FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 15

u always rite in the last...kaisa laga...jaldi batao??? i really like it...

When she gets no answer she repeats this time in a little angry tone-- Preet tu kahaan hai?.....................Kuch bolta kyun nahiin?.................Preet!?

Preet who didn't listen the first time realizes who it was now……………….and he begins to cry……………..unconsolably………………

He sobs like a small kid fearing the worst-- Maa………………(words seemed to have got caught up in his throat)………….Prem bhaiya ki tabiyat…………………..bahot kharaa hai (he sobs)……………….vo………vo…………..hospital mein hain…………….Maa unhein kuch nahiin hoga naa?..................

Prem is too taken aback to say anything…………………but realizing at the same time that her younger son was all tears she tries to reassure him saying-- Kuch………….Kuch nahiin hoga humaare Prem ko…………..Suna tune kuch nahiin hoga (Preet nods his head still crying)………..Tu usske paas hi rehnaa beta aur……………aur himmat matt haarnaa…………………aur haan………….(Lalit comes from behind an listens now)……….Preet…………..Meher aur Heer ke bhi saath rehnaa………………unkaa khayaal rakhna…………..Theek hai?

Preet says a yes nodding his head-- Theek hai maa……………main phone rakhta hoon……….(and he keeps the phone down).

Prem's mom who had tried her level best to hide her fear and worry from Preet……………..gives in…..and breaks down finally and is crying……………….sobbing she turns around…………….only to find her husband looking at her angrily……………..

Lalit Juneja continued to glare at his wife as he walked towards her and says-- Gaaytri…………..mainne tumhe uss ladke se sab rishtey todne yaa phir mujhe chodne ko kaha tha……..aur jahaan takk mujhe yaad hai…………….tumne mere saath rehna chuna tha……………..aur sirf tumhe hii nahiin……………iss ghar ke har sadasya…………ko yehi kaha tha………..phir kya main jaan sakta hoon kii Preet itni raat gaye………………..Uss Prem kii premika aur usski behen ke saath kya kar raha hai?................

Prem's mom tries to ignore her husband's cheap comments but this angers him even more and he literally shouts at her saying-- Main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon Gaytri…………..Jawaab do!............Prem's mom has had it enough and so she decides to say it all……….speak up……and she does……….breaking the silence she had chosen in the past few unfortunate days………………..

She replies angrily, frustatedly. Worriedly and accusingly-- Kya sunna chahte hain aap……………Abb kya jaanna chahte hainjab uss bete ka shraad kar chuke hain……………….toh phir aaj agga wahi beta…………….zindagi aur maut ke beech ladd raha hai………..toh isse aapko kya?..............Yehi chahte the naa aap?............Toh lijiye aapne khoob nibhaaya apna pita hone kaa farz…………Badkismat toh vo bechaara mera beta hai……………jiskaa apna pita hii ajj usska dushman bann baitha hai…………………

Lalit Juneja is shocked and he listens silently as Prem's mom continues with tears In her eyes—Aur Preet……..Preet apne ussi bhai ke paas hai……………jiskii ungli padakkar chalna seekha tha……………jisse vo aapse bhi zyaada manta hai………………Usske paas hai……………………..Aapney uss din, mujhe apne bete aur apne suhaag mein se kisi ek ko chunne ke liye kaha tha naa?...................Aaj main aapse kahe deti hoon……………..aggar mere bete ko kuch hua naa toh usske zimedaar…………..sirf aap hongein (she says pointing her finger towards him)……………………………aur vo din mera aapke saath iss ghar mein aakhri din hoga…………………Isliye agar aaj ke baad aapko mera saath chahiye toh…………….toh phir yehi haath jo uss din aapne sabke saamne…….Prem ka shraad karne ke liye uthaaye the naa…………unhein aaj ussi Prem kii zindagi aur salaamiyat kii dua maangney ke liye uthaiye……………………

With that she leave from there……………..

(Alright guys tell me iss part ke dialogues kaise lagey pata hai I've worked really hard on them so I only hope u guys like it…………….Tabhi toh kal post nahiin kar paayi......inhein sochne mein waqt lag gaya............

Waise Prem's mom deserves a three cheers yaar…………..)

wonderful update.....the dialogues were perfect....they were very realistic.......good job......I really liked it when Gayathri gave nice to Lallu...

hi...today i started ur FF and u know its really very nice instead of show yaar...ekta dekh aur seeklo yaar...how to create a show??? creative headssss kya aap kabhi bhi aisa show ko soch liyaa...think in this way so that story ll be interesting...always showing bad and twists is not mean a love story...love story means u have to show love n affection like this...see how much affectionately she had written and narated each every scene...uff do noe when u will understand all these...

Thanx a lot angel82. Mujhe Bhot khsi hai yaar kii u found the dialogues realistic…….Sach mein inhein likhne mein bada time laga……But I'm glad the efforts have been fruitful. Thanx once again dear………

First of all a very warm welcome to u sillu dear……..as u r new to my FF…….Ur comments r really overwhelming…and I only hope I continue to live upto ur expetations……….I'm so very humbled by ur views dear that I don't have anymore words………..Next part I'll be posting this weekend………Looking forward to ur comments…….till then take care.

Thanx tanyaa….so u r back from school? Anyways I'm glad u liked this part as well……..Next part to hiss weeknd par post karoongi till then enjoy urself as now its Prem's turn…….to entertain u.