you done a superb job.....
"Tumhe haq hai Prem." i loved that... he has the right to.... yep he surely does...
keep it up... 👏 👏 👏

It's superb.I just loved the dialogues.U r a very good writer.

Originally posted by: Keanufan

Scene 3It's raining heavily when Prem returns 2 the chawl totally drenched."Aap to poore bheeg chuke hain.jaldi se kapde badal lijiye nahin to phir se beemaar ho jayenge."Meher shows a considerate gesturePrem does not pay heed 2 her advice and asks"Heer kahan hai?"He asks seriously."Di andar hain,aaj shayad unki tabiyat kuch theek nahin hai."Prem walks 2 her room all wet."Arre...kya hua?Pehle.."but Meher halts sensing that something is not right.Heer is sitting down with a photo of her parents in her hand."Ab tabiyat kaisi hai Heer?"Prem asks sarcastically."Theek hai par tum.."But Prem cuts her short and asks in a slightly raised tone"Kya main itna begaana ho gaya hoon ki tumhaare aansuoon par bhi mera hak nahin rah gaya?""Kya hua?" Heer tries pretending normal."Kya hua?"Prem screams with clenched fists and continues"yeh sawaal mujhe tumse poochna chahiye?""Prem tum bheeg chuke ho pehle kapde badal lo nahin to thand lag jayaegi."Heer answers in a calm tone."Mar to nahin jaunga."Prem answers in rage.He moves forward and pulls Heer with a jerk with a tight grip on her arms."Prem!!"She gives a cry of pain."Kyon gayi thi tum Bauji ke paas?"The question by Prem leaves Heer stunned."Chaunk gayi ki mujhe kaise pata, main tumhaara aks hoon,aur apne aks se kuch bhi chupaana naamumkin hai.""Jawaab do kyon gayi thi wahan?Mere hisse ki zillat sehne, ..""Nahin Prem main to bas maafi maangne gayi thi.""Aur badle mein dard ki yeh saugaat lekar lauti ho,maine to tumse nahin kaha tha...""Bina kahe zazbaaton ko samajhna hi to pyaar hai Prem.""Mujhe itna mahaan banane ki koi zaroorat nahi...mere liye khud ko qurbaan karne ki koi zaroorat nahin..kyonki tumhaare bina main adhoora hoon."Prem leaves the room.It's late in the night."Di aapne subah se kuch nahin khaaya chal ke kuch khaa lijiye."Meher requests Heer"Prem ne khaa liya?"Heer asks with a worried look on her face."Nahin woh to so gaye.Bahut thak gaye honge.""To phir main kaise khaa sakti hoon?"Heer replies."Phir bhi di.."Meher tries persuading her."Tu jaake so jaa main khaa loongi.""Agar woh nahin jage to?"Meher insists."Tu so jaa."Meher goes 2 sleep.Prem is standing on the terrace,he feels a shadow in the dark. He thinks it is Meher."Tum so jao Meher mujhe bhookh nahin.""Meher so chuki hai."Heer informs him.Prem turns around and walks down without reacting 2 Heer's statement.Scene 4It's 3'oclock in the morning and Heer is still all awake in her room.Meher is fast asleep beside her. Heer hears a sound in the kitchen.She walks into the kitchen and sees

Prem standing there with a glass of water."Tum soye nahin?""Tumhe jaga ke main khud chain se kaise so sakta hoon?""Yeh dawayee kyon kha rahe ho?"Heer asks seeing a tablet in his hand."Sar mein bahut dard ho raha hai.""Main chai bana deti hoon usse aaram milega."Heer starts preparing tea.After a while Heer and Prem are sitting in the verandah.Heer is gently massaging his head.Heer decides 2 leave thinking Prem has fallen asleep.But Prem holds her hand."Mujhe maaf kar do Heer,us waqt main..""Tumhe haq hai Prem."Prem gently smiles at her and runs his fingers through her locks.Heer starts feeling shy but Prem draws her close and Heer rests her head on her shoulders.Prem gives a

deep sigh."Sach kahoon Heer mujhme tumhari tarah bardaasht karne ki taakat nahin.Magar jab se tum meri zindagi mein aayi ho maine apne aap ko pehchaana hai.Main yeh nahin

kehta ki tumne mujhe badla hai. Kyonki pyaar ek doosre ko badalne ka nahin ek doosre ke zeene ki wajah ban ne ka naam hai.Aur tum meri jeene ki wajah ho.Tumhe

khush dekhne ke liye agar mujhe marna bhi..."But Heer shuts Prem's lips with her fingers."Mujhe aisi khushi nahin chahiye jisme tumhaara saath na ho.""Heer toh Prem ki rag rag mein hai,Heer Prem ke dil ki dhadkan hai,dhadkan ko dil se juda karke rakhna naamumkin hai.Yeh Heer aur Ranjha ki kahaani nahin jisme Ranjha

Heer se juda ho jaata hai. Yeh Prem aur Heer ki dastaan hain jinhe koi,jo hamesha saath the aur saath rahenge."Prem tightens her arms around Heer and the world around doesn't exist for them temporarily.Song in backgroundBahon ke darmyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain..This was my version of Monday's Epi,just 4 fun,continued from "Heer turns brave on Monday"

👏WOW!Great!I enjoyed it very much.2days epi dissapointed me😔but ur post made my night now i can sleep well.Thanks alot.Great job👍🏼the dialogue was awosome!I just love it👏

hey its awsum dear.... its fantastic... u r v gud writer..thanks for the update... thanks...u deserve this 👏

Wow!! Kya dialogues like tumne. Bilkool Prem aur Heer ke tara the. I loved every single bit of it. There was nothing missing in here. Keep writing more scenes like these please. 😳

Durga

Wooooowww.. This scene was just too good!! 👏 👏 I loved all the dialouges, and everything.. Great job!! 👏 👏 If your planning on continuing it, continue soon! 😃